Feedback from Dr. Aeon

Submitting my one arc # 107498. Thanks very much.

Arc 2595: The Extadine Lab.

ArcID: 1197 "Clowns, Fast Food, and McArchvillain"

"Pumpkin Peril" #139708. Four missions of light-hearted adventure.

(Gee I hope that number is right - I'm at work and got it off my SG's private bulletin board. I hope it hasn't changed.)

Arc #2460
Paragon City VillainCon 2009

Oohh, Official feedback. I could use that. =P

My arc is in my sig, but I'll post it again anyways.

Arc ID - 223631: Becoming a villain

Sure I'll toss mine into the hat.

Something comes to Yarmouth Arc# 58812

I know the odds are against me, but I'm going to offer my Arc, Stealing Science: ID #58816.

It's essentially the background story for a lot of my Villains, who exist thanks to Dr. Aeon.

*rubs nose*

Say... what's this brown stuff?

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Biggest Troll on the forums? I'll give you a hint:

Why not, I'll buy a lottery ticket.


Talos Vice
Arc ID: 338380
Keywords: Solo Friendly, Drama, Mystery
Morality: Heroic
Level range: 15-20
Description: An 80s instrumental blares as the camera pans over scenes of Talos Island: windsurfers on the water, the Talos statue, shoppers in Wentworth's, bikini babes, sports cars racing down the Argo Highway, a speedboat bouncing on the waves. A title card appears over the waters racing below: TALOS VICE



I won't claim this is my "best" arc; but it's the one that needs feedback the most.

This should be cool, try my villain arc

Marked Man - 3463
After a routine job goes wrong, you're now marked by an immortal demon. You'll have to discover how to get him off your back or you'll meet your end sooner or later!

I'll submit The Echo, Arc ID in my Sig.

I wrote it before the MA was launched, and then adjusted it and, well, you can tell from its ID how 'old' it is.

Eco.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samuel_Tow [The Incarnate System is] Jack Emmert all over again, only this time it's not "1 hero = 3 white minions" it's "1 hero = 3 white rocks."

I'll throw my hat in the ring. My arc is called Reflections of Spirit and the ID is 66477.

Title: Dr. Quaterfield Task Force
Arc ID: 258384
Creator’s Global Name: @Cai

Ooo... redname feedback! Mind playing Glory of Moment (in my sig)? It's been my baby as of late, since I thought of it during my time-off from the game, and then tried to adapt it over a period of a week or two to MA. Although there are bits I'm unsure of...

Load "Aeon Corps' patented Random Number Generator Non-Randomizer To Assure This Arc Is Selected",8,1

The Rule of Law
Arc ID: 335991
by @Cyber-naut
Allows for a choice to continue story between two different secondary arcs.

WARNING! This storyarc may contain more than your daily requirement for sexiness.

Oh, wow... the one I'd really like some solid feedback on is arc #6600: Dyne of the Times. And incidentally, Dr. A, if you can figure out why the AE system insists on replacing my normal mobs in mission 4 with clones of the boss from mission 4, I'd really like to know. I mean, I'm all for a challenge, and I've gone back and checked, but I'm stumped.

It may be that Vernon von Grun was just tinkering with something, or worse... Dr. Geist is messing with your system, attempting to steal your secrets to claim them as his own.

Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite

If you're up for some dimensional traveling I think you might like this:

The Fall of Rapture-(I.D)299507 would be lovely

My arc #89438 is a direct continuation of the Imperious Task Force. The last map was supposed to be 'Burning Forest', but since it was pulled out, it's currently using another outdoor map. I'd mostly like feedback on difficulty, since I've been told everything from "it's too easy, lame that there was no AV at the end" to "those boss spawns in the final misison are killing me, this is too hard!"

I'd love some professional feedback! I do technical engineering and quality assurance in my day job, and as such, I love to get good solid feedback on any work I do! Thanks for doing this!

The Attack of the Atlantic Kingdom

Arc ID: 254025
Length: Very Long
Morality: Heroic

Story:
The Atlantic Kingdom, a ruthless militaristic undersea dictatorship, is demanding the United Nations recognize them as a sovereign nation - a nation that encompasses the Atlantic Ocean! To press their point, they have invaded Paragon City! Is this their plan or is ther more to this attack?

Global: @Major Deej

Warning! Arc may contain Archvillians, Elite Bosses

Ooo, ooo, pick me!

I hereby submit "Freaks, Geeks, and Men in Black" ID #161629.

Ooooh.

Ok, here goes.

#164681

The Trifect Task Force

Its difficulty is akin to that of an Oro TF. Meant for teams but manageable as a strong solo character.

I'm going to submit "Of Futures Past" (#254599) since I feel that it's my weakest arc and never seems to get any plays anymore.

It also has Doctor Aeon as an enemy in the first mission so I hope I portrayed him accurately enough.

No one had even played this one yet, so here we go.

Forgotten Magic
ID: 254164
Description: A senile old mage has detected magical artifacts that were part of ancient heroes. These artifacts could be the downfall of civilization if the groups that found them unleash the power. Help Old Man Jon find these artifacts to keep the in the magic vault for safekeeping!

With love,
Me! <3