Everything about I21 & Freedom was AWESOME till I saw this...

Dragorian · 08-04-2011 03:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Angelxman81

Im not fan of chest emblems out of spandex tights, looks weird on a texture, but still, you improved the look.

I feel the same way, but it kind of looks off without the emblem. Perhaps if you could have the option of making it slightly transparent so that it would at least pick up the texture from the chest piece underneath it would fit better.

Dragorian · 08-04-2011 04:07 AM

Got one last one in before the servers went down. Forgive me for the time of day. I only had three or so minutes left.

Serafina:

and:

I kind of went with the same pink/blue theme for the bottoms and veil, and threw in a splash of green here and there. I also gave her the wristbands to make up for the lack of metal where the belt was. I went with the steam punk belt option to give a sort of layered fabric feel similar to Persian belly dancers (which was what I referenced for this costume). I kind of like it personally, feels a little less trashy and a bit more d jinn to me.

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Samuel_Tow · 08-04-2011 04:09 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Have you tried using the Jester boots under those pants? If you colour them right, they can look like those curved Arabian shoes you see in, say, Disney's Aladdin. Other than that, though, the redesign is aces, I'd say. Definitely an upgrade to her look, and it looks like she finally remembered to put on her pants

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Dragorian · 08-04-2011 04:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Samuel_Tow

Have you tried using the Jester boots under those pants? If you colour them right, they can look like those curved Arabian shoes you see in, say, Disney's Aladdin. Other than that, though, the redesign is aces, I'd say. Definitely an upgrade to her look, and it looks like she finally remembered to put on her pants

LoLs I actually did try them, but the problem is that those particular boots go up to the knee and looked a little odd. I think some Persian shoes would be a decent addition to our creator.

Redlynne · 08-04-2011 04:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Serafina:

Oooh, I like! Only change I'd want to make is to the top and gloves, where I'd want to go with a sleeveless Mini-vest Jacket and revert her gloves to the original gloves. Might do that tonight when I get back from "work" ...

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Techbot Alpha · 08-04-2011 05:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Thirty-Seven

Yeah, this may be a bit blunt... but that is not an "upgrade" IMO.

Seconded. The armour looks even less tech based...and why is it people can't get that YELLOW does not equal gold OR blonde? It is perfectly feasible to get blonde hair out of the CC.

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Techbot Alpha · 08-04-2011 05:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Other than the yellow needing to be more orange like the original...

Do like. Very like.

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Originally Posted by Zwillinger

GG, I would tell you that "I am killing you with my mind", but I couldn't find an emoticon to properly express my sentiment.

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Techbot Alpha · 08-04-2011 05:56 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Serafina:

So much win. Well done indeed.

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Originally Posted by Zwillinger

GG, I would tell you that "I am killing you with my mind", but I couldn't find an emoticon to properly express my sentiment.

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Citizen_Razor · 08-04-2011 06:17 AM

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Originally Posted by momentary_grace

In that spirit, though perhaps not disheveled...

This is my favorite of the Azuria redesigns. Looking at this model, you at least understand why you're running all over the place to recover the magical artifacts that she's constantly losing.

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Angelxman81 · 08-04-2011 06:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Techbot Alpha

Other than the yellow needing to be more orange like the original...

Do like. Very like.

I agree. I usually dont like light yellow and electric blue, and even less if they go together.
I like the blue tone, but it would look better with the orange/yellow tone.

Thirty-Seven · 08-04-2011 06:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Yes, very nice! Perhaps try the Jester boots... Not a fan of the slouchy socks thing there.

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Do like! But, I would move more toward gold and not so yellow on the accessories. Hmmm,wishing it were possible to have the "Falcon" moved to his belt so that it is more subtle but still represented. It just seems like someone walking passed slapped a decal on his chest.

Angelxman81 · 08-04-2011 06:36 AM

Jester boots looks deformed with that puffy pants.

Zamuel · 08-04-2011 08:17 AM

Djeannie: Not saying that such an outfit couldn't be done, just that there's a generally a bit of an unwritten rule for fanservice as a default for a female genie. Plus, figuring NPCs that were just outright low rez needed up dates more than those with questionable designs that are otherwise of an okay texture.

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Serpine · 08-04-2011 10:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

I love the new look overall (great boot choice, I would have never thought of those). My only issues are that the blue in the logo bleeds into the blue of the torso so it isn't as striking / visible as it could be, and the head is sort of troubling with the giant yellow wings just stuck on "cloth". Getting rid of the headband rig was a good idea, but I'd almost think a half-helmet might might be a batter place to go, to give the head a little "wearable airplane" bulk and provide the mounting point for sensor / wing details.

On a seperate note, your Serafina build is awesome.

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Dragorian · 08-04-2011 10:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Redlynne

...revert her gloves to the original gloves. Might do that tonight when I get back from "work" ...

You're more than welcome to do what you want, but out of curiosity, why would you want to keep the gloves? I changed them because most images I found of d jinn had them wearing bracelets or wrist wraps.

Feycat · 08-04-2011 10:49 AM

Really LOVE that take on Serafina, Dragorian! Once again you hit it out of the park, for me.

I wish we could get some damn sandals or slipper that DON'T have the stupid socks though. Really? Who wears socks with their sandals???

Dragorian · 08-04-2011 10:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Serpine

My only issues are that the blue in the logo bleeds into the blue of the torso so it isn't as striking / visible as it could be...

Well, what do you think would fix that? maybe make it a brighter blue? I don't want to take away from the costume as a whole by making it too loud.

Dragorian · 08-04-2011 10:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Feycat

Really LOVE that take on Serafina, Dragorian! Once again you hit it out of the park, for me.

I wish we could get some damn sandals or slipper that DON'T have the stupid socks though. Really? Who wears socks with their sandals???

Well they were intended for an Asian style of costume I'm sure, but I seriously agree, some Persian shoes would rock the shazbah for me. And thanks! I appreciate it! xD

Rajani Isa · 08-04-2011 12:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Serpine

Caitlin Murray-Davies: Prodigy computer tech and represented currently by a red hat (that we can't use) and a generic dress: Not much inspiration that. I was initially debating going the "Freakshow butchered her during captivity" angle but that didn't appeal to me (I already cyborged up her husband Rick Davies, which is more then enough limb chopping for one family). Instead I came to the conclusion that if she is still around after the fall of Galaxy she might end up just sharing the Atlas DATA offices with her husband, and so I gave her a variant of the general worksuit I ended up experimenting on with him. The goggles are intended to regain the bit of red lost with the hat's removal.

The original model has unpleasantly yellowish skin I couldn't find a good match for. Not that I'd want to. Anyway, here is the code:

I like - although it would be interesting to see what it would look like witht he hat on instead (which we can't) - but for the contacts downstairs, looking a little busy (In this case, like maybe she was pulled out of tearing something appart) isn't bad.

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Got one last one in before the servers went down. Forgive me for the time of day. I only had three or so minutes left.

Serafina:

and:

I kind of went with the same pink/blue theme for the bottoms and veil, and threw in a splash of green here and there. I also gave her the wristbands to make up for the lack of metal where the belt was. I went with the steam punk belt option to give a sort of layered fabric feel similar to Persian belly dancers (which was what I referenced for this costume). I kind of like it personally, feels a little less trashy and a bit more d jinn to me.

I like. Although,

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

You're more than welcome to do what you want, but out of curiosity, why would you want to keep the gloves? I changed them because most images I found of d jinn had them wearing bracelets or wrist wraps.

Most lore I've encounter has those bracelets/band as the signs of being bound to granting wishes. Right now she's kinda a half genie - unable to grant (much less being bound to grant) other's wishes besides the previous Sirocco's last one.

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Dragorian · 08-04-2011 12:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Rajani Isa

Although,

Most lore I've encounter has those bracelets/band as the signs of being bound to granting wishes. Right now she's kinda a half genie - unable to grant (much less being bound to grant) other's wishes besides the previous Sirocco's last one.

Right on. Still open to suggestion. Or feel free to copy the costume code and see what you can come up with. Either way, I'm glad I could help out somehow. ^_^

Thirty-Seven · 08-04-2011 12:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Zamuel

Not saying that such an outfit couldn't be done, just that there's a generally a bit of an unwritten rule for fan service as a default for a female genie.

Heh, fan service is kind of a funny term for "make them slutty so the male gamers like them." As a gay male gamer, I find the assumption that such a thing can be labeled "fan service" kind of hilarious. That being said, I really have no need to see more boob... but also don't need to see the bulges and naked chests of all of the male supers in the game either. I prefer my characters to be clothed in a logical way, thank you very much, regardless of gender.

Serpine · 08-04-2011 01:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Dragorian

Well, what do you think would fix that? maybe make it a brighter blue?

That's what I would think to try. Maybe a blue at the midway point between the light and dark blues you are using currently in the rest of the costume? Not sure how that would look without being home to try it myself though: Might end up horrible.

In other news, according to the latest Dev Chat Highlights the Dev's have "noticed the threads popping up about redesigning Azuria and John St. John-Smythe and they're talking internally about putting action to those suggestions." Go team!

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Dragorian · 08-04-2011 01:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Serpine

"noticed the threads popping up about redesigning Azuria and John St. John-Smythe and they're talking internally about putting action to those suggestions." Go team!

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Djeannie · 08-04-2011 04:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zamuel

Djeannie: Not saying that such an outfit couldn't be done, just that there's a generally a bit of an unwritten rule for fanservice as a default for a female genie. Plus, figuring NPCs that were just outright low rez needed up dates more than those with questionable designs that are otherwise of an okay texture.

Very true with the fanservice rule and serafina looks nothing like a genie at all

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Djeannie · 08-04-2011 04:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Feycat

Really LOVE that take on Serafina, Dragorian! Once again you hit it out of the park, for me.

I wish we could get some damn sandals or slipper that DON'T have the stupid socks though. Really? Who wears socks with their sandals???

we have slippers without socks. I've used them on variations of Djeannie for years.

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