Gift art sketch for Dark Ether
By
anachrodragon,
Posted on: 2008-08-10 11:40 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
OMG I love it!
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...Okay, I was going to offer actual constructive feedback, but the side-note had me breathing coffee for a moment in between giggles, and in the aftermath of this action my brain shut off.
So, I'm just going to give a shaky thumbs-up until I can breathe properly. 
No no no, Tank you.
Looks great, especially love the disclaimer.
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lol love the disclaimer and the towel lol
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Hehe - that's awesome! And I wasn't expecting it - I thought you were kidding.
I love the DB towel, too.
Thanks so much!!
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BW has a redline critique here
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I just saw it , left him a reply on DA but sooo wanted to reiterate how much the redline scribble overlays help me see things I wouldn't notice otherwise
Hoohas? If nothing else, I've got that.... My only comment is to move that damn towel....
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AHAHAHAHA if I did that I think id get a small vacation from the forums from niv and koj .
Also I think id likely give forumites ulcers if I started posting nude gift art of their characters
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"Scarf thanks for the art ...sorta but why is my robot naked and anatomicly correct ? "
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AHAHAHAHA if I did that I think id get a small vacation from the forums from niv and koj .
Also I think id likely give forumites ulcers if I started posting nude gift art of their characters
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"Scarf thanks for the art ...sorta but why is my robot naked and anatomicly correct ? "
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Scarfy, I love gift art as much as the next person, but no one needs to see Turkey's giblets. Wise decision.
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That sidenote was hilarious. Good picture. 
*cough cough* inhaling nachos... not so fun. *laughs some more*
Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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Seriously though, even with the incredibly good critique, I really like how your style is unique. There are some things about your art, ie larger head, that do not offend, imo. I kinda like it your way. Understanding anatomy is really important, but there's something to be said for choosing to draw the art the way you want to draw it.
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Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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Seriously though, even with the incredibly good critique, I really like how your style is unique. There are some things about your art, ie larger head, that do not offend, imo. I kinda like it your way. Understanding anatomy is really important, but there's something to be said for choosing to draw the art the way you want to draw it.
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QFT
Really like the style.
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Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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I'll make the hair a bit more pronouced , im defintely not trying to skirt rules or make trouble .
If the updated version i'll post tonight isn't up to your standards i'll use the redirect or censored bar , honest injun
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Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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Seriously though, even with the incredibly good critique, I really like how your style is unique. There are some things about your art, ie larger head, that do not offend, imo. I kinda like it your way. Understanding anatomy is really important, but there's something to be said for choosing to draw the art the way you want to draw it.
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Oh I agree but im still have sooo much to learn/figure out that I really do look forward to getting redline feedback , part of my dislike of verbal / forum feedback is I often have a hard time picturing what others are describing whereas with the red line method its pretty straight forward .
and sometimes its really hard (for me ) not to get really styleized
so geting a bit of scribble feedback lets me pull back a lil bit but still be scarfy
ps
Thanks to anyone that takes the time to look and say hiyas , Double thanks to anyone that does a red line critique
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Seriously pushing it Scarf.
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put a censored bar over the pushing it area on the old version and the newer version its very very obvious hair is covering her in the best tradition of Lady Godiva
True to my word , updated version
thanks for the feedback folks .. i'll let it sit for a bit and see if anymore critiques arre forth coming but adapted a few of battle wraiths comments as well as a few received via notes
Looking great!! I like your hair in the first one, but the mods you did look great.
Thanks again!!
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well the joy of rough pencils is its easy to change around
no need for thanks , honestly . I needed a bit of practice drawing someone other then DB .
I'll mess around with the hair a bit tomorrow but for now im all sleepy so im off to get a lil nip of something to drink then gonna
curl up into a angry artist ball and snooze a bit
I like what you did with her body in the second one, but I think I like the style of the head more in the first one. I think the hair looked better a little wilder, and I want to say that the facial features might be a little too heavy with the smaller head area. She looked a bit cuter with the smaller nose, etc... I don't know... I think the first face looked like it had more attitude.
noted , im going to do another pass on the hair and face tonight
and thanks
I'll keep my eyes peeled. Coming along great so far.
Sorry sorry for not visiting your DA more often and totally forgetting to star that Graver comission you had done ((where DB made a cameo ))
(or blue if you prefer ) I can't really understand written critiques So I usually have my eyes glaze over and alt tab to something intresting :P
Hopefully by making amends with cheesecake you will call off your legion of voodoo zombie chickens !!
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