Gift art sketch for Dark Ether


anachrodragon

 

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I second the motion of putting head and hair from #1 onto the body of #2. To me her feet seem a little large at the moment. I would also try to put her right foot under her right shoulder to make her look a little less off-balance. You could probably do the same with her left foot too, and you'll have to move the soap. And I tweaked the towel a bit, but not in a NSFW way.

Teh artz.


 

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yep your totally right about the foot and leg ... I wonder why I draw lopsided like that ..I tend to do that alot with standing poses .

as for the soap id move it but then id have to bend over to pick it up and ive been told never to do that in a prison shower .

yeah definitely doing a work over on the face and hair tonight
thanks for the scribble overlay its greatly appreciated


 

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To me her feet seem a little large at the moment.

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I always thought this was a stylized thing. I kinda like it, makes her look ethereal like. Like a female pan.

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Teh artz.

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Her legs are a little less... modest now.

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as for the soap id move it but then id have to bend over to pick it up and ive been told never to do that in a prison shower .


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O great. Now i gotta go wash out my brain. Thanks.


 

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sorry sorry , i'll refrain from Oz prison shower references in the future

the feet are sorta a scarf thing they are unlikely to get much smaller but im always happy to discuss their positioning , i'll add toes in in the next update .

as it stands now i.ll be adjusting the foot a bit , giving her a bit more fuller wilder hair from the first go around and trying to recapture the sultry look on her face .

after that if you yahoos don't see anything major i'll likely ink her
and then debate coloring


 

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May I suggest a subtle color of skin tone and tile and brightly colored hair and towel. That way it draws the attention... ahem to the center of the page, ahem.


 

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well the actual character has white hair , the towel is definitely going bright , Subtle color on the tiles fading out to white is a cool idea .

Heres a link to aReference of Tanks 4D from game


 

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Also the actual character's "chestlets" are huge, what is that? like quad D

I totally think you need to update your pic to match the reference pick :3 cause I think you are at least two sizes too small :P


 

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XD I genrally don't draw past a certain size as it then becomes more about the chestlets and less about the person im drawing .

chalk it up to scarf style that if I ever draw your character you'll end up with small to medium chestletts ....even the guys


 

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Lazy artist is lazy but im finally Done

Hope you like it DE it was fun to draw someone elses character
(though if you don't like it im adding a cowlick , horns , scales and a tail and adding it to my Dragonberry art collection :P )


 

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That is a very nice piece, and the little DB on the towel is so adorable, I want a plushie version so I can love it and cuddle it and..

*edit* I just realized that sounded like a 'plushie kinda love' reference, please to disregard alt meanings of my perfectly innocent comment! o.0


 

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:P <snerk> :P

thanks though


 

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Uh-oh, looks like she dropped the soap....



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