Thoughts on my Evil Longbow design?


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They're going to be the main enemies in an arc I'm working on (Got more testing to do on the arc with current changes though). I just wanted to know what some people think of the way I made them look. Did I do a good job capturing the right look for them?

Wrongbow Boss
Wrongbow minions


 

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Ah, these are the evil Longbow. As opposed to the private mercenary army illegally invading a soverign nation and attempting to overthrow its legitmate government. With flamethrowers.

But, no, the outfits look spot on. The only possible issue is that they look a lot like the Longbow Spec-Ops.


 

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Looks good, though you may want to add in a few ladies since the normal Longbow NPCs have a few females mixed in. I don't know how much space this would use though.


 

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Looks good, though you may want to add in a few ladies since the normal Longbow NPCs have a few females mixed in. I don't know how much space this would use though.

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IF anyone else agrees that ladies would help mix things up a bit. I could always make the Swordsmen into Swordswomen. Making an alternate of one that's already there would take up too much space with what's currently in the arc.

As it stands Wrongbow has 2 minions, 2 lts, and a boss. The arc also has a custom contact and 3 custom bosses in it(On top of all the regular bosses I've included).


 

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Ah, these are the evil Longbow. As opposed to the private mercenary army illegally invading a soverign nation and attempting to overthrow its legitmate government. With flamethrowers.

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QFT.

I was actually considering writing an arc that dealt with that, but I'm not enough of a lore buff to get it right.


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They're going to be the main enemies in an arc I'm working on (Got more testing to do on the arc with current changes though). I just wanted to know what some people think of the way I made them look. Did I do a good job capturing the right look for them?

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Yes you did an excellent job on the costumes. Now not to throw water on ya, but you had better be ready for the cannonites when it comes to your story. They will slice your privates off with a rusty can top if they feel you went in the wrong direction story wise. A word to the wise.


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Unless they don't really read my story, I'm not to worried about them clashing with cannon. Since for the most part. I've been distancing my stories from messing with any of the official story.

I'll just say they're kinda like Preatorians, but not.


 

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Cannnonites, not reading a story..come now surely you jest.

Well, ok but you know how they can be when they feel things are out of cannon. I wish you luck on it, if nothing else the critters look good.


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Cannon = big gun mounted on a carriage or chassis.

Canon = "official" story or history.


 

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Weeeeelll, if you want to get techinical, according to canon AE missions are completely non-canon, so....

Not sure about the archery on that boss, when I think "Longbow" I think "Why are they called Longbow if they all use guns?" (unless your group is deliberately trying to live up to their name) but the costumes do look nice.


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Cannon = big gun mounted on a carriage or chassis.

Canon = "official" story or history.

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Cannnonites = fanatical literary cult known for loading their cannons with heavy history tomes. One of their common battle cries is "Let's throw the book at them!"


 

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Cannon = big gun mounted on a carriage or chassis.

Canon = "official" story or history.

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What would "Cannnon" be then?

Edit: Damn, beaten to the punch by Siergen.


 

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My spelling is terrible.


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If anyone is interested the arc in my sig is the arc these guys are appearing in. But be forewarned. It's got lots of AVs and EBs in it.


 

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I'm thinking you're right on the money there w/ the wrongbow I've put your arc on my list of ones to check out.

I also think having lady wrongbow would work to be a dark mirror of the caNon faction.

(now if only someone could actually make Siergen's Cannnonites, all would be gravy)


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Ah, these are the evil Longbow. As opposed to the private mercenary army illegally invading a soverign nation and attempting to overthrow its legitmate government. With flamethrowers.

But, no, the outfits look spot on. The only possible issue is that they look a lot like the Longbow Spec-Ops.

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Not to mention the fact their safety protocols border on nonexistent, they treat their own troops as expendable, they shoot on sight without asking questions, They have little to no regard for innocent bystanders caught in the crossfire and theyre led by a nutcase who thinks as long as you're fighting for "Justice!" you're doing the right thing.

Good guys. yeah.


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