TheDeepBlue

Figured out the latter. Did not know about the slash command.

I was hoping you wouldn't say that. >.< I'll check that out too, then.

Cheating? When the enemy's consciousness expertly spans four or more dimensions, are you sure you really know what the rules are? :3

If you don't want to have any preconceptions about the PC, then you would have to remove the 'caution' bit, because that assumes the PC cares about that at all. If you want to leave it in without assuming anything about the PC, you should have the contact offer a strong argument to the player (or PC) as to why discretion is the best option. However, if you want to, ah, 'force' a proactive or sly attitude onto the PC, no editing is necessary.

'...and glance around' isn't really necessary. The players themselves are probably already doing that. I think the space is better used to describe the creepy sound that gate is probably making as it opens in contrast with the activity, or lack thereof, in the cemetary.

If you want to take the focus off of the PC in the second sentence, you could replace the second half with something like '...their words indistinguishable to even the best-trained ear.'

The entire second sentence assumes the motivation, attitude, and operating procedure of the PC. All I can think of when reading it is 'Michelle thinks I'm a brave, philanthropic tanker, tank tank tank tank tank.' Mind you, that's what I'm thinking; that's just my opinion.

Well, okay. I can believe that most folks acting as a hero or even a vigilante would guess that a kid being held hostage upstairs needs aid to stop being a hostage. I think any PC's reaction to this would depend on whether or not they knew the kid was there in the first place. Given that you refer to the hostage-takers as 'kidnappers', I'm guessing the PC already has some idea of what's going on. Aside from that, however, different PCs might react in a variety of ways. Suppose that any given PC could be a new and/or nervous and/or squishy hero wondering if they're really cut out for the job; a beserkerbarrage 'I'm the best at what I do, bub' archetype; or someone who uses their head a bit more and has a MO that differs from sternly marching up a staircase with a one-liner locked and loaded. Alternatively, the PC could be an arbitrary mechanical mind that's just doing what it's told or and doesn't give a whit two ways, I don't know.

Also, in regards to the terseness that might keep some folks away from the MA...I wouldn't say that the kid is 'somewhere'; we know from the previous sentence that he or she is upstairs. Pretty close, too, since the PC can hear them (unless they have that super-hearing stuff, that I don't know.)

Also, 's kinda off-topic, but I can't think of a better place to put it considering that the question is primarily being asked to infrequent MA'ers.

>_<

If you think the automatons are sucking lately, then that's very good for Nemesis, since you won't be looking for the very important ones that don't have orders to act like piles of junk.

But why?!

This doesn't look like a tin golem at all.

EDIT: Ah, I see in the letter above that he *is* in fact a robot.

Just not my aesthetic preference, those legs.

I was wondering what the huge Stampead-shaped horror vat in your living room was for.

College.

I think it had something to do with Positron being in some sort of energy state inside the armor.

The given reasons for that are A) Positron was preserved inside his suit while unstable, and B) Synapse's altered biology keeps him in good shape.

Info on the leader of the Hellions is here.

This.

Maybe you could work that fact into the bios somehow? That way you don't have to remove the original bio.

He was an EB when I fought him, but I was at +1x2 when I played the arc. :3