The Epics : 4-5 Missions Only Arc Reviews
By
Alari_Azure,
Posted on: 2009-04-24 03:50 in Mission Architect
Arc Name: The Crey Conundrum, Act I - Project: Sleeper
Arc ID: 149765
Mission 5 contains an EB, nothing else should be more than a Boss. Currently sitting at 13 rates (haven't logged in today yet, but I doubt I hit 100 in 12 hours). Can't wait to get some feedback!
I realize that you have a long list, but I would definitely appreciate it if you could add this one to your queue.
Arc Name: Meet the Demon Spawn
Creator Global/Forum Name: @Alari Azure/Telstar
Are you ready to accept a challenge from Paragon City's newest gang of thugs and their leader, Slash DeMento? Hang on to your hat and be ready for a wild ride. These guys are new in town and they want to make a big impression. The bad kind! After Slash gave Frostfire a nasty beating, they left the Outcasts behind to make much bigger plans. Can you help Flux keep these guys from getting too big for their britches?
The enemy group is all custom. Their descriptions add a bit of background and flavor to the story. There are no EB/AVs, so it can be soloed, but there are a few enemies that can be tough. Squishies and lower levels may have some problems with a few of them. None are extremely hard, but it may depend on whether you're solo or go with a team. If soloing, I suggest using a strong tank/scrapper (or equivalent villain, if so inclined). There are a few axers, including 1 Lt and 2 bosses, that may be brutal on other character builds. All are set on standard difficulty, but they can still pack a whollop. The enemy mix is similar to Outcasts with a few additions as far as weapon/power choices go. Basically, it's a gang that has a wide range of backgrounds as some have joined their ranks after the main chars left the Outcasts.
Arc ID: 151099
Faction: Heroic
No AV/EBs Deal with The Devil's Pawn-207266 Slash DeMento and the Stolen Weapons-100045 Meet the Demon Spawn-151099 Feedback
Hello I have two for consideration:
!st is A "simple" day (ARC#117154) This is the intro for TEEN FORCE
2nd is TEEN FORCE to the Rescue (or to be rescued) (ARC# 116459)
Both are listed under Energylord.
Any helpfull critics would be appreciated. This is a story so even though the numbers are out of order, you should do ARC# 117154 1st. I prob. messed it up when making early corrections. TY for your time. 
Deeds not Words....
If you're still taking on arc requests, I'd love to toss mine into the ring. I haven't really started to promote it, so it's had one (1) play/review since it was first published at the start of May. ...it's not that bad, promise!
The arc is titled Paragon's Abyss, # 161540.
It's listed as very long, with 5 missions on small and medium sized maps. The current play suggestion is 40+, and it does contain both custom units and a custom boss/EB.
I would love and appreciate any feedback on this arc! Thanks in advance!
Current Scrapper Projects: Elec/Invuln, Fire/SR and the eternal MA/DA adventure
Current Defender Projects: Emp/Psy and Storm/Arch
lol Stalker: Nin/Nrg
Please add this to your waiting list:
Arc Name: Red Typhoon
Arc ID: 4912
Faction: Heroic
Creator Global/Forum Name: @mm3squints
Difficulty Level: 40-53
Number of Mission: 5
Estimated Time to Play: 30 min-2 hour
Synopsis: Tension rises after N. Korea launches a missile. Nuclear war may happen can it be stopped?
Link to More Details or Feedback: Can be soloed, but best if team played
MA Arc:
Red Typhoon 4912
Akhdar Blood Arc: 247198
I'd appreciate it if you could add this arc to your list as well.
#195149 - "The Horsemen Chronicles (Part I)"
Faction: Heroic
Creator Global: @Citizen Razor 2
Difficulty Level: Lv10-14
Number of Mission: 5
Estimated Time to Play: 30 min - 2 hour
Synposis: Tyrant wants to establish a permanent portal into Paragon City, but realizes that as long as the eyes of the Freedom Phalanx is on him, he will never be able to do so. Therefore Tyrant is using the Wolfpack, a fledgling group of villains, to do so. Tyrant has sent Omega (custom critter) to Paragon City to collect five artifacts that will be used to build a permanent portal. You have to prevent that from happening.
Play my MA arcs!
Tracking Down Jack Ketch - ArcID #2701
Cat War! - ArcID #2788
If you want to give the arc in my sig a shot.It is a 4 mish arc that I try to strive to keep a villainous flair. There is one EB at the end who can pose a bit of problems solo. If you could I would prefer a pm on the review. It has just under 100 and I am looking for some more good reviews.
I offer:
[ZQ] Power Play - Arc #187269
A City of Villains story arc uniquely told in the first person.
Story-focused, solo-friendly
No EB/AV at all. Signatures will scale to Lieutenant on challenge level 1. Increase your difficulty and/or team size to face bosses.
Here's the first list of the arcs I'm scheduled to review. Once I'm done with this batch, I'll start working through the second list.
FIRST LIST
- ID: 84105 Duality
- ID: 53951 The Sleeping Star
- ID: 101681 Through Rose-Tinted Glasses
- ID: 12669 How to Survive a Robot Uprising
- ID: 12647 Tales of cimerora, volume 1 : of feathers and fur...
- ID: 111352 Title is Fallen Angel: Crossing Over
- ID: 2180 Bricked Electronics
- ID: 5073 The Bravuran Jobs
- ID: 91897 The Oblivion Lens
- ID: 1356 This Is War, Part I - the Revenge of Hro'Dtohz
- ID: 2922 Hunthing the Dark Dragon
- ID: 4572 Blargrimmar Wants You!
- ID: 2622 A Tangle in Time
- ID 64609 Eclipse Over Paragon
- ID: 58812 Something Comes to Yarmouth
- ID: 1233 welcome to donut world
- ID: 36492 "The Saga of Uuralur."
- ID: 33969 The Darkman Cometh (pt.1)
- ID: 3416 Blitzkrieg
- ID: 4431 Soldiers of Fortune
- ID: 92382 -- "The S.P.I.D.E.R. and the Tyrant
- ID: 4643 Blowback
- ID: 62807 Rock & Revenge
- ID: 33034 The Descender
- ID: 87912 The Dead and the Damned
- ID: 48942 Too Drunk To Be Alcoholic
- ID: 29659 Revenge is a Dish Best Served From My Cold Dead Fingers
- ID: 70210 Is it Live or is it Memory-X
- ID: 71797 The Gorgon Maneuver
- ID: 31975 Fire and Ice: Naughty and Nice
- ID: 15447 - Blood, Sweat, Toil and Tears
- ID: 15976 - Glory Days
- ID: 103878 Gamble for Oakes
- ID: 16376 The Aegis Affair
- ID: 5909 Amazon-Avatars
- ID: 6143 Escalation
- ID: 1579 The Council's Long Con
- ID: 113294 The Siphon
- ID: 77311 The Ballad of Murky Thecat
- ID: 75386 The Knights of Rularuu
- ID: 1033 (NO TITLE)
- ID: 1484 That Which Defines Humanity
- ID: 113886 The Marcovici 7
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SECOND LIST
- ID: 81451 Missing Persons, Missing Pieces
- ID: 52424 Drogianite Invasion
- ID: 21144 Spanks For The Memories
- ID: 42436 The Ideality - Part 1: A New Foe
- ID: 103737 The Ideality - Part 2: A Ideal Plan
- ID: 141338 Vectors of Infection
- ID: 57352 The All-Seeing Eye
- ID: 1567 MacGuffin Delivery Service
- ID: 1709 The Amulet of J'gara
- ID: 3326 The Portal Bandits
- ID: 131780 The Day I Tried To Live
- ID: 186198 A bad hand from a worse deck...
- ID: 171031 The Fracturing of Time
- ID: 188867 Wails, Tales, and Hell's Bells
- ID: 24926 Ambitions of Small Men
- ID: 181264 Fatale Attraction
- ID: 149765 The Crey Conundrum, Act I - Project: Sleeper
- ID: 151099 Meet the Demon Spawn
- ID: 117154 A "simple" day
- ID: 116459 TEEN FORCE to the Rescue (or to be rescued)
- ID: 161540 aragon's Abysss
- ID: 4912 Red Typhoon
- ID: 195149 The Horsemen Chronicles (Part 1)
- ID: 12217 Mylia's Orgin
- ID: 187269 [ZQ] Power Play
Wow. Someone's got their work cut out for them. 
Rise of the Copper Legion (#60280; with soundtrack)
The Fractured Dreamer (#498588; with musical theme)
"Now Leaving: Paragon City": original composition for the end of CoH
No kidding and this is just the Epics list...I have 2 other threads
If you're looking for more arcs to review, have a look at #184130, "Party Like a Troll", Lvl 5-20, heroic story, Starts with a rescue mission and then...
It's maybe a little dark and a little mature.
This is the second finished version, already modified from some folks comments. I'd be interested to see what you think.
Go ahead and strike "The Descender" ID 33034. From your list. I pulled the arc to make room for my three part epic "The Lost Choir". I would ask you to review that one too, but you have a LOT on your plate!
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So how is all that coming Altaholic? That is a lot of work.
Take Care,
BinkDeBook
Virtue: CaptainMayhem-50 Inv/SS Tank; NaomiArmitage-50 DM/Inv Scrap; Captn Randomizer-50 MC/Kin Cntrller; Murky Thecat-50 Claws/SR Scrap; Professor Junk-50 Bots/Traps MM; +Others Arc Id #77311, #227436
Arc Name: Rage Within The Machine
Arc ID: 137705
Faction: Heroic
Creator Global/Forum Name: @Freedom Force / Saul_Invictus
Difficulty Level: Medium. Most 30 or higher characters should be able to solo this arc, although some defender builds may find it tough. No EBs or AVs, but several Robotics Masterminds appear throughout.
Synopsis: This is the first arc I've developed that I feel is good enough to publish. It's a story-oriented arc, with a serious tone. The plot revolves around an uprising of robots across Paragon City, but there's more to it than just rampaging robots. It's set up as a mystery-- initially you don't know why the robots are attacking, and you'll encounter some red herrings before you finally figure out what's really going on. There's a lot of text in this arc, but I've tried to repeat important plot points in several places, so you shouldn't find yourself confused if you occasionally forget to read a clue or a line of dialogue.
Estimated Time to Play: Depends on the build-- a high-level, heavily IO'd scrapper can probably finish in less than 1 hour, while a mid-level defender playing cautiously might take as much as 3 hours. That's assuming you fight every mob you encounter, though. There are no "defeat all" requirements anywhere in the arc, so if you have any sort of stealth powers available, you could ghost through the arc and save a lot of time.
Arc# 137705: Rage Within The Machine. A mystery in five acts. Robots are rising up and attacking hero and villain alike. Who is responsible? Heroic, Very Long, Story arc, no EBs or AVs, no "defeat all", no Ninjitsu. For level 30 and up.
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So how is all that coming Altaholic? That is a lot of work.
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Just call me Alty, easier to spell
Well now that I've finished doing some SG site work and my RL has calmed back down again. I can return to reviewing arcs. I see that my Independent list got eaten by the forum so I'll have to repost that.
Since there are so many EPIC, I'll have to start running through at least 2-3 a day, if possible. I'd like to be through all the arcs by month's end..that's my plan anyway.
I would like to submit my newly spell checked and plot hole fixed arc for your consideration.
17006: End game - Final Moves.
Since I submitted my arc (87912) for review, it has surpassed 100 plays. Does that disqualify it from review? If so, I can submit another arc instead.
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Since I submitted my arc (87912) for review, it has surpassed 100 plays. Does that disqualify it from review? If so, I can submit another arc instead.
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No, you're fine. If I can't get to your arc in time and it goes over 100 but was under when you posted, that's okay. I don't expect your mission to sit idle while it waits for me to run through it.
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Since there are so many EPIC, I'll have to start running through at least 2-3 a day, if possible. I'd like to be through all the arcs by month's end..that's my plan anyway.
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2-3 a day sounds like fun Wish I had that time, but not anymore.
Looking forward to the reviews, so I can add ones that you like to my list to run (its getting long, but I've found such fun ones this way )
Take Care,
BinkDeBook
Virtue: CaptainMayhem-50 Inv/SS Tank; NaomiArmitage-50 DM/Inv Scrap; Captn Randomizer-50 MC/Kin Cntrller; Murky Thecat-50 Claws/SR Scrap; Professor Junk-50 Bots/Traps MM; +Others Arc Id #77311, #227436
I hope you've got time to review my arc.
My 2nd Arc , published recently.
Title: A Shadowy Way of Light
Arc ID: 221466
Creators Global Name: @KemLi
Faction : Neutral (Villainous story)
Difficulty Level: Medium-High. Adjust difficulty to suit your playstyle.
Synopsis Purely Villain arc. You've been contacted by a new Religious Sect in the Isles and they've thrust you into dangerous situations. But they've fed your desire to be truly evil and have led you to face some of Paragon's finest. You will be the ultimate victor and rule all that you survey.
Story Type Serious/Dramatic
Mission Count: 4
Note All bosses , EBs and AVs scale.I'd suggest you not go in alone..unless your skills rival well..he who shall not be named but looks remarkably like me -_-
Feedback appreciated.
Pinnacle & Virtue:
A bunch of Heroes - Alpha Team, Legion of Order.
A bunch of Villains -Black Citadel , Pinnache.
Altoholic_Monkey, I just took down Blargrimmar Wants You! (4572) and replaced it with The History of Statesman (219484). Go ahead and do the same to your list, it's still a long arc with less than 100 ratings.
The Fireside Poet - #189439
Heroic
5 missions, but a fast run.
Levels 1-14
Currently at 58 plays
Thanks for consideration
I took down Wails, Tales, and Hell's Bells (188867). If you want, you can rate The Guardian Diggers & The Brainwashed Miners (131500) instead. It's still only at 5 ratings.
Great idea for a thread! It looks like you'll be busy with all these arcs, but if you can run through mine when you can I'd appreciate it.
Title: Fatale Attraction
Arc ID: 181264
Synopsis: This is a story focused arc about a rising gang of female street criminals in Paragon City that Meg Mason is looking to bust. What starts off as a missing persons investigation and the search for a possible witness leads you into a much broader and darker case that requires a hero to resolve. [SFMA]
There are two very short missions, one timed mission, and the remaining two are on lareg maps. Only one short mission has a Defeat All Enemies condition. The missions are all for levels 1-54 and you could solo this one all the way if you had to, but a team would make it more fun. Total play time required should be no longer than one hour.