Panel Dialogue Contest (free art as prize)


Altoholic_Monkey

 

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As some of you may have noticed, I have been doing a lot of shots of the well endowed Naughty Nadya. NN asked if I could do a shot of her vs. her nemisis Ms. Liberty. I did two different shots that were both well received.

Looking at them though I quickly realized that I might just be able to turn them into a comic strip panel. I have yet to do one, but have always dreamed of taking on a larger project (someday hoping to make a whole comic of Juggy actually).

So here is the deal, I have a rough outline of how I'm going to finish off this panel. But I am not the greatest at writing nor plotting out dialogue that doesn't sound lame.

I need you!

The contest is simple, write the captions and dialogue for this panel and 1) you'll get the credit on my DA page and 2) you'll get a free character art piece from me of your main.

There are 4 panels, so please have your entry something like this:

(panel one-caption upper left) "The two finally meet."
(panel one-Ms. L bubble) "There's no way you're going to get away with this Naughty Nadya!"
(Panel two-sound) "swooosh"
ect...

Naughty Nadya vs. Ms. Liberty panel

There is no rush, but I plan to finish this in about the next 2-3 weeks (my wife is going on a business trip). If possible, put you entry on this thread or PM me if you don't want the masses to read it.

Both myself and NN will be picking out the winner.

good luck
-Juggy


 

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Question -- is this serious action or can it be humorous too?

Also what AT and powersets does the villain have?


 

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Honestly, it's your call.

I'm doing this basically to bring the writers into our little community. Not every can draw (or owns photoshop) and I thought it'd be cool to have fun with this and get a lot of different takes on it.


 

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Fair enough, but can you provide what AT NN is, at the very least.

As a side note, the writers are probably in the roleplaying section for the forum...of course that's not true for all writers. Some of them lurk around this section too.

*squints* I think I see a few.....get 'em!


 

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Blargh, I'm too tired/sick/medicated to think right now.

I'll definately remember to look in on this when I wake up t'morrow, though.


 

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I think NN is a Rad Defender.


 

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Panel One (Bubble, Ms. Liberty): You're never going...ugh...to beat...ooof...me. You don't have it in you.

Panel Two (Bubble, Naughty Nadya): Would you care to make a wager on that, Libby?

(Panel two sound, following the action line: Whoosh!)

Panel Three (Bubble, Ms. Liberty): You just don't get it, Nadya. Justice will always prevail over...

Panel Four (Bubble, Naughty Nadya): Would you !@#$ing shut up already!?

(Panel Four Sound: Whump!!!)


 

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You know, at first glance, that panel in the lower left looks like it could be rather adult oriented... I'm not sure if that's intended but it certainly threw me off guard for a moment.


 

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I think NN is a Rad Defender.

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Defender? Thought she was a villain...okie dokie. I was basically trying to figure out what powers she was using on Mrs Liberty.

Thanks


 

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I think NN is a Rad Defender.

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Defender? Thought she was a villain...okie dokie. I was basically trying to figure out what powers she was using on Mrs Liberty.

Thanks

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Oooh, good point. Well then... just consider her able to spew green stuff till I find out mroe. lol


 

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Honestly, it's your call.

I'm doing this basically to bring the writers into our little community. Not every can draw (or owns photoshop) and I thought it'd be cool to have fun with this and get a lot of different takes on it.

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[color=#cc99cc]I think that's a great idea! As a writer myself, ironically, I am not involved in the rp forum, I spend most of my time in this one...

Anyway, I love that you want to bring writers into the equation, unfortunately, nothing comes to my mind for this but I know someone will come up with something spiffy!


 

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Rad/Rad Corruptor. I spent an hour a week or so ago chasing her around Recluse's Victory with my BS/SR Scrapper.


 

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Rad/Rad Corruptor. I spent an hour a week or so ago chasing her around Recluse's Victory with my BS/SR Scrapper.

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LMAO and htere is our answer!

Now that's what I call community!


 

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I'm not sure how much artistic lisence to take without knowing anything about the character's personality... I suppose you could base it off the art, but, still.

Mind if I PM instead?


 

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Not at all... PM away.


 

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panel 1: I said gimme your lunch money, Ms. Liberty!

panel 2: No! It's my lunch money and grandpa Statesman told me to stand up to bullies!

panel 3: Ms. Liberty: Ha! Gotcha now! Maybe you should give me your lunch money, Nadya!

NN: *grunt* You idiot! If I had any lunch money I wouldn't be stealing yours!

panel 4: *whump* NN: Now gimme your freakin' lunch money, princess!

Ms. Liberty: Fine! Who needs food anyway?! I hope you get fat!


Goodbye, I guess.

@Lord_Nightblade in Champions/Star Trek Online

nightblade7295@gmail.com if you want to stay in touch

 

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Naughty Nadya vs. Ms. Liberty.

Panel 1
Ms. LibertySpeech Bubble) Give it up, Naughty Nadya. You're undisciplined.

Narrator box: Lord Recluse once said that often the only difference between victory and defeat is not strength,

Panel 2
Ms. Liberty: (Speech Bubble) You're too slow.

Narrator Box: agility,

Panel 3
Ms. Liberty: (Speech Bubble) And I'm way out of your league!

Naughty Nadya: (Speech Bubble) Laugh it up, Liberty Loser.

Narrator Box: or even experience.

Panel 4:
Naughty Nadya: (Speech Bubble) Your overconfidence will be the end of you!

Narrator Box: The difference between victory and defeat is simple: sheer force of will!





 

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I'd really like to help ya out here but I'm the photoshop guy. I actually have Bayani writing something for me 'cause I can't. Sorry bro.


 

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PANEL 1
Ms. Liberty: Nadya! What did you do to all those people!
CAP: There is only one truth about fighting evil...

PANEL 2
Naughty Nadya: I killed them, of course.
CAP: ...whether you beat it...

PANEL 3
Ms. Liberty (small): No...
Naughty Nadya: But don't worry...
CAP: ...or not...

PANEL 4
Naughty Nadya: ...you'll soon follow.
CAP: ...it will have its price.


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Top left panel:

Ms L: (pained voice): "Swine! You shall come to justice this time!"
NN: "More dramatic dribble Liberty? I see you are the same!"

Top right panel:

Ms L: "Why do we keep doing this...fight?
NN: "Ugh! What?"
Ms L: " I mean, it just seems like another stereotypical girlfight to excite all those little boys hoping that clothing gets ripped off and they see us naked!"
NN: "Hmmmm...I, er...ah. That isn't why we do this! We do this for the eternal fight between good and evil..."

Bottom left panel:

Ms L: "That is what they want you to think! Now look at how they have us? Pressed together, sexily, and suggestive."
NN: "Ummmm.."
Ms L: " We should end this and love one another...Like I discovered with my roommate in college?"
NN:" What the??"
Ms L: "I wonder what ever happened to Vibrate Girl anyways?"

Bottom right panel:

NN: "That did it! For the last time Liberty, it is not gonna happen!"
Ms L: (sobbing) "PRUDE!"




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Top left panel:

Ms L: (pained voice): "Swine! You shall come to justice this time!"
NN: "More dramatic dribble Liberty? I see you are the same!"

Top right panel:

Ms L: "Why do we keep doing this...fight?
NN: "Ugh! What?"
Ms L: " I mean, it just seems like another stereotypical girlfight to excite all those little boys hoping that clothing gets ripped off and they see us naked!"
NN: "Hmmmm...I, er...ah. That isn't why we do this! We do this for the eternal fight between good and evil..."

Bottom left panel:

Ms L: "That is what they want you to think! Now look at how they have us? Pressed together, sexily, and suggestive."
NN: "Ummmm.."
Ms L: " We should end this and love one another...Like I discovered with my roommate in college?"
NN:" What the??"
Ms L: "I wonder what ever happened to Vibrate Girl anyways?"

Bottom right panel:

NN: "That did it! For the last time Liberty, it is not gonna happen!"
Ms L: (sobbing) "PRUDE!"

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Nice one MarDun, you made me spill my iced coffee over the cat. That was hillarious.





 

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hmm...looks like i'm not going to make first place. oh well, at least i got that lunch money thing out of my head. it's been in there for a while


Goodbye, I guess.

@Lord_Nightblade in Champions/Star Trek Online

nightblade7295@gmail.com if you want to stay in touch

 

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I decide on a slightly different, I hope you don't mind.
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“Show me again!”

The Seer held back an exasperated sigh, as she lightly touched the hand of yet another Destined One. Slowly images spilled into Nadya’s consciousness, a breeze of fresh soap and lilac invaded her senses. There was no mistaking that scent, she knew it intimately. It belonged to her…Ms. Liberty. The corruptor grinned slowly, her patience had paid off.

[“When does this happen?!”]


[“Soon”]


[“I’m not paying you to be cryptic”]


[“Within twenty-four hours”]


[“Perfect!”]


A singed astrology book, landed on the table in front of the helmed mystic. Payment had to be extracted from the melting corpses of few Madness Mages, but it was worth it.

Within the safety of her lair, Nadya focused solely on the vision. And with lustful glee, she reveled in a task that couldn’t be called anything but Naughty.


 

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Hope I'm not too late to get in on this:

Panel 1:
Caption: (Upper Left) Meanwhile. . .
Ms. Liberty 1: (Speaking) Give it up Nadia, You’re comi—
Ms. Liberty 2: (Impact) A A A R G H!
Naughty Nadia: Back off Ms. Lame; you can’t win..

SFX (Nadia’s energy blast): SHOOPF!

Panel 2:
Ms. Liberty 1: (Thought Balloon): Stupid
Miss Liberty 2: (Speaking)I don’t need to see to take you down.
Naughty Nadia: Fool. You’re already weakened from my radioactive toxins.

SFX: (Nadia’s Radioactive Punch): SHOOOMMM

Naughty Nadia 2: In seconds, you’ll be completely helpless.

Panel 3:
Ms. Liberty 1: (Thought Balloon): Dizzy. . .must pull out of it. . .
Ms. Liberty 2Speaking) A few seconds is all I need to deal. . . with . . .
Naughty Nadia: Hah!

Panel 4:
Naughty Nadia: I have places to see and other people to do. Too bad you won’t be alive to see any of it. See you in, how you say, another life.
Ms. Liberty: (Fading). . . y o o o o o u u u u. . .
SFX: (Radioactive fumes from Ms. Liberty’s body) fssssssssssss (as needed following the vapor trails)