Mission Arc Critiquing Thread


Adelie

 

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-Mission was short, but that's not bad in a 5 mission arc. You had a small misspelling on your first clue ('on' instead of 'one') no biggie.

-The opening dialouge on the 2nd mission has another misspelling ('randsom' instead of 'ransom') no biggie. Second mission was definantly longer, but it was good. Nice ambush at the end.

-The third mission went pretty quickly for me. A good solid mission.

-The fourth mission was another solid mission.

-I saw the twist coming as far as the identity of the captured. I'll be honest, I didn't complete the final mission. I can't go 1 on 1 with an EB.

Overall, it was a solid arc. I'd give it 4 out of 5. It didn't have that 'WOW' factor, but it was VERY solid. A little elbow grease (and some help with the EB) and it's 5 of 5 for sure.

Also, please check out my fixed-up arc...

Mysterious Circumstances: Redux
Arc ID: 7730
Length: Medium (1 Bank, 1 Casino, and a smallish warehouse.)
Morality: Heroic
Description: A new villain group has emerged in Paragon City. In this arc you must stop them from robbing a bank and fight their mysterious leader.

It may sound pretty dull, but it's a comedy.


 

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If anyone is interested in giving my arc a run through I'd appreciate it. It's a level 10-20 Arc that I was able to solo through with my Fire/Fire tank. Below are the details:

"Behind the Burning"
Arc ID: 7155
Length: Long (it's 3 missions (2 outdoor maps), took me about 30 min to complete)
First Published: 3/20/2009
Morality: Heroic
Description: The Hellions are becoming more organized and someone is behind this change. Their arson targets have been more strategic and it appears that they are using them to cover up their real purpose. Find out who is behind this and what they are after.

I just also finished up a 1 mission arc if anyone wants to try it out. Large teams or high settings will produce an AV. Information is below:

"Future on Fire"
Arc ID: 7709
Length: Short (1 mission, boss is an AV or EB depending on settings). There are 3 Vindicator helpers in the mission.
First Published: 3/20/2009
Morality: Neutral
Description: In the not so distant future, Burnin Fury, the evil twin brother of the hero Burnin Up, has defeated every super powered being on earth. The future earth is a burnt, desolate wasteland. It's now up to you, travel to the future and confront him in Atlas Park, the site of his first attack. (40-54)

Thanks for any feed back!

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Just finished "Future on fire" you did a great job setting the mood. That was the perfect map for that mission, and the fact that every single enemy had fire powers meant that almost all of the time I was on fire, my pets were on fire, the vindicators were on fire, the sky was on fire, the ground was on fire, EVERYTHING WAS ON FIRE!!! So much so that this song was playing in my head the entire time.

My one gripe was that giving heat exhaustion to every single lieutenant might make them a bit overpowered. I was constantly running out of health and endurance. That might have been your point though.

Four stars.


 

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I'll be reviewing Radionuclide's arc here.

Also, please check out my fixed-up arc...

Mysterious Circumstances: Redux
Arc ID: 7730
Length: Medium (1 Bank, 1 Casino, and a smallish warehouse.)
Morality: Heroic
Description: A new villain group has emerged in Paragon City. In this arc you must stop them from robbing a bank and fight their mysterious leader.

It may sound pretty dull, but it's a comedy.

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Hi Super_Tim. I just did your arc. I loved the camp. Might suggest a bit more of it. It did make me chuckle a few times. So, you might take that as a sucess.

Couple of typos (don't we all do those?):
Mission two send off -
He (thinking this should be Hey)
reschedual (reschedule)

On the mission two return to contact text there is a missing space between bit of.


I'm looking forward to arc #2. Where we flight Really Mysterious Guy.


--Rad


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I'll be reviewing Radionuclide's arc here.

Also, please check out my fixed-up arc...

Mysterious Circumstances: Redux
Arc ID: 7730
Length: Medium (1 Bank, 1 Casino, and a smallish warehouse.)
Morality: Heroic
Description: A new villain group has emerged in Paragon City. In this arc you must stop them from robbing a bank and fight their mysterious leader.

It may sound pretty dull, but it's a comedy.

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Hi Super_Tim. I just did your arc. I loved the camp. Might suggest a bit more of it. It did make me chuckle a few times. So, you might take that as a sucess.

Couple of typos (don't we all do those?):
Mission two send off -
He (thinking this should be Hey)
reschedual (reschedule)

On the mission two return to contact text there is a missing space between bit of.


I'm looking forward to arc #2. Where we flight Really Mysterious Guy.


--Rad

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Yeah, I just played through and noticed the typos. Thanks for the review. My next arc will involve time travel.



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