Wow... nice work <o.o> Though I do admit; I'm fearful now <;_;>
On that note; that'd look great with color >.< in a disturbing sorta way.
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Wow, um one word........ 
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:::Jumps in space ship and travels for 3 galaxies and keeps going!:::
....
I believe the operative word is "gulp"
Crap! Nightmares for me tonight.
Very good, if 'yikes' inducing, piece!
Thanks DB...
This is gonnna be my second night with no sleep in a row now...
Yikes.
That's good'n'scary.
Nice job. Should that have an NSFW warning on it or anything?
no nudity anywhere in the piccy 
everything is covered with proper scenery placement
Im way to shy to do overt nudity
[color=#cc99cc]The feet on the dangling legs look so real. I don't know why that stands out to me. But more real equals more twisted in an overall bizarre scene and I like it.
Both are well done in their styles. Colored would be something else, I wanna see that. Very cool stuff!
Poor DB plushie.....
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heee I knew it would be either you , star or Suichiro that picked up on that im such an attention [Censored] I have to fit myself in a pic if I can
That is kinda creep DB, but at the same time it's also kinda cute. Your lines are far too clean, smooth, and curvy to be too scary. You also really know how to make a pic look 3 dimensional(except for those cutting instruments near the bottom where you switch from a front view to top view, but It looks like you did that on purpose for artistic reasons).
I really like the hanging legs, and all the detail around the poor DB plushie(not that I think about stabbing DB or anything )
Good Job!!
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...and here I thought DB was all sweet and innocent...Nice details in the drawing. Creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy. *snatches the plushie and searches out Ishida*
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have to agree...creepy. the original is just good ole pure dark creepy and yours is deranged creepy (imo)
either way...I think I may have some uncomfortable dreams tonight. *gulp*~
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AWWW 
Poor DB plushie!!!!
Great piccy though!! 
I Love how you took the original totally creepy pic (which is very nice on its own 
) and made it, still creepy, but more cute.
Embrace your dark side!!!
Heh...she looks to be the kinda girl I would like to know better!!
Both pieces look great & creepy. Is this "The Widowed" who used to post on these boards under the same tag name?
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Meesa love it , she needs to meet my character Tari
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You know DB, I think someone is corrupting you... that's some hefty stuff there in the background. o.O
*ahem*
One of the things you could easily modify to make it a better piece overall, is make the barbs on the wire realistic to the way they'd really turn. If the barb comes out in back, they'd both exit in back. If it comes out in front, they should both be in front. It'd be impossible for a barb to start in front, wind around, then come out the back. At least, impossible to point in opposite directions like that.
The eyes are looking very nice and crazed. The small iris with no pupil always looks great for the "intense, insane eye."
Another thing, is that she'd probably be holding the lollipop like a spoon, rather than like a broom. If you go and hold something in your hand like you were going to eat it, you tend to use your thumb and index finger to pinch it for more control. I know it's a difficult thing to draw, but the little details will make the bigger picture.
Besides, you're such a good artist that I'm gonna try to make sure you use the most of your abilities. *cracks the whip* Mwahahahaa!
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Heh...she looks to be the kinda girl I would like to know better!!
Both pieces look great & creepy. Is this "The Widowed" who used to post on these boards under the same tag name?
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yep she still does from time to time , but mostly she posts over at CoH GURU
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You know DB, I think someone is corrupting you... that's some hefty stuff there in the background. o.O
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its not me its all the original artist im a goood girl with no impure thoughts whatsoever !
Honestly tho I wanted to try something a lil bit new
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*ahem*
One of the things you could easily modify to make it a better piece overall, is make the barbs on the wire realistic to the way they'd really turn. If the barb comes out in back, they'd both exit in back. If it comes out in front, they should both be in front. It'd be impossible for a barb to start in front, wind around, then come out the back. At least, impossible to point in opposite directions like that.
The eyes are looking very nice and crazed. The small iris with no pupil always looks great for the "intense, insane eye."
Another thing, is that she'd probably be holding the lollipop like a spoon, rather than like a broom. If you go and hold something in your hand like you were going to eat it, you tend to use your thumb and index finger to pinch it for more control. I know it's a difficult thing to draw, but the little details will make the bigger picture.
Besides, you're such a good artist that I'm gonna try to make sure you use the most of your abilities. *cracks the whip* Mwahahahaa!
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EEP yeah your right I'll make those changes preinking Like I said sometimes I get too excited and rush to show off my doodles , which is why I love feedback from you guys
I actually hate doing critiques, because I dislike pointing out flaws in people's art, but this is a WIP thread, not a finished piece thread. I think that anything I can do to help you make a better artwork is absolutely my duty to you as a friend.
Notice why I don't post WIPs. :3 *runs away from criticism on his crappy art*
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*kicks Suichiro*
you are so not crappy you big dummyhead !
you like totally roxxors my soxxors
im so in love with your art and pore over it trying to see how you do this , this or that .
I have even learned new uses for duct tape :P
by saying your crappy your insulting my choice of artists to admire :P
We both have things we can work on as artists. All people do. Regardless of how good you might get, there's always room for improvement and I'm smart enough to understand that I can improve a lot. Some of my pieces really are crappy. :\ But others are great and I have to try to learn what I did right and what I did wrong. That's how we grow as artists. Those of us who are better at putting that into words can help other artists out who are trying to learn too.
You're a great artist. I know a few things here and there that might help you, as I know they help me. Hopefully, you can take the positive and become a fabulous creator, the one that everyone knows is already inside of you.
Now stop kicking me, or else I'm gonna feed your leg to Knuckleodeon. :3
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<. .> I'll mention this puuuuuuurely because I feel the need (I'm feeling pedantic today <;_;> my appologies)
Critiques = <3 <3 <3
What I mean is; by being willing to *gently* point out the flaws in a person's work, you improve them as an artist. You aid their development; or at the very very least help turn out a better piece.
Of course there will be occasions where its just a difference of opinion - and thats OK too - but often times things like "well that finger IS kinda crooked" are important; but are left unsaid.
<;_;> I find it impolite to let people miss a silly mistake though; so I try my best to point out a good thing and a bad thing when critiquing a work.
Lately I've been having trouble though >.<; so I'm prolly not the best to say all that >,<; but yeah <. .>;;
*grouphug* <. .>; just cause!
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Okies Dokies , on another set of CoH related forums a friend whom goes by the handle The Widowed posted their amateur art of their character BloodyWed which I thought was incrediably creepy !
and very nice
besides I wanted to try something new
Scary lil thing aint she
She's apparently bat dung psycho and more than a lil scary but a great arrr pee er
Sooooo I liked the elements in the pic and haven't really tried anything scary so I decided to take a crack at it , Its not really my normal cutesy stuff but err shes not really a cute character
My Sketch of BloodyWed based on The Widowed's Original piccy
as always Comments are appreciated