Starchasm

Kheeeeeeep!!! ;D Glad you came to the dark side! I'm adding you to my global!

Okay, I'm actually pretty excited about this pack now! If for no other reason than I want more tails!!!!

Heya! I'm coming back after several years on Virtue (I played Radey Ayte in the Teen Squadron). Just checking to see if anyone I know is still alive and kicking! And if they aren't, where's a good place to hang out

What's up, Virtue?

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One thing I liked about Graver's "After Hours" was the sheer number of people he crammed in... but at the same time, it kind of detracted from the piece. If you're wanting to focus on the three characters... then don't fill the background with details that'll pull the mind (if not the eye) away from them.

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One of the shortcomings of doing commissions is that you have to work within the guidelines given you by the commissioner.

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PS What about Bokuman? I bet he could really do this one justice too!

PPS Who did that one in your avatar? That's kewt!

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http://sargasso737.deviantart.com/ar...boski-82091415

Also doesn't graver already have queue that's plenty full?

I'm still liking Reiq's style best for this piece and the price is still within reason for what I'm asking for in quality. Of course I still have to see if he'll accept the offer...

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Actually, that's an old queue. He's on the second piece of #3 from that list right now.

Reiq's a great choice too!!! (just watch those bewbs XD ) Both Bokuman and Reiq have that great shiny wet look style that would look really good with this pic.

I would recommend Thally , but she's not taking commissions right now.

I just LOVE this one!!!! And those costumes are awesome!

PS What about Bokuman? I bet he could really do this one justice too!

PPS Who did that one in your avatar? That's kewt!

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Ask Graver you know he is good when it comes down to putting scenes together.

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but graver is more specialized towards great serious scenes, particularly horror. Also his particular art style really isn't appropriate for this kind of light-hearted and sexy theme.

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I dunno, from what I've seen I think he could pull it off! He's been stuck in a bit of a rut lately (and he's getting REALLY sick of wings XD ). I think he could have fun with this one.

Here are some less-than-horror-type works:

Vampiresse

Frog Prince

The Watch

Aw heck, there are tons. Besides, he has a wicked sense of humor and hardly ever gets anyone willing to let him run with it. (Case in point)

To be honest, I'm just DYING to see what he could do with this XD Just the description is making me giggle (and REALLY making me wanna turn it into a chibi XD ).

This is one of my favorite group shots he's ever done!

Extant Force

Graver's okay with money orders and cashier checks

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I guess the reason I don't have a FOO piece is because I assumed you were busy fighting.

OK... bad joke...

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Groooooooooooan

Wow, so Russel is really into those camel toes, huh? XD

Seriously, though, those are really nice. I LOVE the pieces by HolyBell! And I really can't wait to see how the ones by Sanjana turn out. Those are looking fantastic.

What about Bokuman?

His prices are reasonable, his style is similar to the one you suggested, and he does mech-stuff (he's a raging Transformers addict).

Usually I pimp Graver, but I know for a FACT he doesn't have the patience for this

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Well, I am 90% evil.

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Prove it by shaving your head bald and raising a pinkie to your mouth.

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Your OWN pinkie.

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Well what fun is THAT?

OOoooo cool!!!

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OO neat, he looks very Lovecraftian. But GO LINELESS!!! XD It's a crying shame that a nice sketch gets done on notebook paper.

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Isn't that what photoshop/GIMP/etc are for?

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Probably, but I'm soooooo lazy it's just easier to draw on lineless paper.

OO neat, he looks very Lovecraftian. But GO LINELESS!!! XD It's a crying shame that a nice sketch gets done on notebook paper.

And that costume is great! What are his powersets?

Conga-rats!!!!

OOo nice arts! Very pulpy!

And your name tickles me. XD

Eeeehehehehe I can has jelly?

I just finished the second of two comics for DJ Woody!

Here they both are:

Skapningen's Encounter

Virs has a wardrobe malfunction

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It absolutely matters. I don't take anyone seriously as a writer who can't spell. Especially if you can't even be bothered to use the built-in spell-check that comes with browsers these days.

In this paragraph you've even left out your apostrophes in "wasn't" and "don't." If you want us to give you credit then you need to literally dots the Is and cross the Ts. Proofread, always. Obsess over the details.

Sorry, but I have strict policies regarding this profession and I simply can not abide laziness of thought, and two of the strongest indicators of that are bad spelling and poor grammar.

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Seconded, which is why I asked if the OP wanted critiques.

But really, you aren't bad but could definitely use some polishing. I can give that bg the red pen treatment here in a bit if you want, but you really do need to pay attention to the details if you want to be taken seriously as a writer. I almost didn't even *read* the sample you put up because of the double T mistake.

And Clobbertime, generally I'm not big on pointing out spelling mistakes on messaging boards due to their inherent nature. I do think it's a bit different when someone is putting themselves out there solely for their talent for the written word.

Are you looking for critiques, or just doing this for funsies?

AWESOME!!!!! I'm glad to see you're still alive too!

Good grief, you guys are nuts! XD

And at the risk of being on topic, it really cheeses me off when someone who has a collection has more faves on a piece than the actual original ARTIST!

Which goes back to the "d-bags don't read the description" theory