Very rough WiP for Starchasm/Windfallen


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Something really bothered me about his face... after a bit of staring, I think I was able to decide what it is. His face, the mouth especially, looks very very strange to me.

Cat face

He's got paw hands and feet, and a catty sort of a face with what appears to me to be a feline nose... but he has a people mouth. I think it might look a bit more natural (err, unnatural?) with a feline double upper lip.

Or maybe I'm just crazy. Who knows. Anyhow, looks good, I very much like how 3-D the paws look and you did the perspective great!

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That's how she does mouths and I think it looks grrreat! Plus I'm not a fan of realistic animal mouths on anthros, usually it looks forced and weird.

Besides, Wind's more of a boy version of the classic anime catgirl than an actual anthropomorphic cat.


 

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Something really bothered me about his face... after a bit of staring, I think I was able to decide what it is. His face, the mouth especially, looks very very strange to me.

Cat face

He's got paw hands and feet, and a catty sort of a face with what appears to me to be a feline nose... but he has a people mouth. I think it might look a bit more natural (err, unnatural?) with a feline double upper lip.

Or maybe I'm just crazy. Who knows. Anyhow, looks good, I very much like how 3-D the paws look and you did the perspective great!

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yeah agread but remember this was just a rough sketch to determine some placement/pose ideas I'll be doing the real one up tonight or tommorrow .

a few things I'll likely change

1) leangthen face , he looks to youngish cherub faced
2) add glasses
3)add some sort of rug for him to be lying on
4)add milk bowl , broad sword
5) figure out a fun boarder , im sorta thinking of a ball of yarn boarder
6)Debating about putting a bow and ribbons around his waist and on his tail


 

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+1 vote for ribbons and bows! WOOHOO!!


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That's how she does mouths and I think it looks grrreat! Plus I'm not a fan of realistic animal mouths on anthros, usually it looks forced and weird.

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Personally I think anthropomorphic characters look vaguely-to-extremely creepy when put in suggestive poses regardless of the mouth, but it's your character so if you're happy with it as it looks now that's what counts.


 

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That's how she does mouths and I think it looks grrreat! Plus I'm not a fan of realistic animal mouths on anthros, usually it looks forced and weird.

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Personally I think anthropomorphic characters look vaguely-to-extremely creepy when put in suggestive poses regardless of the mouth, but it's your character so if you're happy with it as it looks now that's what counts.

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guys , gals lets not get into a pro/anti debate here I just post mainly to get ideas and feedback not to ruffle feathers .

The pose is hopefully not that suggestive if you think it is im open to criticism .

I prefer cutsey not sexxxy so I do like feedback in that regard .

And Genosaurer this isn't directed at you but just at folks in general on both sides of the fence I value your input greatly both on the art forums and in the arena <3 Genosaurer


 

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Yes please leave the anti-whatever on the various server forums. We like everyone here hehe


 

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ESPECIALLY nekid boycats


 

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nekid boycats are automagically winvincible. It's like the Easter Bunny and Chuck Norris collided and the resulting explosion fused into happysauce.

...because where there's nekid boycats there's nekid girlcats. I know I can find some if I just look hard enough...

(stumbles onto Rowr's gallery and passes out)


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(I stopped reading the thread when it seemed to get argumentative so If I repeat things already said sorry)


Very nice pose . Very feline and playfull. I am not sure about the hands/paw thing. I know you are probably going for the animalistic look as much as possible but to my eyes the hands just look like he got his fingers cut off. On the other hand ( pun intended) I love the rounded head that is a great way to make him look that much like a kitten. Finally it is nice to see a male hero that is not muscle bound that also fit the feline look.


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That's how she does mouths and I think it looks grrreat! Plus I'm not a fan of realistic animal mouths on anthros, usually it looks forced and weird.

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Personally I think anthropomorphic characters look vaguely-to-extremely creepy when put in suggestive poses regardless of the mouth, but it's your character so if you're happy with it as it looks now that's what counts.

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guys , gals lets not get into a pro/anti debate here I just post mainly to get ideas and feedback not to ruffle feathers .

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Seconded!!! I think he looks great!!!

But....but....no bows on poor Windy But maybe a collar with a bell!! Abs has been trying to slip one on him for EVER XD

I don't think the pose is that suggestive at all DB, I think it's more cutesy playful than anything (typically un-Wind, which is why I like it )

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Finally it is nice to see a male hero that is not muscle bound that also fit the feline look.

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Right???? I turned the sliders all the way down on Wind and he's still a little too musclebound for me. Another gripe for the devs (along with a need for smaller bewbs XD )


 

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yeah DB has the slider all the way to the left and I still look like a glamazon !


 

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Looking good so far Berry. You have an interesting style of drawing that I love. Can't wait to see the next step.


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I like candy!


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4/5 dentists dissapprove. Heh.


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But....but....no bows on poor Windy But maybe a collar with a bell!! Abs has been trying to slip one on him for EVER XD

I don't think the pose is that suggestive at all DB, I think it's more cutesy playful than anything (typically un-Wind, which is why I like it )

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Finally it is nice to see a male hero that is not muscle bound that also fit the feline look.

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Right???? I turned the sliders all the way down on Wind and he's still a little too muscle-bound for me. Another gripe for the devs (along with a need for smaller bewbs XD )

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First of all, ya, I'd agree with the whole slider thing... I tried to make a skinny [censored] hero, ad the best I could do was a physique so much better then mine I'd kill my self trying to get it! And Abby isn't really supposed to have brestises but even with the slider all the way down, she's still got a set that I've seen girls get implants to have

And Star, Mr. Boots will wear that collar, he will! He should be more like that good space pirate kitty, Tigger, and just wear the collar... and it has Abby's phone number on it incase he ever gets lost and needs to be returned. it a sign of how much Abby loves her new kitties! And if he won't wear the collar, then he'll wear the bows and ribbons... actually, that's a real nice idea DB (especially since star doesn't like it!) +all my votes for the robins and bows!

And ya, for the pose to be suggestive there'd either have to be a lot more thrust in them hips or the back-side would need to be raised up to catch a lot more air


 

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Forget skinny heroes, I'd really like to make a really fat one. Even with the waist all the way to the right, you can only get a small beer gut, and the rest of the body is still ripped.

-Pep


 

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....but the "standard" hero is Mr/Ms Supertonedbuffbody....normals aint welcome. while it would be cool to see every so often I can kinda see why it really wasnt included in the sliders or body types...cause it just aint the norm for the genre.~


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Yumii has the same problem >< She's supposed to be very light up top - she's a bit more muscular and compact than the average girl (In my mind <,< catpeople are slightly shorter and slightly heavier built than humans, kinda like panthers or tigers; that of course is just my own variation on the genre <,&lt

<;_;> right now though, she's smuggling grapefruit it looks like.

Not as bad as some things though <@.@> Its just 'teh weird' for some reason.

With trenchcoats I'm revisiting an older character concept, The Inquisitor; trench coat, the 'duster' hat (I think thats the name); broadsword most probably, very slim, very tall >.> should look good <~_~> I'm rambly <o_O>


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