Scooter Art
one sugguestion, think about the legibility of the speach bubbles, its very hard to read pyro's bubbles in particular, though the green aint exactly easy either. from a graphic design standpoint you want to make the writing as easy as possible for a reader to read, as the average person has the attention span of a labradoodle so anything that is too hard to read will generally go unread.
as it is I have already given up on reading it. that maroon is far too dark to be against that black.
I only had trouble reading one bubble (last red one, top row) but I agree with Eddy's point... Ease of read is major importanto. Also, what's wrong with the little pointy part of the word bubbles?? Why no love for them? They're classics for a reason!! Ya, I get the color should show who is saying what but if you don't know the characters at all your left on your own to figure who is what color...
Besides that though, I likey! Ok, maybe not the most original of storylines but *shrug* still amusing... Also dig the art... I think the roughness works well here. Nice job!
That'll be tree-fiddeh, please.

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Craigslist?
Well we shared a quick glance
Saturday at the mall
I never took a chance
Never approached you at all
You were a blonde half-Asian with a bad case of gas
I was wearing red Speedos and a hockey mask
Come on let's find that love connection that we missed
ON CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAIGSLIIIIIIIIIIIIST!
Yeah Craigslist, come on!
I'm on Craaaaaaaaigslist!
Well baby, maybe you are too!

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It's an original song, done in the style of The Doors. He even got the original keyboardist from The Doors on the song.
It's one of 5 songs from his Grammy Nominated Internet Leaks EP:
Internet Leaks is the name of the Grammy-nominated digital-only EP that previews songs from the next Weird Al album (which will hopefully be out sometime next year). Internet Leaks contains the T.I. parody "Whatever You Like" as well as "Craigslist," "Skipper Dan," "CNR" and "Ringtone"!

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Christmas came early this year. I got a wacom tablet Intuos3 6x11...I love it still learning how to use it.
I also came to a realization..there is a reason my art doesn't look like any other artist's art....It's my art.
I'm sure my style will evolve as time passes. It looks gritty and rough because right now I like gritty rough. I like how my pencils turn out. They look awesome and something is lost when I scan them. Anyway, back to the paper in front of me.
As promised New art...
Imagine this conversation:
TA: Is he gone?
LL: I think so...um, how did he get you?
TA: Ran me through with my own staff, you?
LL: I don't wanna talk about it.
TA: I wonder how long it'll take him to figure out we're not dead?
LL: No idea...oh crap here he comes.



Lol on the Juggy piece - good thing got you two he's too lazy to properly mount the heads and instead just shoves the bodies behind the wall...
I'm suprised though, juggy seems the type who'd enjoy ripping the heads off by hand
and, err... I liked it better without the pointy things??
(kidding, just kidding!!! I do think it helps the flow of the read...)
Me am dum. Me am no know who LL is.
Me bet me feel xtra dumdum when me find out.

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Me am dum. Me am no know who LL is.
![]() Me bet me feel xtra dumdum when me find out. ![]() ![]() |
I believe that's Lady Lylith, one of Scooter's villainesses.
http://scootertwo.deviantart.com/art...shoo-135086595
(Is she a villainess? They were moved to that folder)
Yes Villainesse...
Grav/Fire Dom
Nasty piece of work with a personality based on my second ex-wife Split with one being a cold calculating sociopathic-beatch the other blood thirsty bat-sheet crazy psychopathic berserker. Although the berserker is calming down with the recent changes to Dominators. However that just made the Cold one more powerful.
I want to improve my craft so I can open for commissions. so gonna start treating the freebee stuff the as such and have a que and....
The List(tm)
- Eddy - Shockexchange
- Vexxxa - Vex
- Mephis Bill - original
- Maynia - Miss Impossible
- Kai -Wyldfyre
- Powerstream - Boozy
- XZero - X-zero
- Bubba - Burnt Matchstick
- Tutor King - Rainbow Jester
- Amerikatt - Amerikatt
Gonna see how long it takes me to get through these 10.
This is not the whole list and I have a personal image that I need to get out of my head before it explodes.
Stay tuned.
P.S. Thanks Bayani-san for moving her.



Yes Villainesse...
The List(tm)
This is not the whole list and I have a personal image that I need to get out of my head before it explodes. Stay tuned. |

I am curious about the "personal image" you have in your head, Scootz! Um, on second thought!!!

~*~VexXxa~*~
The City Scoop Art Correspondent/Writer "ART IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER"//"Don't hate because VexXxa is HOT and you're NOT." - JOHNNYKAT
Oh. Well, I guess I don't feel quite so bad then... >.>
This is not the whole list and I have a personal image that I need to get out of my head before it explodes.
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*runs and hides*

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Your head asplode'ing involves a city in Georgia? Wow, and here I thought I had issues... >.>

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As usual when people post these things:
http://thrythlind.deviantart.com/gal...acter-Profiles
take your pick, have fun.
http://thrythlind.deviantart.com/gal...eneral-Fiction
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