ok, try 2 at replying, hit the wrong key last time and shut the window ¬_¬
*ahem*
WOW! 
I find the torso/hip/legs angle a bit odd
The Wing doesn't align with the head band
And the breast seems... I don't know, dispropotionalte? out of place? I can't put my finger on it (don't take that the wong way! 
) Maybe it's too seperated from th torso, might also be a combination of the things named.
That said, I couldn't draw if my life depended on it. So I'm in no position to say it's no good. Well, that and the fact I would be lying if I did.
It really is a great piece of art.
The colouring.... just wow.
The fiery eyes fix the wings/headband alignment, and the sword makes the torso/hips/legs angle look ok.
And the background, nicely done! It actually looks like she's in an inferno and liking it!
@ShadowGhost & @Ghostie
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Woah, very nice. Few things are a bit off, but it's still better than anything I could do 
Bit more practise and you can open up a site and start taking cash for doing these 
hmm... it's good but... maybe this would work better... then again I am not as good as you... But the point in it would give her more of a neck and better footing... I hope that made sence and helped...
~Kooma
What ever...
Just get it...
Over with all ready...
Yay! replies!!
Thanks all for looking ^^
MaX, thanks but I'll keep in the amateur side of things :P Either that or join MMOart if they'd ever take me on..
The original ball point sketch if anyone's interested.
ShadowGhost, thank you for the feedback. You're right, there are issues with the hips/pelvis area. Unfortunately for me, it only became clear when I was in the later stages of the colouring.. so too late for changes. >_<
Kooma, hmmm... interesting.
I appreciate your draw-over ^^ it does help indeed.
I would go back and change the leg like you are suggesting 
However, for argument's sake, I find the neck to go well with the nonchalant pose I was trying to give her..
But I am keeping your draw-over for reference though :P
Thanks again for your replies..
WOW!!! O_o Love the coloured version.
Looks great , so, whens yor next piece done? 
V.nice Swiss, your usual very high standards.
Huzzah
Shnyet AWAY
I like the rough a lot in fact^^ I always find sketch interesting for it's possible to see the construction of the drawing
Recieved a couple of pm's with screenshots, Orina's Fire/Fire Tank pictures were calling me ^^
So after being ingame all day yesterday, I took what started to look like a small break. The result? it's 6 am and I'm finished. >< I can see daylight peeking through the blinds and thankfully the birds' chant can't cover my listening to Tool's new album ...
Anyway, Orina's:
Inked version
Final coloured version
Comments and criticism are welcome..