Frosty's Revenge: WIP -- boarderline for work
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Posted on: 2006-08-24 16:38 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
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I would like to take this time to /em drool. Thank you for your patience.
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Ummm....
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I'll be in my bunk....
(Nice!)
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Now that....is attitude.
I really like this Celsia! 
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hehe, looks right good so far! Good arc to the back and a nice backside 
Her hand, however, bothers me a bit. It looks more like she's gabbing her cheek as opposed to smackin' dat which she would be doing if she was telling ya to come get some. You might want to splay the fingers a bit more and straiten them out so the hand is less grabby and more smacky.
This is gonna be a nice one when you get done 
Ooo nice!!! 
Aside from the hand, which Graver so....eloquently....addressed The bottom of her leotard on (our) right is a liiiiiittle too close to the ....er....crack. As it is now she has a super-wedgie.
But it's really looking GREAT! That face is really good! I can't wait to see it finished (are you going to color it? )
Yeah I though the hand was off too. I played with it for like 1 hr and still just not there yet.
Wow looks good!
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hehe, looks right good so far! Good arc to the back and a nice backside
Her hand, however, bothers me a bit. It looks more like she's gabbing her cheek as opposed to smackin' dat which she would be doing if she was telling ya to come get some. You might want to splay the fingers a bit more and straiten them out so the hand is less grabby and more smacky.
This is gonna be a nice one when you get done
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Lawl.
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Ummm....
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I'll be in my bunk....
(Nice!)
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Firefly ftw. 
As for the art, it's coming along very well Celsia! I can't wait to see it's next evolution.
Think I got the hand straigtened out (or splayed or .... its getting hot in here) lol, . I will rescan tomorrow.
*sniff* I miss firefly. Joss ftw in general.
this, looks freakin sweet so far...but, aside from the wedgie & the hand, i'd say maybe the lips. they just look out of perspective imo.
could just be me, but it IS a w.i.p. right?
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Her hand, however, bothers me a bit. It looks more like she's gabbing her cheek as opposed to smackin' dat which she would be doing if she was telling ya to come get some. You might want to splay the fingers a bit more and straiten them out so the hand is less grabby and more smacky.
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Actually I would bring the four fingers together - not splay them out more and arch the fingers back slightly. But that's just my opinion on how I would handle it.
A wonderful piece overall though and quite a departure from most of the poses we see.
Very shiny. Really like it.
Ok the hand is now in a more open almost swinging slap potition, and the posterior coverage has been modified.
Frosty's Revenge
Great start!
can't wait to see it finished
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Great attitude in that one Celsia. That emote was quite amusing when i first tried it, actually it still is. Great work on it. Personally I find it more natural to slap a butt or anything else with fingers closed *as he swings his hand in the air to test both options, open fingers, closed fingers, open fingers* yea deffinatly closed. But very nice either way .
Oh yeah,
if you ever need a model of someone slapping their buttox, I'll do it!
/e getsome
**slaps back side loudly**
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OOo looking good!!
And the whole fingers open vs fingers closed thing; fingers closed would be if you were just lazily patting your butt. To really get the feeling of the action of smacking (and I mean reaching waaaaay back and giving it a good tap - it's the only way to make a point ) the fingers need to be open. Because of the way your fingers are constructed, its really hard to have them pulled back *and* have them together, or have the hand be tensed and have them together. You have to consciously keep them together, and who in the hell is going to think of *that* when they're smacking their butt?
So, as a girl who went through a....phase, I think it looks great with the fingers open.
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So, as a girl who went through a....phase, I think it looks great with the fingers open.
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Well then Starchasm I bow to your ummm.. personal experience at *smacking* 
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So, as a girl who went through a....phase, I think it looks great with the fingers open.
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Well then Starchasm I bow to your ummm.. personal experience at *smacking*
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Just don't ask her about any of her other phases *twitches and shudders*... at least the butt phase was... kinda normalish
Oh, and yes, the hand does look a lot smackier! Great job on that! However (and please don't hurt me) her thumb looks like a finger. It's jointed and positioned wrong. It should actually be on it's side where, if it were to curl up, it would bend towards the fingers. Also, it needs to be positioned closer to the wrist and coming out of the side of the hand. As length goes, it should roughly be as long as the hand it's self (sans fingers) coming to an end about where the fingers actually begin.
And I seem to have a weird obsession with that hand now... Still, it's a great piece... but it could be better
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No, np at all graver. I appritiate the help. *stops targeting graver with lazer of death* REALLY. Nah, that is an easy fix, and as has been said many many times hands are troublesome. That is why I have been posting wip's lately, so everyone can nitpick the errors so they do not detract from the final pic. It is all about learning.
ok hands hands hands . Hopefully this solves the problem, and I can now pregress to inks.
Frosty's Revenge Again
The thumb had been bothering me too, but Graver had beaten me to it. But I wanted to say in the revised version it's much approved!
PROPER!
I decided to spread the pictures to my sg, and am starting a piece for a long time sg mate. She loves the getsome emote and can often be seen typing "bite me" or "kiss my [censored]" so I wanted to get some of that attitude here. Tell me what you think.
Forsty's Revenge