Ollie_H

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*Please comment folks cos I'll continue writing if people like it, I have to write the next chapter as I wrote this some time ago, I realise the beginning bit, being sat alone, is a bit lame in terms of the fact that I started writing this as something completely different and it just developed. Any suggestions, likes and dislikes are well apprieciated from a writers perspective*

Gotta say I can't see why some people are opposed to this, I think it's a clever and simpl idea, I think take away the pumpkin from the /alakazamreact and add that spin from the advert amongst other cool (but not as flashy as powers) emotes would be awesome. Do it the manual way if you wish, but I think in terms of RP this adds...

Can't the hunting party just be like every other random zone spawn mob (bar fire and troll rave). That is they have no lovel, so anyone can pitch in and help kill them regardless of level etc etc.

Freakshow do appear in the sewers, and I have seen them around the streets on the edge of the park in Perez. That old data IS OLD data, we are on issue 13 now.

The woman flew towards Ollie and knocked him to the ground, on his way down he saw that Fahrenheit was getting ready to swing an uppercut up towards him, partially in reflex his eyes flashed and suddenly pain filled the fiery man as wounds appeared on his skin, deep painful wounds, that slowly healed up but would leave him incapacitated, Ollie; able to hover just above the ground before hitting it, swirled up towards the nether empowered witch.

“Indeed, it is time to get serious” said Ollie with determination in his eyes. He concentrated and three beings of purest light appeared from nowhere, each one sending punches or illusionary rocks at the witch, each once sending her up further and further into the sky, Ollie followed her and then with a wave of his arm made her bleed uncontrollably, the blood trickling out of her then slowly began to return inside, however it was too late and she began hurtling towards the ground below. Ollie raced downwards and caught her laying her on the floor next to her “brother” who’s final wound was just about to heal up fully.

Ollie looked at the silent, apparently telepathic woman and asked “Who are you, and why would you make me fight?” his arm rubbing his side where he had been hit quite hard by Twilight.

The woman looked at him nodding for a moment and then saying to him telepathically “I am Forsaken Moon, I am able to control the minds of others. The reason I made you fight was to see if you were worthy to face the one known as Death’s Messenger”

“Who?” he frowned,

“The man of whom we spoke, we will require your skills to take him down, all will be explained in due time, for now we must depart,” she darted her eyes at the recovering heroes, now rising to their feet.

Ollie nodded and the hero pair behind him got up. Forsaken Moon stared at the pair and nodded once more, and then once again looking at Ollie “We will contact you when it is necessary, until then my child. Good bye.” and with that the three disappeared and confused faces looked at him as he must of appeared from no-where, he returned to his seat and this time his thoughts on the task ahead. Instead of loneliness, he felt purpose.

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Meanwhile upon the top of the highest building in Galaxy City stood a visage, it was not a ghost of sorts, but an ethereal essence shrouded in a golden aura, it was gazing down at the statue quite close by, staring at a spot where four young heroes stood talking, he glared for a moment and clicked his fingers,

“Fantastic…more work for me…” the mans voice was grave and down trodden, his eyes pin [censored] of white within purely black orbs…

“Master, I watched the boy, he fights well” the new arrival was a short man, his hair was a purple colour, and he wore dark sunglasses covering his own eyes, he stood like a man with no purpose, slightly hunched, slightly stocky, he would have not looked out of place in the thug wing of the Zig.

“I saw him, Kanos, I saw him…” stated the grave voice unaffected by the new presence, “He is nothing special, puts on quite a light show though.”

“Sir, I heard Moon saying she thought his powers were only an 8th of what they could be given training”

“ Don’t be a fool Kanos, the boy is not interested in being anything other then himself, he does not flash his powers around like most heroes… I don’t even think he knows any other heroes, which is why those fools present a huge difficulty for me”

“Why…? Can’t you just-”

“Quiet Kanos, if it were that simple I would have already done it!” the visage lifted a gloved right hand to his face, and it began to shake violently, he pushed it down with his un-gloved left hand.

“Things have become rather more complicated, sir?”

“It seems that way Kanos, my hand thirsts these days, as if it has a will of it’s own. I need to take life. At first it was a necessity, now it has become a need… Before I killed because I could, now I kill because I have to.” the mans voice seems to give a small laugh and he stood on the edge of the building for a moment longer before jumping off.

Kanos looked down to see Death’s Messenger disappear in a shadowy puff of smoke.

“…I guess this means I shouldn’t ask for a raise…?” Kanos gave a light chuckle, looked around and took out a small beacon with a red flashing light on the top…

“…I shouldn’t think this will look out of place here…”

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*Author's Note: Any characters who's names are similar to yours are purely coincidental, I wrote this a while back but I intend to continue the saga if this is met with a wee bit of joy, please read and please comment*

He sat, alone, granted he was surrounded by people, running around trying to laugh and trying to come together, to be more then they were. More then likely they had filled themselves up with a tearing sensation, like one of those that makes you feel sad but happy, it’s hard to explain. So there he was, looking at it all, trying not to scream or cry out for attention, his psyche stuck upon two things, life and love. “Okay,” he thought “What can I say, to make these people disappear?” His loneliness a clear shining beacon amidst the society he was garnished in, flooded with people shouting and talking and laughing.

“Oi! You, sat on that step…” said a voice, quite unfamiliar

“Yes…?” he said looking up clearly un-phased by the aggression in the man’s voice.

“What the hell do you think you are doing sat there?” the voice seemed calmer this time,

“Well what with this city being smothered in heroes, I‘m feeling kind of pointless. Now if you don‘t ind I have nothing to talk about, unless you can suggest something?” He rose to his feet his eyes searching for the voice, all he could see were faces, innumerable faces, all with the same look etched into their eyes; one lacking purpose.

“Oh I think this is a clever one boys and girls, perhaps we should cheer him up?” the voice suddenly apparent behind his head made him squirm…

“Why don’t you go away?” he exclaimed, not sure why these people were there or who they were…

The voice, the deep aggressive voice was now so much closer, but still not a view of what it was had come to be. And then as if by magic he was levitated in the air, suffocating, a hand around his throat, he begged, pleaded for whatever it was to show it’s self. And then there he was, a man, draped I a dark starry cloak, glittered with silver and gold markings and his eyes ablaze with oranges and reds, wearing a tight vest with small snakes of fire seemingly dripping from his skin. The hand now became excruciating around his throat, like someone was burning each cell away. No-one had noticed, and if they did, he was sure they would walk on and try not to effect the pair.

“You said boys and girls…? Where are the rest of you?” he said through a rasping breath…

“Here, boy… HERE!!!” the man seemed to anger at this, his eyes now more fiery then ever, and then the rest appeared, all unusually dressed, a woman that he had recognised as Dark Twilight and another woman he recognised but did not know the name of…

“Get…. Out of…. This…city, you… belong in the isles… with the rest of the scum that escaped the Zig!” His voice now painfully croaking, his chest gasping for air,

“Show us… Show us your power…” The female voice was eager, he noticed that she was holding in her grasp an orb of dark energy,

Sighting the opportunity he heaved a great gasp once more, starting to twitch under the pressure of the mans hand “If you want to see what I can do…. Put… me…. Down!” and the man did so, the boy recovered his previous demeanor and once again the boy sat, quite confident but still breathing in deep gulps of the oxygen he required to carry on, his eyes now glowing a bright white,

“Hmmm, you are not a native to Paragon then…?” said the man looking like he did moments before, still blazing, his eyes showed anger but his voice showed mercy.

“First, tell me who you are…?” the boy asked slightly warily, his voice wavering, but showing a slight cockiness.

“I am the one they call Fahrenheit, I am the will of fire and strength…and who are you boy?!” the man stood his ground and this time there was no way but to answer his question.

“I don’t have a name of sorts, they just call me Ollie…” said the boy.
“Ollie?… Well we have heard much about you, I know you could have stopped me from harming you in a second…” said Fahrenheit looking rather like Ollie was some sort of magnificent weapon.

“I doubt it with a grip like that!” Ollie slightly relaxed here, he was still unaware of these people and how safe he was around them. He was wearing citizens clothes and to use his full power here would be foolish…. Unless…

“First, tell me what you want from me, and why you had to be so aggressive to get it?” said Ollie his eyes now no longer glowing.

“We had to see if you were who we are looking for!” said Dark Twilight as she played wistfully with her hair, the orb now no longer in sight, “You see, we require your… help!” she clicked her neck

“Help with what?” he said a bit confused

“To help us,” he paused unsure of how to proceed and then sighed slightly, “find someone.” Fahrenheit suddenly looked uneasy and he looked to the other woman for guidance, she stood there in silence but looked like she was thinking about something, she nodded to Fahrenheit and then smiled slightly,

“You see, there is a man, with the ability to kill with but a touch of his hand, he stalks the city, finding us heroes and then touches us, either by a shake of the hand or a punch to the face, either way these things will either kill a hero instantly or incapacitate them for a long while.

“And, what am I meant to be able to do then?” said Ollie, bemused and at the same time intrigued.

“You can turn invisible, and create illusions with your mind, am I wrong?” Said the other woman’s voice, not aloud, in terms of vocal, but in his mind…

“You are correct, but how am I…” he was suddenly halted by the raise of the lady’s hand and a nod to Fahrenheit…

“Show us, kid.” said Fahrenheit, his hands suddenly turning into fists of flame, Dark Twilight had suddenly began hovering and powerful nether energies had surrounded her, and the lady simply stood back to watch.

“Fine… but shouldn’t we…?”

“They can’t see us kid, you have been invisible from the time you first sat down here…” smirked Fahrenheit

“Well uhh, if you insist…” said Ollie rising to his feet.

He concentrated and was now invisible to the pair who looked unconcerned, suddenly the ground rumbled beneath Ollie’s feet and dark spores and arms surrounded him curling around him entrapping him. He struggled to move and then his eyes flashed bright white and he was in the air the arms unable to reach him, his eyes flashed once more and bright light surrounded the pair blinding them to a degree that it hurt to even have their eyes closed. Ollie created a large energy pulse that beamed around him and flew towards the pair, flinging them to either side of the steps on which he had been previously sat.

“Hmm, nice move there… time to get a bit more serious!” Fahrenheit shouted and balls of flame encircled him and then absorbed into him as if granting him the energy to continue,

“Indeed brother!” smiled Dark Twilight her eyes now no longer clouded by the powerful light.

The woman flew towards Ollie and knocked him to the ground, on his way down he saw that Fahrenheit was getting ready to swing an uppercut up towards him.

*TO BE CONTINUED* NEXT PART READY...

The Rogue Isles Reporter has on it's front this morning, pictures of three male "victims" the report underneath reads.

The latest stream of crime in the Isles has been pretty gruesome, as, news has it, three men have all been killed in the same style. It has been said each man was killed brutally during a sexual act, each victim has had thier testicals removed, and it is thought fed to them and then had thier throats slit.

It is unknown whether the killer is going to continue thier rampage, but it is assumed that they will. The serial killer has been nicknamed "The Bloody Maiden" and has left no evidence at any of the scenes.

It is assumed that the killer is a female and may have had accomplices, the men have no link and the murders took place an hour after the other.

The Rogue Island Police had this to say:

"We are unsure at this time about anything, we have our best men looking into it. The killer will be caught, it is just a matter of time, we have no seen such a disgusting display since the images that were in the news a few days ago, however it is not thought this is linked with the organisation E.V.I.L. The investigation is on-going as as I have said we are looking into it."

It has been suggested that the woman could very well be any female "villain" in the isle... keep your eyes peeled folks.

-Written By
Janine Ryan

As usual it is founded that CoH RPers don't like change... as I have seen here, people don't like change, not speakin for all of ya of course...

Since my SG is nearly full now, I would be more then happy to join your idea... BUT only if you actually get it off the ground, the University would be more then happy to be part of this idea, perhaps be involved in heading the campaign... get in touch with me, in game if you so wish @chakra ...But by the sounds of things it seems that you want to organise storylines before they happen... I like the idea... Anyhoo

Rick Thompson

NZ

Paragon University is growing... and growing vastly... we now have 105 memebrs now and the University it's self is looking for more teachers... we would like you to join US, if you didn;t see in a previous message posted here, we have a website and a forum, and the students need to have teachers to learn... as ya do, so if you are intersted drop me a line, preferably on here... as I am generally busy at teh University these days and so dont have time to pick up messages there...

Laters

Professor Rick Thompson

NZ

I am pleased to announce tha the University of Paragon now has an up and running internet site, although still under construction I hope it will bring all the information needed about us... We also have a forum... Sign Up...

Forum
Website

Hope ta see you around.

Rick Thompson, Dean.

As far as this thread was going I was gonna let it go... I have resolved my problem with Aisla in game...

As for the comment about me spamming powers... I have only EVER done that once... the first time I cam to GG... and you guys are slightly biased... understandably. But seriously guys... my spamming was not the issue here... the issue was godmodding, WHICH I admitted to doing, did any of you read my post without just looking at the critisisms I was making?

Yeah I am a good RPer cos I can get into a role very well, I have played many different styles of RP and I know how its done and the general rules... you can play for 20 years and still not be good at it not a comment generally aimed towards anyone here... I have done it for 3 years and I have been told I am a good storyteller... I also believe IMHO that yeah I am, you guys just don't like me cos a) I have an opinion, b)cos I said I don't like someone who is a friend of yours and c) I did a bad thing first time I came to GG... and Raven is evidence that you guys hold a grudge when that wasn't even the source of the arguement.

Funny thing is really that the people who have posted are the people I targetted my problems at... I don't need to be part of your channel FFM I am there because I enjoy the company of a lot of the people in there.

Reading your posts also it seems you only picked out the negative points... are you blind to the rest of my post... Aisla saw it, she took constructive measures to ensuring myself and her got on... and thanks Raven for being petty enough to talk about the fact I made a spelling error... good for you. The quote "I don't like Aisla" does not show the full picture... I also said "I could learn to change my mind" and I have now I have spoken to her.

By the way Raven why hould I have to earn your respect when it is clear you don't require mine, I mean it's all well and good saying to me "You want respect, earn it" but I havn't really been given a chance you guys seem to have a set opinion of me cos I said I didn't like one of your friends?

Fact is guys you are all giving my a bad rap cos I am actually being honest... I'm not gonna say "Oh I love someone" just cos you guys all do, nor am I going to say "Oh I will conform to your laws cos it's your channel" if your bloody minded enough to think that way FFM that's up to you, I accept you don't like change... which was what you said, no twisting of your words.

God guys... *sigh* ... well done to you anyway, well done for acting like school kids, I came in here and sure thing I told ya it was fine and I understood what you guys said and you found the bad in it, banded together, pfft... don't wanna hear your objections to this post... why not say something constructive about it... Hey look I am godmodding your next response, oh and no sarcasm... sick of having to interpret it from text... WOO... don't ya just love hypocracy?! <---Oh look humour...


Go go go!

NZ

Ok... I have read... Thanks for the replies...

What I have to say about this is... yeah you are right... it was stupid to stand up after gettin shot in the head, infront of people... but it's not like I said "NZ stops the teleportation from occuring," when infact he was interacting with Number Nine...

It is also true that i was playing a god-like character... hey I aint the only person at GG who has by the sounds of things and I doubt I'll be the last... My objective was to create a character the opposite of Rick, rude, obnoxious and uncaring, that was my objective... I came to understand that that needed toning down so I did....

I admit it... I don't like Ailsa... all be it my problem it seems you guys have a high opinion of her... I did not veil an insult but was simply repeating what she said to m in a tell... I was also not adding ehr name into the thread through what she saw as immaturity, it was what was occuring to me while I was typing and there is no insult implied... I was infact saying that she said: and I quote "Numerous people have spoken to you, in GGOOC and behind your back to me..." I was infact asking you to act like adults and talk to me.
The comments made about talking to me already, it wasn't talking... it was the mods saying how stupid I was for saying they had a "complex" which wasn't even my wording... the other week an argument was caused BY A MOD- the afformentioned above- saying that Nyu and I should have paid attention to her character telling us to "Stop Shouting".And I have to say Ailsa, why bring yourself down to my level if you have such a problem with my mentioning you... or was revenge that sweet, I don't like you... I don't wish to RP with you... and that is simple as... and regardless of what your friends think I have had a very antagonising time from you. I could change my mind, you never treated me nicely, and for whatever reason I hope you get over whatever problem you have with me, seriously... since I can't speak to you because you have ignored my @ channel after insulting me a few times without giving me chance to reply, I mention this here... Thanks, oh and no guilt trip or whatever you may think I have hidden here intended.

Now I have looked at your comments I have taken them in... I Read some very interesting points and I agree with them... I have learnt from what you said... some of you more then others.

As for the rest I respect your opinions... I dont figure there is any reason to apologise for my actions in this case since I told you here that I have taken steps to avoid it again, if I bring Luthor back for whatever reason he will be the same as he was but without god-modding and without the spontaneous head shots (Which I didn't plan) he was a very complex character or so I had it planned and was not intended to annoy people just because he claimed to be one of many beings who formed a dimension.

I am a good RPer, I have done it for a long time and I know how it works, like I said grant respect it shall be given... my Alts such as Rick and Ollie H get on with everyone they have met so far, probably just this character.

Sorry for babbling, oh and btw get to know me for me rather then me for my character as it turns out when I have spoken to a lot of ya it has been about problems caused...

I have tried to make this sound as uhh, I dunno, mature as possible so if it sounds slightly stern sorry.

Anyway thanks for replies

NZ

Hi everyone sorry for the late reply, havn't been able to get on here for some reason... cookies me thinks, anyway, give me a shout whever... and I shall invite, Paragon University would be proud to take on all of you, and we do accept the more mature students!

Nuke

O.K... a lot of you will be aware of the recent cuffufle experienced with one of my RP characters... Although I don't think it fair... people didn't like his character because he was called "Luthoriun Cantactuu, The Creator of Suns" had anyone gotten to know him they'd have found it was just a title.

Also a lot of people found that fact Luthor got shot in the head only to rise a second later saying that it was no big deal a big deal, the characters I was playing with at the time happened to know nothing would happen... Only I get abuse from about 5 people telling me that I should stop godmodding. At first I took this with a pinch of salt... but I am gettin sick of people tellin me how to play and what my characters should be like before even getting to know them. Luthor was an interesting character who I enjoyed playing but I killed him for the sake of keeping lines of diplomacy open, regardless of this I ask you to please get to know my character (In your character) before calling him Scitzo, a bull**** and stuff like that, it's called respect for your fellow RPer, something I have (Since i became a member of the GG club), found hard to come across from some of the people who have been there for longer then I have...

Now I expect you will object to this statement... perhaps even say "it's my problem" or "we have had this discussion before" but in truth no we havn't it ended up with me being silenced in GGOOC without the problem being resolved and with me apologising because I didn't mean to cause trouble... I get that you guys have a system, but I would like to be able to RP without having my neck bitten off or being told to move away when I am doing my thing.

As far as I am concerned Luthor is dead and I will return to being Rick, nice and boring with no memory of Luthor or whatever, but I just thought I'd bring my feelings to your attention, and if you don't like what I have said feel free to tell me here, or don't bother and talk to me online... just please have a bit of respect for me and I shall you, I have my friends in the RP community, if you do not wish to be one of them that is your perogative, just don't act on it or talk behind my back, as I heard from Ailsa, most of you are adults, act like it and talk to me.

Thanks

NZ

If ya ever do come to Union... feel free to Join The University of Paragon!

Sure thing... It would be a pleasure...

:P nmake a slot... and Lee Shan... contact me in game either through @Chakra or at Galaxy Girl after 9pm cos Nuke is usually there...

Lots of slots... lot of jobs... come on people

Hello Ladies and Gents,

My name is Richard Thompson or perhaps to some of you Nuclear Zealot.

Through a recent promotion brought on by hard work and contribution to Paragon City, I have become Deen of the Paragon University and I am looking for fresh blood to liven up the place, bring it more flavour, grant it a sense of home for not only civillians but also heroes... This Heroes and Heroins, is where you come in... Are you looking to expand yours or others minds? To become part of a large community where keeping people safe and learning is made fun and interesting?.... Paragon University is for you...

I, Professor Richard Thomspon, am looking for new students for Paragon University's recruitment drive.You must decide what you would like to study, or teach... That's right folks we are also looking for teachers. If you can teach anythging from, Physical Fitness to Divinity... We are looking for you.

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New SG I am planning to make... Thought this would be the best place to Advertise, I have been saving for a while to give it a good start. The basic aim of the SG is to RP students and Teachers, help out with missions, raids and Task Forces... and to have fun... Get in touch with me @Chakra or via Nuclear Zealot... or sign up here and I'll give ya a shout...

Hope you are interested... I also plan (When it's started) make a reguar post on here a continuous Sory Line, o that you no PU's can get involved too ...

Hello Ladies and Gents,

My name is Richard Thompson or perhaps to some of you Nuclear Zealot.

Through a recent promotion brought on by hard work and contribution to Paragon City, I have become Deen of the Paragon University and I am looking for fresh blood to liven up the place, bring it more flavour, grant it a sense of home for not only civillians but also heroes... This Heroes and Heroins, is where you come in... Are you looking to expand yours or others minds? To become part of a large community where keeping people safe and learning is made fun and interesting?.... Paragon University is for you...

I, Professor Richard Thomspon, am looking for new students for Paragon University's recruitment drive.You must decide what you would like to study, or teach... That's right folks we are also looking for teachers. If you can teach anythging from, Physical Fitness to Divinity... We are looking for you.

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New SG I am planning to make... Thought this would be the best place to Advertise, I have been saving for a while to give it a good start. The basic aim of the SG is to RP students and Teachers, help out with missions, raids and Task Forces... and to have fun... Get in touch with me @Chakra or via Nuclear Zealot... or sign up here and I'll give ya a shout...

Hope you are interested... I also plan (When it's started) make a reguar post on here a continuous Sory Line, o that you no PU's can get involved too ...

((Hi there guys, I am Nuclear Zealot, some of you might remember me as the annoying guy who spammed Thunder Clap, this is just my post to say sorry, for that and for not apologising sooner, I love RP and to be honest I have had many different RP experiences on games such as World of Warcraft and Final Fantasy 11, so please I ask nicely for you to forget my stupidity and allow me to start again ))

Backstory: Rick Thompson was a Nuclear Scientist at the Paragon Nuclear Facility during the Rikti war. One night he was working with his wife, also a Nuclear Scientist, on a new finding he had discovered, (A way to contain nuclear energy that would potentially stop any form of radiation poisoning in the event of a meltdown) but that night a Rikti assult hip destoyed the lab, Rick survived but sustained heavy radiation, his only hope was to use his own creation on himself, it worked but it left his blood full of nuclear energy.

Rick created a device which he placed in his heart to harness his nuclear blood and swore revenge on all that meant to harm those that were in love. He had lost his wife, but he would not lose himself to grief.

A few years later Rick has become a Professr of Nuclear Sciences at Paragon university where he continues to use his abilities in Technology to invent tings that will help him in his endevor, most recently his Weather Control Beacon (W.C.B) and his Matter Transporter...

He's a bit of a ladies man but can't, completely, get over his late wife (Emma), he likes a drink and a good joke, but also enjoys teaching his subject!
He'll see you around