Need help with my bio!!

he kinda looks like a villain so i figured we could say his mentor was a villain or something so please help!!!
Also he is a Battle Axe/Sheild defence tanker hero.

You link points to your local computer drive, /Cwe cant view it.

Try picpaste.com or imageshack.us and upload the picture there. That will give you a link to put in your post.

thx idk if u can c the pic no let me know if u can

We also need to know his power sets and Origin. Is he starting in Praetoria or is he starting in Rogue Isles?

Also, my old person eyes and brain need a translator for the SMS.

Some things to consider for the bio:
-How did your character get their powers?
-Why did they choose to use them for good/evil/justice/mayhem/the greater good/etc?
-What goals does your character have?
-What cause(s) do they stand for?
-How did they come to become a member of their super group (if applicable)?

There I fixed it and I will use proper grammer for you now!

Here is anthor picture if you want a better look.

As you stated, he looks like a villain, so why not go with that? Why not make part of his bio be that he was evil and then had some life-changing event that shifted him to the side of good? I've done a couple characters with that kind of a back story and it really makes for a strong bio, especially for villainous looking heroes. Some ideas for life-changing events could be;

- Life saved by a hero
- Someone close to him slain by a villain (or even his master)
- Had to perform some act that was too horrid for him to live with.
- Saw something that pushed his conscience to the breaking point.
- Code of Honor violation.
- Chemical or Biological influence shifted his alignment.

A bio should be private! You need help with that ask a doctor, not the boards!

Is his origin Natural, Magic, Tech, Science or Mutation? All of those could give you a "hook" for the reasons he looks villainous. I would try a variation on a Code pushed too far or if Magic a Geas " you must do good to pay for your crimes".

I made bio so thank you all for all the help. Exept for the whole bio privite thing that was just dumb ,if you think so dont write it and just keep it to your self.