A City of Heroes Movie - Fan Project - Any Interest?
The only thing I could provide is voice-over, but I would love to help!
I think this is a fine idea if you can get the right team together. A Pick-up-Group for an ambitious project like this can get rather daunting. I certainly hope the right talent comes forward to get your vision off the ground!
That sounds really ambitious. I think it depends on your script. One of the main problems with dialogue is the static faces. You can get around it somewhat by using armor and full-face masks so it might work.
Are you interested in sharing the screenplay at all? Or the first 10 pages so we can get a feel for it?
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Cool, glad to hear it sparks some interest and thoughts.
I agree about the limitations of the dialogue and lack of moving mouths - another reason I started leaning toward 3D models but that became too incredibly daunting for one person, particularly one person with no formal 3D modeling experience! But I'm very open to any ideas people have whether it be demorecord or modeling or animation or whatnot.
I'll pull out the script tonight and get a 5 or 10 page section of it up here for viewing. I'll find a spot that isn't too revealing but that shows some of the more complex things I'm going for with the story. Would love to see what people think of it.
Evangel
Well, I think I know a bit about demorecording and filming in-game and such. I'd be happy to help.
Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite
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I'm good for voice acting and assisting with script writing. I'm quite charming!
you can cheat a few emotions with demorecord. In the demorecord you'll see were the face model is being called.
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The yellow text is a face texture that you can easily swap out for a different face. So you can do a super smilely face in one scence and a super frowny face in anther scence.
Getting a screenplay together for this project is pretty important but you're going to want to storyboard this project (like they do in comics).
The only thing I could provide is voice-over, but I would love to help!
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I'm good for voice acting and assisting with script writing. I'm quite charming!
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Well, I think I know a bit about demorecording and filming in-game and such. I'd be happy to help.
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you can cheat a few emotions with demorecord. In the demorecord you'll see were the face model is being called.
Getting a screenplay together for this project is pretty important but you're going to want to storyboard this project (like they do in comics). |
Also, have a script segment and figuring out the best way to post it on here to maintain formatting and everything - should have it up soon for viewing.
Evangel
Here's a 10 page script sample from the movie. I'm not going to attempt to explain the context of this beyond the fact that it's the first major action scene of the movie. City Hall's roof has just blown up while a city council meeting was taking place inside and the helicopter with the attackers inside is fleeing the scene -- nearby on the plaza, under the statue, the long lost leader (Target-Man) of the dismantled "Guns of Paragon" supergroup has returned and is contemplating using their beacon (a metal shaft that shoots a firework - think bat signal) to re-assemble the team.
A lot of characters and such in this. It's not a heavy dialogue section but it conveys some of the complex action I'm looking to attempt and some of the complexity of dialogue interactions between characters. It happens about 35 minutes into the movie.
Uploaded it as a PDF to a simple file upload site. Please don't repost anywhere and all that.
Guns of Paragon - Script Sample - 47.33 KB
Evangel
I actually have a decent (and free) storyboarding program that I use when my clients want to see storyboards of of their projects.
http://www.atomiclearning.com/k12/storyboardpro (download links are on the lefthand side)
It's a bit awkward at first, but once you get used to it, it's an excellent resource.
Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite
THE COURSE OF SUPERHERO ROMANCE CONTINUES!
Book I: A Tale of Nerd Flirting! ~*~ Book II: Courtship and Crime Fighting - Chap Nine live!
MA Arcs - 3430: Hell Hath No Fury / 3515: Positron Gets Some / 6600: Dyne of the Times / 351572: For All the Wrong Reasons
378944: Too Clever by Half / 459581: Kill or Cure / 551680: Clerical Errors (NEW!)
Read what you posted, and I like the action. I can picture the flow, and chaos of what's happening just through the clipped dialogue. I imagine more character development comes before and after this snippet.
I only have one real gripe, and that you said this is "by fans, for fans". The amount of cursing might not jive with the "T" rating of the game, and a lot of fans. It is possible to limit the cursing without removing the movie's teeth.
For the record, I'm not offended by it...and I'm fairly sure you're aware of this potential "limitation". The cursing likely matches your vision of the film since you did write the script.
Just putting it out there!
I was picturing it in my head as I was reading it. Excellent dialog and imagery! I'm very excited about the potential of this project going forward, and would be glad to help in any way I can.
I would certainly enjoy providing some voice acting, if you're in need. Badge (bungeeball) in the protector server has been sitting on a great project we filmed going on two years ago in game, which I contributed to. Some day hopefully that'll see the light of day
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Okay, that's not a bad writing sample. However, the main problem I see is that it's unfilmable as written. Very little of that action is supported by the game engine. It's a decent enough first draft, but it needs to be completely rewritten in order to make use of demoedit. My biggest recommendation is is to consider what you can do with the game engine and write action sequences designed around that. Look at Michelle's latest film to see what can be done to massage the existing game assets (models, emotes, etc.).
Action scenes should be written so they can be understood without sound. If you need dialogue to explain what's going on, then it hasn't been pared down to its essence.
Specific critiques about the writing: lose the f-bombs in the sluglines and text. As Gehnen noted, the game is rated T, so it's best to drop the rest of the profanity as well. I see what you're trying to do with side-by-side dialogue. Unfortunately it doesn't lend urgency but muddies the throughline. Stick with the basic format. There's a reason it's existed largely unchanged for nearly seventy-five years.
All that said, I'm willing to help on this project, too.
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I'd also advise tracking down Aralcox's videos on YouTube to see some of what the game can do. Night Prayers is by FAR my favorite, although Pulse and Princess of Dusk are tied for second.
Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite
THE COURSE OF SUPERHERO ROMANCE CONTINUES!
Book I: A Tale of Nerd Flirting! ~*~ Book II: Courtship and Crime Fighting - Chap Nine live!
MA Arcs - 3430: Hell Hath No Fury / 3515: Positron Gets Some / 6600: Dyne of the Times / 351572: For All the Wrong Reasons
378944: Too Clever by Half / 459581: Kill or Cure / 551680: Clerical Errors (NEW!)
I only have one real gripe, and that you said this is "by fans, for fans". The amount of cursing might not jive with the "T" rating of the game, and a lot of fans. It is possible to limit the cursing without removing the movie's teeth.
For the record, I'm not offended by it...and I'm fairly sure you're aware of this potential "limitation". The cursing likely matches your vision of the film since you did write the script. |
Thanks! Yep, the cursing was something I go back and forth on, I wrote the movie in a PG-13 mindset, so I let some "damns" and "hells" in and an occasional "sh*t". It's something I'm flexible on in some ways as long as it's not a lot of grown men running around saying "oh darn!"
But on that note has anyone else noticed more contacts cursing in game lately? Quite a few have a line or two that includes "damn" or "hell" used in the cursing sense.A T rating pretty much relates to PG-13 which allows minor cursing, it appears the devs are finally taking advantage of that.
Okay, that's not a bad writing sample. However, the main problem I see is that it's unfilmable as written. Very little of that action is supported by the game engine. It's a decent enough first draft, but it needs to be completely rewritten in order to make use of demoedit. My biggest recommendation is is to consider what you can do with the game engine and write action sequences designed around that. Look at Michelle's latest film to see what can be done to massage the existing game assets (models, emotes, etc.).
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Yep, and that was the big reason I started leaning away from demorecord. I didn't want to "dumb down" an action scene just because of restrictions. I could rewrite it with demorecording in mind but then I'd never ever be happy with the end result. I figured if anyone had demorecord ideas to cheat it, great, but really at this point the action almost requires an extra helping hand - 3D modeling or otherwise.
Specific critiques about the writing: lose the f-bombs in the sluglines and text. As Gehnen noted, the game is rated T, so it's best to drop the rest of the profanity as well. I see what you're trying to do with side-by-side dialogue. Unfortunately it doesn't lend urgency but muddies the throughline. Stick with the basic format. There's a reason it's existed largely unchanged for nearly seventy-five years.
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And glad to see a lot of people willing to pitch in and maybe make this possible. I know it's a massive undertaking and really just seeing what we can brainstorm or come up with, but the energy is great to see!
Evangel
Nice Ev! Glad to see you are resuming your interest in getting this movie from paper to actuality! You know I'll help out where I can... It's been a long two years (seems like longer though) And I think this might just be my first post to the forums ... ever!
*Guess not... says I have two posts... wonder what the first was!*
Yep, and that was the big reason I started leaning away from demorecord. I didn't want to "dumb down" an action scene just because of restrictions. I could rewrite it with demorecording in mind but then I'd never ever be happy with the end result. I figured if anyone had demorecord ideas to cheat it, great, but really at this point the action almost requires an extra helping hand - 3D modeling or otherwise. |
Good luck moving this project beyond the pipe dream stage if you're planing on someone showing up with the time and skill to animated this in 3D. To go 3D you would need someone to create each art asset needed for this movie. You want to put Statesman in your video, someone needs to build that model. Is a scene going to take place in Paragon City? Someone going to have to build that city scene out of art assets they already own, build whats needed or purchase something from the web. Are you suppling cash to help this part of the project move forward? If you need me to rain on your parade more I will, but you need to reexamine this whole project and figure out how to fit it into demorecord since all the game's art assets and locations are available for use for free.
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In the end I think you're taking my question too literally as though I'm here begging for people to work for me. I'm simply asking if there's interest, if people would want to shoot some ideas around, and see.
I'll kindly remember you're not interested in that, lol. Feel free to keep raining.
Evangel
But on that note has anyone else noticed more contacts cursing in game lately? Quite a few have a line or two that includes "damn" or "hell" used in the cursing sense.A T rating pretty much relates to PG-13 which allows minor cursing, it appears the devs are finally taking advantage of that.
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"Oh, good."
Yep, and that was the big reason I started leaning away from demorecord. I didn't want to "dumb down" an action scene just because of restrictions. I could rewrite it with demorecording in mind but then I'd never ever be happy with the end result. |
Cursing is addressed above - but dual dialogue is actually standard and formatting is all according to current screenplay formatting spec. Some writers don't like to do dual dialog, some do, both are standard. |
I'm just saying that it's a nuclear bomb and should be kept in the back pocket for that exact moment when it's needed. And it almost never is.
The non-dialog text doesn't effect the movie rating - a lot of people use "harsher" language in there because it tends to allow you to explain something in less words. Saying "character A looks at character B - what the f***???" is far shorter to write and easier to convey than "character a looks at character b - and gives a look of wide-eyed confusion". Just a writing preference really. Convey the most amount of message in the clearest and most relatable way with the least amount of wording! |
I don't mean to be a downer, I just want to keep it realistic.
And glad to see a lot of people willing to pitch in and maybe make this possible. I know it's a massive undertaking and really just seeing what we can brainstorm or come up with, but the energy is great to see! |
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OK, I've been debating posting this for a while, and wasn't sure where to post as I don't visit these forums all that much, but thought I'd give it a go just to see what people thought or if anyone responded. Going to preface this by saying this is a long post, and I apologize for that but wanted to see if there was any interest in this or not.
Some Background Information
For the better part of two years I've been working on a fan project of sorts and playing around with the idea of making a movie based on the City of Heroes content. I am a professional video editor in "real life" and an aspiring screenwriter. I used those skills way back in the day to win the action category of the second (and apparently last) annual CoH video contest with my "Evangel" faux movie trailer. After that I started working on the faux movie trailer that I would submit for the third annual contest but when the third annual contest never came I just started developing more and more and eventually turned it into a fan movie project. So I started writingÂ…
The Movie
About a year later I finished a rough draft of a feature-length movie script based on my then-fledging super group The Guns of Paragon. The script is an action-drama story about a broken super group (the Guns of Paragon) that needs to re-form in light of a growing war in Eastgate - a war between the evil factions of Paragon and the Paragon military and heroes. The script explores a lot of the iconic places and people of the game's lore while focusing on a dramatic tale of this shattered super group that now must regroup to end this war.
And over the course of the last few years I've been refining the script and playing around with different ways to easily bring this movie to life in some shape of form as a fan project for City of Heroes. But the demorecord function has always been a pain in my rear. The positioning and cam mathematics become very burdensome when you try to get into more creative scenes, and making a 2 minute movie is one thing - but a 2 hour movie becomes just painful, especially with advanced fight scenes and heavy dialogue. And even the process of editing a demorecord file becomes painful. So I tried my hand at 3D modeling. I have a background in animation but I have next to no experience in modeling and most of my attempts at building 3D replicas of my supergroup mates and other CoH characters fails miserably. So I've bounced back and forth endlessly trying to find a way to make this movie without spending hours banging my head against a wall and/or without spending money to hire a professional.
So I've been thinking - if it's a fan project, why not ask the fans. The few times I've come to this forum I have noticed the amount of talent this community has. Through past contests I've seen people that have a far far better understanding of the demorecord function than I do. And through avatars, signatures, and links in profiles I've seen people here have great talent with 3D modeling and art. Overall there is just so much skill here that I thought I'd see if people would want to collaborate - instead of one man trying to do everything, why not see if people wanted to mess around on this thing for fun together.
Bringing it to the People
I thought it would be neat to maybe follow a pattern similar to Rooster Teeth and their Red Vs. Blue series - instead of trying to make a 2 hour movie just make little 5 minute chunks and release them here in the forums every two or three weeks. A little fan web-series made by the fans for the fans. And that's where I turn this over to anyone reading this to see if there's any type of interest/response/thumbs up/thumbs down or whatever.
With all of the people here that have talent in modeling, animating, voice acting, etc, do any of you have any interest in working together to make a fan project? Whether it be through in-game demorecording, 3D animation, or otherwise? Dedicating a few hours a week to working on something as a side project just for fun? Or am I crazy? I know it's a huge undertaking and something that would be a slow process of just working for fun in our free time and collaborating over the internet. But I think it would be fun if a handful of people were on board for it and if we could combine our separate talents to make a cool fan project for the CoX community to enjoy!
So let me know what you think. Reply here or send me a tell in game @Evangel
Thanks,
Evangel
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