We pause this MA Arc for a Youtube video
Now, to actually answer the OP's question:
I'll go look at a trailer beforehand, but I'm highly unlikely to pause in the middle of an arc and go consult an SSI book of text paragraphs... er, I mean YouTube.
The text limits aren't that small, and if you're still running out of space, then as both a storyteller and an editor, I suggest trimming for brevity and impact.
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and some people have psychological issues with any unusual storytelling methods.
Does that include every editor on the face of the earth? Do they all have "psychological issues"? If a newspaper editor tells a reporter to write four column inches he writes four column inches. Not three and a half, not five, four. He'll have written it so that it can be cut down or extended if necessary, but what he turns in will be what the editor asked for. |
and Writers in every field have to deal with similar requirements. The ability to meet specifications is part of the reason why the professionals get paid and we don't. People who can't aren't "creative", they're would-be prima donnas. |
I apologise if my choice of words offended you, venture. By 'psychological issues' I didnt mean you were nuts or anything. I merely meant that some people, yourself included, dislike MArcs that fall outside of what you consider acceptable, but that other people, myself included, are more open to give them a shot. I did point out in my response that it really comes down to which kind of player the OP wants to appeal to.
Each to their own.
Expecting the material to fit in the space provided is not indicative of "psychological issues". It isn't an outrageous or unreasonable request. It isn't even an unusual one. |
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Must a painter find and grind their own pigments, weave their own canvas, or create the universe before they are "allowed" to create what they imagine?
No, but if they're working for someone, or in an art class, or submitting work for a contest, or in any other situation wherein they are called upon to work within specified parameters, they work to those parameters or they fail.
Consider that (if I recall correctly), every single existing arc in the game follows the "just a bunch of stuff that happened" template
You don't.
It seems to me that by your same logic, mission architects should not seek to deviate from that established model by attempting to add meaning, persistent consequences, and other concepts not supported by the system.
The poor quality of the bulk of the canon stories are not the product of the requirements, i.e., it is not the case that it is simply not possible to write a good story under these conditions. Plenty of people already have.
And since Venture is the one who signed an agreement with every existing arc creator allowing them use of the Architect as long as they make an arc that fits his standards, it's entirely his call what the framework is and how much deviation from it is acceptable.
Everyone has standards. Mine are just better than yours.
Apparently, in the alternate reality Venture lives in, editors are only for traditional paper newspapers
I distinctly recall saying....
Writers in every field have to deal with similar requirements. |
And while I'm shooting from the hip here, I expect that if you are putting your work into MA in the hopes of getting "noticed" you'd better write arcs that fit into the space provided and look and feel somewhat like canon content. PS isn't looking to put someone on the payroll to write a 47-act magnum opus about their supergroup's Mary Sues. New hires are going to be told something like "we need 10 Skull and Hellion arcs for this new lowbie zone we're opening, get to work". You're going to be working on the company's material for a while before they start entertaining your ideas about new directions.
and there's never any reference to other articles, papers or books in any article.
In a technical article, sure, but that's an entirely different breed of catgirl. A short story that breaks in the middle and says you need to go read another short story before continuing is a failure.
This would be valid IF the MA was a finished product. As it is now it is a story telling medium in development. Our creativity will help the system grow.
There is no indication that any of the underlying parameters are likely to change any time soon. In particular I very much doubt the devs would even consider adding cut scenes.
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Y'know, someone should really go and gather up the requirements and underlying parameters of the Mission Architect that the devs have stated are expected of authors.
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From experience, I'd have to say, no, I wouldn't be willing to switch to YouTube to view a streaming video as part of the story arc.
I say "from experience" because, as it turns out, I've already run an arc that had a video linked to it (Ashley Porter and the Gorilla War, a fun WW2 era romp), and I didn't look at the video until some weeks later.
The video proved to be pretty awesome (I wish I had that author's skill at demorecording and video editing!), but I certainly didn't look at it while I was playing the arc; and even if I had, it would've been unfair to let my opinion of the video (which is really a different medium) color my opinion of the story arc.
However, if the MA interface changed so you could splice a "cut scene" seamlessly (or approximately so) into your story arc, I'd be totally OK with viewing those. That would essentially make the video clip part of the AE experience.
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Re Venture (on iPhone, hence odd quoting method):
" [Must a painter find and grind their own pigments, weave their own canvas, or create the universe before they are "allowed" to create what they imagine?]
No, but if they're working for someone, or in an art class, or submitting work for a contest, or in any other situation wherein they are called upon to work within specified parameters, they work to those parameters or they fail."
i think the contest analogy you use is the best one for the AE. I would say that this pRticular contest has as many judges as there are Players, and so 'failing' it is, well, possibly even moot considering that different 'judges' have different success criteria.
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MArcs:
The Echo, Arc ID 1688 (5mish, easy, drama)
The Audition, Arc ID 221240 (6 mish, complex mech, comedy)
Storming Citadel, Arc ID 379488 (lowbie, 1mish, 10-min timed)
I don't think I'd like having to go out in the middle of an arc to look at youtube.
That said, trying something like having a video or series of videos where things related to the arc happen, and they compliment each other, doesn't sound like a bad idea. Kinda like what they tried with The Matrix, except I don't think it worked too well there because the game wasn't that good really (Enter the Matrix, that is).
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And since Venture is the one who signed an agreement with every existing arc creator allowing them use of the Architect as long as they make an arc that fits his standards, it's entirely his call what the framework is and how much deviation from it is acceptable.
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Here, let me explain using bullet points:
Things you're not allowed to put in your Mission Architect arcs
- Farms
- Copyright infrigment
- Malicious code that breaks the arc server
Things that are perfectly okay to put in MA arcs
- Bad spelling
- Mary Sues
- Nonsensical plots
- Sweeping assumptions about the player character
- Specifically, treating the player character as a moron unable to spot the most obvious trap
- Spreading one clue across multiple fields to get around the character limit
- Breaking unspoken expectations the players have about plots
- Other kinds of playing with the format or conventions
Sure, some of the things on the second list may annoy other players, and if an author cares about making a good impression and getting favorable ratings, they can try to avoid those things. But that alone does not make them "outside the provided framework".
You can complain about the arcs not living up to your personal standards (I'll leave aside the question of how one person's standards can be "better" than another's), but if you want any authority over what belongs in player-created missions, *you're* the one who's going to have to design and produce their own game.
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Well put, Silver.
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MArcs:
The Echo, Arc ID 1688 (5mish, easy, drama)
The Audition, Arc ID 221240 (6 mish, complex mech, comedy)
Storming Citadel, Arc ID 379488 (lowbie, 1mish, 10-min timed)
I think the best reply is already in MrCaptainMan's signature...
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Good grief.
I think you'd limit your audience by using a Youtube video, but you might still have an audience. You might offend people if the video requirement is sprung on them after they've already started, or you might just have people not start your arc if you mention it up front.
But there's absolutely no harm in trying this. I am stunned at the linear, lowest common denominator philosophy of some of the posts above. Sure, write a formulaic arc that everyone can play, everyone can understand. Flip burgers. People need people to do that.
Or try something different. The City of Heroes crowd may be too insular to ultimately appreciate your efforts to get out of the box, but your inventiveness may someday stretch to other things, other facets of life, other worlds... and the cute little gimmick you perfected here may find a nice big luxury home in another context.
Long live creativity.
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While a creation is purely in the hands of a creator, that doesn't mean that outside advice is completely useless or unwarranted. Just because a creator is well within their rights to do pretty much anything, that doesn't mean that anything that they do will be liked by their audience, or be a good idea.
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Writer: "Here's my arc - its intended for X and it does Y"
Player: "OK, I'll give it a go"
or
Player: "Hm, not my cup of tea sorry"
The OPs request for comment from the forum-goers here has hopefully given him the answer - some people will accept a youtube video as part of his arcs narrative, and some won't
It's still up to him alone to decide whether or not to use one.
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MArcs:
The Echo, Arc ID 1688 (5mish, easy, drama)
The Audition, Arc ID 221240 (6 mish, complex mech, comedy)
Storming Citadel, Arc ID 379488 (lowbie, 1mish, 10-min timed)
I'd say go for it if that's what you really want to do and damn the naysayers. If only two people "get" what you wanted to do with it, then the arc is a success. Only a few people might "get" it, but it'll be the right few people.
I was going to mention MrCaptainMan's arc but hey, here he popped up and did that for me. It does build tension pretty well, so I'd recommend you look into that arc and see if the technique or something like it might apply to your story.
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Wow, I wonder why he turned off his forum reputation thingy...
I got tired of immature hate speech in the reputation track.
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Wow, I wonder why he turned off his forum reputation thingy...
I got tired of immature hate speech in the reputation track. |
mind, i dont get a lot of hate. If it was worse, i might get fed up too.
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MArcs:
The Echo, Arc ID 1688 (5mish, easy, drama)
The Audition, Arc ID 221240 (6 mish, complex mech, comedy)
Storming Citadel, Arc ID 379488 (lowbie, 1mish, 10-min timed)
From experience, I'd have to say, no, I wouldn't be willing to switch to YouTube to view a streaming video as part of the story arc.
I say "from experience" because, as it turns out, I've already run an arc that had a video linked to it (Ashley Porter and the Gorilla War, a fun WW2 era romp), and I didn't look at the video until some weeks later. The video proved to be pretty awesome (I wish I had that author's skill at demorecording and video editing!), but I certainly didn't look at it while I was playing the arc; and even if I had, it would've been unfair to let my opinion of the video (which is really a different medium) color my opinion of the story arc. However, if the MA interface changed so you could splice a "cut scene" seamlessly (or approximately so) into your story arc, I'd be totally OK with viewing those. That would essentially make the video clip part of the AE experience. |
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This is a fair point. My own personal view is something like Consumerism:
Writer: "Here's my arc - its intended for X and it does Y" Player: "OK, I'll give it a go" or Player: "Hm, not my cup of tea sorry" The OPs request for comment from the forum-goers here has hopefully given him the answer - some people will accept a youtube video as part of his arcs narrative, and some won't It's still up to him alone to decide whether or not to use one. Eco. |
Personally, no, I would NOT play the external video. And if your arc doesn't make sense without it, it's taking a hit in stars. Basically if you plan to do it make sure you have the same text of said speech in the ACTUAL ARC SOMEWHERE.
If streaming directly from Youtube did ever become an option for MA authors, the devs better make damn sure you can auto turn it off BEFORE they start an arc. The griefing potential alone with that is astounding.
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People can go after my opinions until the cows come home, but there is a line between attacking an opinion and attacking a person. Writing things like "you have mental issues" in someone's rep track pole-vaults over it.
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This would be valid IF the MA was a finished product. As it is now it is a story telling medium in development. Our creativity will help the system grow.
Drawing outside the box is the point of the system.