ohhh nice im always envious of your crisp pencil work pep 
his kneeling leg/thigh looks very thick in proportion to his arms /head
other than that im liking it
I was thinking something on the thighs was abit off but yeah other then that it's very awesome Pep.
nice work pep....I like the blasting him outta his shoes take...take that evil CoT!
critiquewise...I too would take another go at that kneeling leg. although its not all that bad imo...just needs a lil tweeking.~
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In this current pic, his left thigh is too long.
Always good stuff, otherwise.
Heh cute You should swap his sword and put it in front of the Thorns sword, because the way it is now it's shifting the focus over to him instead of to the hero!
And oh how i hate 'arrow armor'! 
But yes on the legs. :P
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A fellow member of the legendaries SG, Freeborn, was injured while serving overseas, so I thought I'd make a pic to cheer him up. He's a energy/fire blaster. This is what I've got so far. Critiques please.
-Pep
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I have 2 positive things to say and one constructive criticism <^_^>
1st good thing: I love that he's being blasted out of his socks <,< hilarious!
2nd thing: I like the scene overall <@_@> good job!
Only criticism I have is the hero's mask has a line where his jaw is... and it looks... odd <;_;> not sure I can suggest how to fix it presactly; but that's what I noticed >.<; Hope that helps!
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A fellow member of the legendaries SG, Freeborn, was injured while serving overseas, so I thought I'd make a pic to cheer him up. He's a energy/fire blaster. This is what I've got so far. Critiques please.
-Pep
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How badly injured, and is he going to be okay?
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He heeee, blasted out of his socks.
And another nod about what everyone's said about the leggies 
This is really sweet of you pep!
I like it Pep!
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I think that having both his fire powers and his energy blast powers in a single scene is confusing. It'd look a lot cleaner and possibly more impactful if you chose one or the other to focus one. I know it's nice to see all parts of the character in a pic, but most times there's simply no room for it unless you're extremely creative and talented with layouts. I, for one, am not. Since his Energy blast is his primary, I'd probably stick with that.
I love that he's getting blasted out of his socks quite literally. :3
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Thanks for the responses, gang. I knew I could count on you. As for his legs, they are pretty Ginormous with that armor on them. Here is some background on Freeborn, and some pics.
Free was shot in the leg and arm, but seems to be making a quick recovery. Only time will tell if he has any permanent nerve damage, but he's doing good. He was one of the soldiers in this news report.
A fellow member of the legendaries SG, Freeborn, was injured while serving overseas, so I thought I'd make a pic to cheer him up. He's a energy/fire blaster. This is what I've got so far. Critiques please.
-Pep