Paragon City: Galaxy City Zone Update

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Take 2

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Nope, Arctic isn't up here in W_1's orbital space platform of doom... Maybe he'll visit tomorrow.

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Orbital space platform of doom, eh? Color me intrigued. I would like to subscribe to your newsletter.

cheers,
Arctic Sun

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/em thumps up

Now I have a question, will we ever see these mythical Ritki Hover Tanks in game?

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I like it, as a Galaxy City based hero I enjoyed learning about my first patroling area.

I also like this line:

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When the smoke cleared, Galaxy Girl was gone.

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Leaves it open to encounter her again...she gets transported by Rikti or some other hero/villain, etc etc. Though the wording toward the end of the paragraph regarding Proteans attack could use work

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His sacrifice gave Kelly the time to recover and defeat him, ensuring so many more survived.

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Maybe instead: His sacrifice gave Kelly the time to recover and defeat Protean, ensuring so many more survived.

Though one thing:

For many people (at least on Virtue) it's become something of a tradition to train level 50 at Ms. Liberty or Brawler, whichever one you started with. Maybe if this isn't just a Virtue server practice but happens on all servers could we see a little blurb added to the AP/GC zone story(s)?

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One little typo:

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His sacrifice gave Kelly the time to recover and defeat him, ensuring so many more survived.


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Should probably be "...recover and defeat Protean..."

Otherwise, the his and him are confusing.

Not a big deal....but I couldn't let it go...sorry

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Dang...Powerhelm beat me to it....


"You win this time Powerhelm.....this time.......!"

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Anyone see anything that I missed?

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Just that Cassiopia definitely needs to be fleshed out more and given enough respect that she *really* stands out on her own.

Galaxy Girl saves Ms. Liberty, gets a zone named after her.

Cassiopia saves the *WORLD* on her own and gets a plaque and a statue.

And I vote that the Meteor that Cassiopia destroyed be related to the Shivan Meteor if at all possible! There's gotta be a way to tie it all together!

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Took me a min to find it again thought it was in the bloody bay zone description but if you go to the villian descriptons on the Cov side and read the one for Shivans, it names that a group of hero's went and destroyed the metor and we got some left overs that landed in bloodybay but it never names the hero's so cassiopeas story could me merged with this one quite easily.

Great job artic and well done accepting feed back from those of us that keep up with the history of the world.

Lady Athena always loved that orbital thread from beta, lol again.

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<.< I still say he "appropriated" that station from the litterbox, we're missing 2 and a moon base.. course, we're also missing _Water_ who made them... soo.....

o_o could weaver_one have kidnapped her?

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ok I kept pretty quiet about this but it has been eating away at me. I usually just enjoy the writen pieces and news tidbits and rarely comment on it. But my issue is I liked the first story much better. I know you had to change it to correct errors Artic_Sun and you did a wonderful job. But I found your first story much more moving. It truly touched my heart and I actually enjoyed it considerably. I guess my point is, it is unfortunate that such a wonderfully written piece had to be torn down to blend with the city story line when I personally woudl have prefered a rewrite of the original city integrated story to blend with the piece your originally wrote.

I just had to get that off my chest.

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