PlagueOfUndeath

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  1. I dunno...Mary-Jane and Peter Parker have been married as long as I've been able to read, until One More Day.
    Why can't we have a spider-man story that takes place during the time AFTER they're married? Limit the romantic tension! Focus on the action! Plus imagine the jokes you could have with a married spider-man!
  2. every single magical girl villain EVER, and by extension (almost) every Super Sentai/Power Rangers villain as well.
    They never go into battle themselves, despite being able to toss around the hero(in)es without a thought.
    They never send more than one "general" and will kill them if they fail too much (this trope is fading in recent shows I've been watching since the "general" makes great cannon fodder for a new toy...er, power up).
    Despite being capable of fielding armies of mooks and having a crapton of them (I'm looking at you Power Rangers/Super Sentai) on screen, they only send a dozen at most to fight off between 3-7 super strong youngsters/teenagers/twenty-something/whatever. (a few seasons of power rangers/super sentai and magical girl shows at least have an excuse...usually they're trying to keep an operation low-key).
    They almost never dispatch more than one monster at a time. When the baddies barely have their loyalty it makes sense, but if you have one guy who can, say, turn people to stone, and another with super strong armor...wouldn't it be a good idea to send them together?
    They waste resources! Don't make your monster that's near defeat grow big just so he can be wasted by the heroes' giant robot! And better yet, if it's being caught in the magical girl's purification attack, WHACK HER WITH A STICK OR SOMETHING! Those things are almost always incapable of hitting more than one target! Recall your troops, and prepare to attack again later, stronger than you were before.
    There's "being ineffective" and then there's "making your enemy stronger"...
    ...a lot of these villains do the latter. A lot.
  3. PlagueOfUndeath

    Mouse Cursor Fun

    Ever since the patch, my mouse cursor has randomly decided to start sliding across the screen on its own.
    The first instance of this happened was after the patcher finished BEFORE I launched the game (can't really launch the game if i can't click on it...)
  4. Wicked...?
    ID: 188104
    Morality: Neutral
    Missions: 5

    Basically this is an introduction to a magic-based character that's gonna be involved in a lot of my arcs from now on.
    The first 4 missions introduce her and her friends, the last one is her test.
    WARNING: Alice is HARD solo. Even as a lieutenant she 2-shotted my Widow, bring friends
    Also, the last mission is a "boss rush"...the spike in difficulty from the other 4 is HUGE
    I'm working on a sequel as well, expect it soon =P
  5. Yue the Oni:
    Cute Bruiser
    Red Oni, Blue Oni
    Improbable Weapon User
    Half Human Hybrid
  6. "Even if we got it to work, what's to say there isn't some interference? You know, the same thing keeping the cell phones and other teleporters from working..." Akemi pointed out.
  7. "Considering I have an alien living inside me, I'm surprisingly inept at technology," Akemi shrugged, "Good at magic, though. Dunno why."
    (OOC: If you're wondering why there's a story arc detailing her origin in the Time/Space Shenanigans thread...shameless plug )
    "But what I wanna know is...if Jack's still alive."
  8. "I'm Akemi Shido," Akemi introduced herself again, "Peacebringer, and, well, that's pretty much it for now."
    Akemi floated into the portal and looked around. Of course, to her 'look around' consisted of flitting around every square inch of the building.
    "Pretty nice. Needs light though," she said, clapping her hands and generating about a dozen brightly glowing orbs that flew off in various directions, better illuminating the base, "Always bugs me how dark and gloomy these places can be."
  9. Akemi took aim at the swarm of bugs, shaping her hand like a pistol.
    "BANG!" she called, firing a burst of light energy into the swarm.
  10. [ QUOTE ]
    ((The problem is all our characters have no idea what's going on, so really they have no reason whatsoever to move from their current position. Thus, for them to find out anything events must be set in motion by the GM of the RP, which is you in this case.))

    [/ QUOTE ]
    (OOC: This. So far our only motivation is nothingness)
  11. "Well whatever's going on," Akemi said, worry in her voice, "I hope Jack's okay..."
    And that he made lasagna! Kan'u chimed in.
    "SHUT UP KAN'U!"
  12. "Talking axes? Meh, least I'm not the only one here talking to inanimate objects," Akemi laughed.
    I'm not inanimate! Kan'u complained.
    "It's a joke, Kan'u," Akemi said.
  13. "So any idea why our cell phones don't work? Think it affects the hospital transporters too?" Akemi asked, still hovering just above the ground, "I suppose there's a way to find out, but...well, that would hurt."
    Truth was, she REALLY liked flying, and wasn't likely to actually land anytime soon.
  14. [ QUOTE ]

    (( and rouge is women's eyeliner. you want Rogue. that is, if you don't follow paradigm's fine advice to run this RP in the other thread ))

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    (OOC: nitpicking: rouge isn't eyeliner, it's french for 'Red' and can refer to either blush or lipstick. always the red kind)
  15. (OOC: Except Akemi and Danny are flying through the air, probably pretty fast too...)
  16. I'd imagine there'd be some attempt at recovery, but given how many gangs hang out there, it'd probably be difficult.
  17. "Of course," the young Peacebringer said, flitting around the rocketing man, "By the way, I'm Akemi, Akemi Shido. I don't have a 'Peacebringer' name...long story. What's your name?"
  18. Akemi noticed target Lad out of the corner of her eye, still huffing about the lack of reception.
    Maybe he knew why her cell phone wasn't working.
    "HEY!" she called, flitting over towards him, her own trail of light energy weaving through the air, "What's goin' on around here?!"
  19. (OOC: This'll be a challenge for me considering the OTHER thread, but I've been looking for an excuse to use this character now that her origin is all wrapped up )


    Silence. Akemi wasn't used to silence. King's Row was usually a bustling hive of activity, but now it was quiet.
    Why?
    How?
    She didn't know.
    Don't ask me! came the voice from within her, Kan'u, her Kheldian symbiote.
    "I know Kan'u, you never seem to know anything these days," Akemi smirked, "May as well call and tell Jack I'll be home late."
    I hope he makes lasagna again, Kan'u commented in a 'tone' that denoted giggling.
    "Shut up Kan'u," Akemi laughed as she took out her cell phone.
    She wasn't getting a signal.
    Odd.
    Very odd.
    "Huh, no deadzones my cute asian [censored]," she muttered, taking to the air to try to find better reception.
    That was when she saw...
    (OOC: Your move )
  20. IMO, no story is ever truly finished.
    Especially fanfiction
    E.S.P.E.C.I.A.L.L.Y. fanfiction
    I only have one semi-complete story on here and even I wouldn't consider it complete :P
    Needs fleshing out, y'know
  21. For natural characters I just take them as they're named, a point in the fight where they gain a boost
  22. actually a lot of people would care if it was called an asylum. most mental hospitals these days aren't much different from retirement homes...seriously
  23. As far as I know, there's no specific mention of a specific mental institution, but there are a lot. This is the modern world, after all.
    I'd just expect them to be more contemporary than the bedlam houses from fiction
  24. PlagueOfUndeath

    Flighty (Story)

    "I can fly, y'know!" she always told me, ever since we were in kindergarten together.

    I didn't believe her. Only people with super powers could fly, not normal little Japanese-Americans whose only notable feature was blue eyes. But, Akemi was convinced, and for a time, some people believed her. We were little kids, after all, and she was pretty good at gymnastics.

    I was always skeptical, but as her friend, I humored her. Other than the flight thing, she was an incredibly kind person, always willing to help out her friends, always there to provide a hug and a few kind words when people were feeling down.
    She always had her head in the clouds, though. Only figuratively, despite her claims otherwise. Incredibly optimistic, to the point she alienated our other friends because she never stopped being a good person no matter how people treated her, no matter who it was.

    How could someone get into trouble for being nice? It was unfortunately very easy, especially after we entered middle school. Word of mouth and rumors can be more deadly than bullets, and the rumors came like a machine gun when Akemi made friends with a lot of other girls' boyfriends. She was, or is rather, attractive, with a good personality to match. It was only natural she attracted a lot of male attention.

    But as they say, boys only want 'one thing'. And she was too naive to even consider this.

    "C'mon, I'm on the football team! We should go out!" she was asked once.

    "Aren't you seeing Nicki? We could go as friends of course but..." she would respond.

    "To hell with Nicki, I want you, you're better than she is," he would tell her. No one ever said Middle School kids were smart.

    "Um...I don't...I...can't," she would reply, and walk off. The dumb jock would then tell his friends how he got a date with her, even if he didn't. Even the implication is enough to convince Nicki to try to trash Akemi's reputation, and Akemi's claims of flight just added fuel to the fire.
    She was labeled crazy, and an 'boyfriend stealer', and ignored by everyone. Except me.
    Every day I would see the pain in her otherwise optimistic eyes. Their glow was diminishing, and by the end of eighth grade...
    She broke down and cried on the way home.

    "Why? Why does everyone hate me, Jack?! What did I do?!" she wailed that day, "I just wanted to make friends, I didn't...didn't want...to make people mad."

    I told her I didn't know. How could I know? I was just as young as she was, but I knew one thing: my oldest and dearest friend deserved much more than she was being given. She deserved to be happy, to smile again, and let her clear blue eyes shine like they did when she was a kid.

    I realized something then, as I watched her take the goofy little diploma we receive for 'graduating' from eighth grade, that I had -have- feelings for her, more than friendship. It was this feeling in the pit of my stomach. I wanted to be with her, to hold her close. I...I...

    I was in love. I still am, to this day. Moreover, I wanted to help her fly.

    The next day, after mulling it over all night, I told Akemi how I felt. Those clear blue eyes of hers clashed with the bright tomato-red color her face turned when I told her.

    "Jack...I...um...I...do...to, I...think," she said, still flushed, "Together...let's...um..."

    After that, we began dating. During our freshman year, I received 'warnings' from people I never met that she was a ****, that would hump anything that moved. Sometimes, they were a lot more colorful with their language, so I made their faces a bit more colorful, most blue and purple, with some red for flavor. Sometimes they did it to me, too. I still have a tiny scar on my knuckle from a particularly nasty encounter.

    "Jack...please don't fight. We should make friends," she would tell me, her eyes still filled with warmth, with just a hint of sadness.

    I preferred the happy look to the sad look, so the next time I just ignored the detractors. They didn't know her, after all. They whispered that she was crazy, convinced she could fly.

    Soon after my last fight, I saw an ad for hang gliding lessons on the school bulletin board. By this time, we were both sixteen, so I decided it might be worth a shot, to give her the opportunity to fly on her own. Well, glide actually, but...

    She was happy to be soaring through the air, and I was terrified. For her, however, it was worth it. Our first 'flight' went incredibly well for a first flight, we even got to see a Cape, who flew alongside our glider, clearly showing off. But her words afterwards surprised me.

    "That was almost as good as my first flight!" she exclaimed.

    I finally decided to confront her. Did she really believe she could fly? Why? When? She gave me her sad, hurt look again.

    "I thought you believed me..." she almost sobbed.

    I apologized profusely, but told her that we were older now, and that...I had never seen her fly before, so I was sketpical. Finally, after all these years, she told me the whole story.

    When she was four years old, before we had ever met, she was playing in her room. It was a hot summer day, so her mother had left the window open. I knew from visiting her house, that this window wasn't very big, but large enough for a precocious four year old to crawl through. Which Akemi did. Onto the roof.
    She slipped, as toddlers are wont to do, and fell down along the roof. She pulled up her pantleg as she told me this to show me the scar on her knee from this event, to prove it happened.
    When she finally slid off the roof, in her panic...she flew, hovered really, and slowly looped down to the ground. For years afterward, she kept trying to fly by jumping off things, even taking gymnastics so she wouldn't end up with the broken limbs she had from falling. She couldn't replicate the incident though, no matter how hard she concentrated.

    I still didn't completely believe her story, but it was enough to lend some credence to her claims for me. We continued hang gliding, allowing it to become the 'thing' we did together. Akemi won awards, and enough cash prizes to pay for college.

    And slowly but surely, the sparkle of happiness began returning to her eyes. She couldn't fly, but she could do the next best thing available to her, and she seemed content, maybe even happy. Then it happened.

    During a tandem flight, a bird divebombed us, tearing our glider and causing us to plummet. I was certain I was going to die. And what a way to die, killed by a freakin' BIRD!

    Then we stopped falling suddenly, and someone familiar grabbed my hand.

    "Hold on tight, Jack! Don't let go!" It was Akemi. She was flying, or hovering at least. It was enough to finally convince me.

    "I told you I could fly!" she laughed, the look of absolute happiness, along with relief, filled her face. Her eyes were sparkling...and I mean REALLY sparkling! They weren't alone either. Her entire body was covered by a glowing blue energy, a warm, kind energy.

    "Her name...is Kan'u," she told me. I had no idea what she meant. What was a Kan'u? Or who? We were the only two here. I told her as such, and she showed me a loving grin, and pointed to her chest with her free hand.

    "The Kheldian...her name is Kan'u. I'm a Peacebringer, Jack."

    That day, everything changed...

    We graduated not long after, but instead of college, the newly awakened Peacebringer Akemi decided to head for the Mecca of all heroes: Paragon City.

    I followed, renting an apartment for the both of us, and landing a job while attendng college. For my future, for her future.

    And Akemi? She set out to be the best hero possible. Sometimes, I sit at home alone, worrying about her, wondering if tonight she'd come home, or if I'd get the dreaded Call.

    She always comes home, always. Even torn, beaten, and bruised, she comes home every night before ten. She fights evil, injustice, not just for her own satisfaction of flying through the skies like she always dreamed, but for the future little fliers out there, who might some day take to the heavens.
    For the future, for our future, for our childrens' future.