Looking for feedback on something! :D
By
Aggelakis,
Posted on: 2008-09-14 02:21 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
They look like part of a crowd. It's their pose. You should show more personality with their posing and expression. How do they interact with each other? I have no insight on their personality, so I can't help you there.
I agree with Blood Wolffe, looks pretty good so far. I did notice that her left arm is a bit longer than her right.
Only thing I'd recommend is having the girl's pant legs flare out a bit towards the bottom. Really, unless they're tights (didn't get that impression from looking at the image), there'd be a natural amount of flareing as most jeans/slacks have a uniform leg width (for the most part - certain styles [boot cut, bellbottoms, etc.] have a mostly uniform look with the only deviation being around the middle of the calf).
And it makes her legs look a little thin.
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I agree with Blood Wolffe, looks pretty good so far. I did notice that her left arm is a bit longer than her right.
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This. Great work!
They remind me of the childred of the corn...
Please dont kill me 
Seriously though, good art but it lacks personality is all. 
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I love the girl's smile. It's terrifying.
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I love the girl's smile. It's terrifying.
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I feel more the eyes but yeah lol
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It's like if her mouth opened up to smile properly, all her teeth would start showing, and then her skull, and then parts we didn't know existed.
I like the picture. It's cute.
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I have never really understood why artists put such a HUGE gap in between the thighs of a drawn woman...not that I regularly look at women's crotches, but I've never really noticed much more than a tiny triangle, if anything at all, unless the woman in question has an eating disorder. That's more of a style complaint than a critique on the piece itself, so you can safely disregard it if you like. 
Looks good otherwise, though as previously stated, the empty eyes plus the smile is a little freaky. :x
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thanks a bunch for the feedback! i have a good idea what to fix now. I think once they are doing things, it will solve the plain issue hehe.
Mew
edit: grr need to redraw it...nevermind hehe
Mew
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Mini update ... i think i figure it out more... here is the first thing i came up with for introducing them intro1
I decided she is going to be a ....reverse sugar vampire weremouse! (hehe) grraar!
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Adorable!
Hiya! Its me again (Rosen Ice!). Lately i been thinking of playing around with a new project, and been trying to come up with some main characters....
Here is what i came up with most recently. I guess do these look too plain? Or the style isnt good to look at? or anything else to suggest? (i liked the hair i always use for squeaksy...and....well she turns into a mouse too, so it works! hehe)
Mew