Incredible work!
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Oooo that looks really nice!!! 
And where in the heck have you been? 
Actually I was in Australia for a month.... And when I came back I just wasn't drawing for some reason. But now I am back!
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Very nice! 
And welcome back.
I like it. What does "Orage" mean? Made up word?
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Very nice. Good line work. Needs a little attention on the fingers of her left hand (right side to viewer), but that's an incredibly hard angle to do convincingly, so points awarded for a solid attempt.
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Very nice. Good line work. Needs a little attention on the fingers of her left hand (right side to viewer), but that's an incredibly hard angle to do convincingly, so points awarded for a solid attempt.
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Yep that hand did give me problems and the fact that you are pointing it out just confirms what I thought. I will have to find a good book about hands one day.
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I like it. What does "Orage" mean? Made up word?
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Orage is french for tunderstorm she is a storm / electric defender
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Very lovely. glad to have you back!
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Yep that hand did give me problems and the fact that you are pointing it out just confirms what I thought. I will have to find a good book about hands one day.
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Hands really are demanding, but a mirror is sometimes sufficient to see the geometry. IMO, the outer two fingers are fine in your picture. The middle two need to show more of a gradual transition of arc- the index finger not quite straight on at the viewer (as it and the pointer are now), the ring finger a little less angled than the pinky beyond it. The net result should be a natural spread. What you have is close .
nice piece.
I like the determined look on her face. And I see what Morgenstern means about the hand too.
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Update on the same picture.
I redid it but in water color. One of the advantage of scanning the pencils id that you can go back like that.
anyway I am quite happy with the results.
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This is my wife's toon called Orage .
Orage
I am pretty happy with how it came out sepecially since I did it in 2 hours wich for me is super fast. Now if I decide to color ir it will probably take forever but we will see
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