JUGGERTHA - Issue #1


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I've wrestled with making a full comic for some time now.

Here's my First Page.


 

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keep em coming...


 

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cool...thats a sweet story concept you got Juggertha! Also, mega good art! The Iron Man Captian Aremica combo is friggin' awesome!


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!!! <^,^> Oooooo <^-^> thats cool Juggy! <^_^>


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Very nice Juggy. Any chance you could fill in the backgrounds with some hints of battlescapes from the various eras?


 

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Very nice Juggy. Any chance you could fill in the backgrounds with some hints of battlescapes from the various eras?

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Agreed.

I think it looks amazing, and I'm looking forward to more. I think a little "spice" in the background would be a nice touch.


 

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More.


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More.

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You're doing it wrong! - "MOAR!" <,< *sorry*


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You're doing it wrong! - "MOAR!" <,< *sorry*

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MOAR! ....please


 

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More.

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You're doing it wrong! - "MOAR!" <,< *sorry*

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hahaha, I dig that.


 

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Please, sir, may I have some more? </olivertwist>

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Pg 2 has been sketched... but I'm thinking about one per week might be my pace.

Maybe I should have held off 'till I had more done (?)


 

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Hey Juggy, I COMPLETELY feel your pain. I'm doing a similar thing for my SG and am working on doing a couple full comics as well. I took a different approach though; I've penciled all 32 pages and plan to back and ink them all, then color, then letter.

I'll be watching your progress with MUCH interest. I'd like to see how my pace is comparing with others.


 

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Please, sir, may I have some more? </olivertwist>

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Pg 2 has been sketched... but I'm thinking about one per week might be my pace.

Maybe I should have held off 'till I had more done (?)

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For your sake -- and, yes, for ours, too -- I hope little Juggerthana is one of those rare babie who sleeps through the night. Otherwise this comic will likely become increasingly surreal... and produced at the rate of one page every three months.

All kidding aside, you should wait to show the rest until you have either a complete story or a complete section that has a natural ending point. (Cliffhangers and plot twists are good stopping moments.)

As it stands, the first page introduces the character, gives his backstory and then ends on a cliffhanger. It's fortuitous that you were able to accomplish that in a single page, but it should also be the goal when revealing the next stages of the story. Just to avoid the whole, "And then I --" kind of abrupt interruptions.

It's a crackerjack start.


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Ironik - good thinking. I think that I "lucked out" by accomplishing that in one page, but I'll make sure to keep that in mind when posting more up.

Doug, keep popping in here and telling me how it's going. I'm curious too about the pace we'll set.

I've roughedout 6 pages right now (as in sketched boy placement and story), but I'm not sure 1) how long they will take 2) what will come next.


 

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/awesome pic


 

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Okay, I'm hooked.


 

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that is awesome!!


 

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..Doug, keep popping in here and telling me how it's going. I'm curious too about the pace we'll set...

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Will do. I'll keep a close eye on this one.


 

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Awesome start man! I can't wait to see more. But what blows me away the most I think, is that you'll pulling this off after JUST having jr.

I did one project in college where I was putting together full comic spreads....then I realized....MY WORD this is a lot of work!

So I went the easy route and changed my major to rocket science.

Seriously, I never understood what a big undertaking each issue is.

Anyhow, keep em coming!
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The public demands more pages!


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Awesome start man! I can't wait to see more. But what blows me away the most I think, is that you'll pulling this off after JUST having jr.

I did one project in college where I was putting together full comic spreads....then I realized....MY WORD this is a lot of work!

So I went the easy route and changed my major to rocket science.

Seriously, I never understood what a big undertaking each issue is.

Anyhow, keep em coming!
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Juggerpapa, thats soooo awesome.

But if you dont finish it I'm going to assume its a telemarketer calling him :'(


 

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Juggertha.. GREAT start! overall anyway..

the only thing i had an issue with was the "BAH!" in the last panel. it distracts from the storyline.. unless the one who answered his original call was someone named "Bah".

i'm guessing it's just a battlecry type of thing, it just seems a bit out of place in the line-of-story that exists.

other than that, the look is awesome and the storyline is already engaging. i'm looking forward tot he next installment as well.

i've seen the phenomenon of Juggertha round these parts for awhile, so it's cool to see a comic being made for him by his creator! good luck with the rest.. i'm sure an undertaking like this is daunting t say the least.. but with that start, how could it go wrong?

i believe it can't.


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