BabyTank , Inked with changes
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Archimedes,
Posted on: 2006-10-20 17:22 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
very nice, yeah I'm looking forward to drawing her as well, now I see her bio I can use it for my own evil purposes!!!!
Very cool drawing, just watch the perspective on her right hand, it's actually going the opposite direction as the axe shaft. easy fix.
A little bit of a tangent with the axe and her right leg, make the axe a bit bigger to fix that and it would be neater with a big axe.
Like the Key, feels like it's more to one side then in the center of her back though.
If you wrap that skirt around her left leg, it'll feel more solid.
Piece looks great, just some thoughts from me, feel free to take it or leave it!
Wow!
This is soooo cool!
I love the wind up key on the back. I never imagined one since whe is an electronic robot but with your style it works great.
Thank you so very much!
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Thats awesome DB!! I particularly like the head and antennas!
You've seen her BIO, and you're going to use it for EVIL PURPOSES?!? SICKO!!! 
Nice. I love the tin soldier key.
Good job. Now, please do me?
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Awww! How cute!
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Squeeee!! I love the little key in her back!!!! And the axe!! 
I just LOVE this, it's soooo cute!
That has to be the cutest battle axe I've ever seen.
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Wow!
This is soooo cool!
I love the wind up key on the back. I never imagined one since whe is an electronic robot but with your style it works great.
Thank you so very much!
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you bio just invokes images of toys And I wanted to make it redilly apparanent she was created by a child
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very nice, yeah I'm looking forward to drawing her as well, now I see her bio I can use it for my own evil purposes!!!!
Very cool drawing, just watch the perspective on her right hand, it's actually going the opposite direction as the axe shaft. easy fix.
A little bit of a tangent with the axe and her right leg, make the axe a bit bigger to fix that and it would be neater with a big axe.
Like the Key, feels like it's more to one side then in the center of her back though.
If you wrap that skirt around her left leg, it'll feel more solid.
Piece looks great, just some thoughts from me, feel free to take it or leave it!
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Actually I greatly appreciate when anyone takes time to comment or point out weaknesses as well as possiable ways to fix them
thats looks great! you have a really cool style too! lol just wanted to point that out...keep posting!
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You just keep getting better and better hun!!
I love both the character concept and your take on her as well!!
Looking awesome so far keep it up!
That is too awesome scarf. I really like it.
Gack, the cute factor is off the charts with the ribbons, clockwork key, and her smile. I also like how you gave her a different axe than the generic one ingame, way cuter =D
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Queeeeyuuuuute!
Yay, this is gonna be one of your best... at least it looks that way. But then again, you were probably born to draw this character XD
And, um, ya what Alex said. As for that right hand, that's gonna be tricky. I can see that by her pose, the fingers on that hand would be angled and pointing towards the ax head. However, that also goes completely counter to defining the shape and perspective of the ax handle.
Maybe try spreading the fingers out more (hold a pole in that position and take a look at what your fingers on your right hand are doing. The index will probably be spread furthest away from the others, open the most, each finger gets a bit closer together with a better grip on the handle until the pinky which should be wrapped around it in a way that helps the perspective of the ax handle. If any of that makes any sense... eh, just go hold something. 
It's still looking great so far.
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It's an optical illusion!
You can be Scarfles C. Escher
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As part of the giant forum art trade thingy I got Grey Mists Character BabyTank , just got finished with the rough pencils and thought I'd post to both a )show im actually working on it :P and b) get feed back on any gross oversights on my part .
He is awesome to work with as he gives me a multiview screen shot and an awesome bio that heavily influenced my design choice
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She is small ( under 5' ) so the Axe she uses looks big
Her background:
When Julie Luxton, 10 years old, received a toy electronic experiment set she was delighted. Now for most kid this would have ment she would build a few simple circuits to make a LED flash or a small alarm sound. The difference however is that little julie is a bona fides Genius. Reid Richard level genius. So once she had read the little instruction book and done all the experiments she decided to use her new found knowledge to make herself an older sister. Shortly thereafter however, much before she had anytime to make any significant headway in convincing her parent to spend the kind of money necessary to build an android, The council captured her and her parents.
I seemed that they had discovered little Julie's incredebile potential for invention. They tried to convince her to build a weapon for them. So Julie did.... sort of. She used the oportunity to build that sister she so wanted. And made sure to program her so she would free her and her parents.
The plan worked. Since then BabyTank has continued to fight criminals. She has joined the Paragons of Justice where Blue Note has taken her under his wing, and while her personality is evolving so are her powers.
While she often has the mentality of a little girl baby remains in fact a lethal weapon .
BabyTank is an Invul / AXe tanker that flies to get around.
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Scarfs Take on BabyTank
after the feedback I'll go back and tighten up the pencils and voila
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Great picture! You want feedback? Make it cutier!
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Great picture! You want feedback? Make it cutier!
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I think that in itself would be a hard task to conquer here Kitty!!
It's pretty damn cute as is!
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Great picture! You want feedback? Make it cutier!
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I think that in itself would be a hard task to conquer here Kitty!!
It's pretty damn cute as is!
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Um, that was kind of my point, silly.
Okay here's something that might help.
suggestions
First off, my girlfriend Felicia did the key as I couldn't get it right and she had to push me aside and show me how it's done.
I flipped her right antennae, set her hands and tweaked the axe. I pushed the ribbons a bit more and wrapped the skirt around.
I think you can push it even further if you want.
Hope this is helpful, can't wait to see where you take it from here!
As part of the giant forum art trade thingy I got Grey Mists Character BabyTank , just got finished with the rough pencils and thought I'd post to both a )show im actually working on it :P and b) get feed back on any gross oversights on my part .
He is awesome to work with as he gives me a multiview screen shot and an awesome bio that heavily influenced my design choice
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She is small ( under 5' ) so the Axe she uses looks big
Her background:
When Julie Luxton, 10 years old, received a toy electronic experiment set she was delighted. Now for most kid this would have ment she would build a few simple circuits to make a LED flash or a small alarm sound. The difference however is that little julie is a bona fides Genius. Reid Richard level genius. So once she had read the little instruction book and done all the experiments she decided to use her new found knowledge to make herself an older sister. Shortly thereafter however, much before she had anytime to make any significant headway in convincing her parent to spend the kind of money necessary to build an android, The council captured her and her parents.
I seemed that they had discovered little Julie's incredebile potential for invention. They tried to convince her to build a weapon for them. So Julie did.... sort of. She used the oportunity to build that sister she so wanted. And made sure to program her so she would free her and her parents.
The plan worked. Since then BabyTank has continued to fight criminals. She has joined the Paragons of Justice where Blue Note has taken her under his wing, and while her personality is evolving so are her powers.
While she often has the mentality of a little girl baby remains in fact a lethal weapon .
BabyTank is an Invul / AXe tanker that flies to get around.
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Scarfs Take on BabyTank
after the feedback I'll go back and tighten up the pencils and voila
With new Feedback Afew changes were made and I was in an inking mood so I inked it
Baby Tank Inked