Hey don't you have some other work to finish first! 
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Awwww, cute!!! 
That's gonna look neat!
As always, I am jealous of your mad clean pencil skills.
Lookin' good, Scarf!
oooo, looking right good so far!
And I hope you don't mind, but I'm gonna get a touch nit-picky. I did notice a very minor little problem with his shoulder to the left. The bone and muscle's are a touch off. First, the collarbone should be angled more up. It should be curving to point towards the point where the trapezius meets the deltoid. As is, it looks like his deltoid is swallowing his color bone when, in reality, part of the muscle attaches to it 
My Second real anal knit-pick is the small itty bitty bit of shading you have where the deltoid meets the pectoral (still to the left). Maybe lessen the shadow a hair as it interrupts the curve of the pec and deflates it a bit instead of helping to show it all bulging. Just fallow the invisible curve you have set up that goes from his collarbone to the point where the pec meets the deltoid and eliminate any shadow from the deltoid on the pec. side of that invisible curve.
Hopefully that's not as utterly confusing as it sounds... and if it is, never mind... it's a very minor thing on an otherwise supper great drawing... supper supper great!
Where's Dynamo Teddy's cape and Pillow of Devastation?
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Shakester - Lvl 50 Invul/EM Tanker
Kiao Dai Ken - Lvl 40 Katana/Regen Scrapper
Gravity Lad - Lvl 21 Grav/Emp Controller
Ebon Shock - Lvl 32 Dark/Dark Corruptor
"If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you."
looks durn good Scarf! definately like take two is coming along. while I agree with graver on the nitpickin side on the whole I think it looks fine as is 
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Great as always DB. Looking forward to seeing it finished.
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Hey don't you have some other work to finish first!
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pencils are as close to getting finished as I have time for right now due to school .
I always work a piece , show it to get feedback, let it sit for a week while I work on something else and then try to correct anything I over looked .
It works great and helps me fix alot of things I often overlook .
Im quite happy with how your piece turned out Quake even if I thought your character was older , luckily he will grow into the picture
But it will likely be awhile before I ever get around to inking or coloring it as currently school/work takes priority over doodles and in the time it takes me to ink/color Apic I can sketch several
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oooo, looking right good so far!
And I hope you don't mind, but I'm gonna get a touch nit-picky. I did notice a very minor little problem with his shoulder to the left. The bone and muscle's are a touch off. First, the collarbone should be angled more up. It should be curving to point towards the point where the trapezius meets the deltoid. As is, it looks like his deltoid is swallowing his color bone when, in reality, part of the muscle attaches to it
My Second real anal knit-pick is the small itty bitty bit of shading you have where the deltoid meets the pectoral (still to the left). Maybe lessen the shadow a hair as it interrupts the curve of the pec and deflates it a bit instead of helping to show it all bulging. Just fallow the invisible curve you have set up that goes from his collarbone to the point where the pec meets the deltoid and eliminate any shadow from the deltoid on the pec. side of that invisible curve.
Hopefully that's not as utterly confusing as it sounds... and if it is, never mind... it's a very minor thing on an otherwise supper great drawing... supper supper great!
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its all pencils all can be fixed , I'll look into it oh guru of goofiness
Nice work Berry. *Kills all of Berry's teachers and gives her straight A's*. There, now you are free to draw.
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I wish it was that easy , unfortunetly all my teachers con purple to me and im a gimpy Student /Part time temp which as you know is a horrid AT .
Hehe...I love it.
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I wish it was that easy , unfortunetly all my teachers con purple to me and im a gimpy Student /Part time temp which as you know is a horrid AT .
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OH GAWD!! RESPEC OUT OF THAT ASAP!!!!
And lookin good so far Scarf.
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Hey don't you have some other work to finish first!
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pencils are as close to getting finished as I have time for right now due to school .
I always work a piece , show it to get feedback, let it sit for a week while I work on something else and then try to correct anything I over looked .
It works great and helps me fix alot of things I often overlook .
Im quite happy with how your piece turned out Quake even if I thought your character was older , luckily he will grow into the picture
But it will likely be awhile before I ever get around to inking or coloring it as currently school/work takes priority over doodles and in the time it takes me to ink/color Apic I can sketch several
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excuses , excuses.
j/k take your time
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Ebon Shock - Lvl 32 Dark/Dark Corruptor
"If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you."
besides your so like me quake :P rarely getting around to colors and inks :P
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besides your so like me quake :P rarely getting around to colors and inks :P
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Wrong! I never get to inks and colors. I let someone talented do those
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Kiao Dai Ken - Lvl 40 Katana/Regen Scrapper
Gravity Lad - Lvl 21 Grav/Emp Controller
Ebon Shock - Lvl 32 Dark/Dark Corruptor
"If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you."
Three things. One, Dynamo-man's thumb is pretty small. Smaller than it should be if he's got those big manly hands. Two, the D on his chest could be textured to it a little better. It's shifted off to the right side, as the middle of the hole should be where the split in the pects are. Third, Dynamo-Kid's fist is pretty tweaked out, because it's pointing upwards. In that position, it's more comfortable and natural to have your hand vertically with the fingers pointed inwards. Like you were holding a broom, not like holding a dumbbell.
Other than that, it seems great. Your abilty to do muscles really makes me jealous. You could do a much better job of drawing Pep than I ever could.
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I did a really sad pep early on and I so need to do an updated one 
and thanks for the feedback I'll take a crack at those changes
I love the peice! Simple yet nice to look at.
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I did a really sad pep early on and I so need to do an updated one
and thanks for the feedback I'll take a crack at those changes
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If I were smart, I'd let you continue in the false assumption that your last Pep pic was subpar, but I really can't since it was so AWESOMETASTIC that I start doing the happy dance whenever I just think of it. This would be horrible only in Bizarro world. It is one of my favorite pieces EVER!
Don't make me spank you until you realize how awesome you are at art! 
-Pep
I think I cut corners with it tho , You know us art folks are our own worst critics
once I catch up on some things Im gonna do a PeP PIC that will knock your shorts off !
nyah nyah and you can't stop me
besides I owe you for that awesometastic Bannanna bread you sent me and chibi
You got bananna bread?!?
*jealous*
I'm gonna go pout over here.
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http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showthread.php?t=115217
The Guide to BURN
the fastest way into my heart is via gifts of food ((poor collage students whom refuse to do art for cash thrive on gifts of food ))
Pep is easy tho as pep trades food for spanking pictures of his toon
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This is the original rough posted about a week ago Original rough of Dynamo Man
And after finding some free time I tried to work in alot (not all ) the suggestions you guys came up with Take 2
I think I got all the major issues but wanted to get some feedback before doing clean up and tighter pencils (still have to do his gloves a bit )
As always comments are welcome