So, what's going on there? Is she transforming or exploding in chi or what? 
It looks cool, the perspective on the face is good.
Her chest looks a little more male than female.. even if she's flat-chested, pectorals don't tend to be formed that way on girls.
Catgirls aren't exactly my thing, but the face looks good (although perhaps just a tad off-center judging by the chin). I like the pose too, it should look good colored.
Doh, I shoulda splained things better <~.~>;
Yeah, its sort of the classic "wow that's alot of power" ki explosion type thing... I don't know why but I've always loved exploding clothes off the person wearing them <x-X> doesn't matter which gender, cause its not about 'hawt' or anything - its just a neat effect <'x'> imho...
As for the pectorals... I'm confused <;.;>; she's err... very 'small' up top.. but not quite flat... err... but with the clothing flying away from the body I figured it wouldn't leave much impression >.< or am I getting the raw body shape wrong? <~.~>; <;.;> ack
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I like the picture. My character on virtue has a costume slot devoted to 'exploding clothing' when her psychic powers overwhelm her in times of stress. So I am biased to the concept. *grin*
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I thought so, I was just curious. In that sort of explosion thing you don't have to bother getting all the bits of fabric and hair to flow in the right direction... it might have more 'oomph' if her hair was flying up or back instead of to the left, but that's just IMO. And she might just end up looking like she's going super saiyin >.> bleh, ignore me.
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As for the pectorals... I'm confused <;.;>; she's err... very 'small' up top.. but not quite flat... err... but with the clothing flying away from the body I figured it wouldn't leave much impression >.< or am I getting the raw body shape wrong? <~.~>; <;.;> ack
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You've drawn the chest line a bit too square, and at that angle I'd think they'd, well, hang down a bit, if she were endowed. Since she isn't, you could just erase the chest lines completely and you'd still get your point across. An a-cup isn't going to be too visible (if at all) with the fabric coverage there.
Also, in response to Ordinary, yes. The lines would only be necessary if she had enough cleavage, I think, that it could 'pinch' the fabric between her breast and body, or create a significant shadow. I think slight shading with the color as opposed to having hard lines would serve best.
but boobs <;_;> Even small boobs are good boobs...
(JK JK >.< I have to act like a total moron at least once a day, failure to do so revokes my squirrel license and my male license... if I'm not a male squirrel <;.;> then wth am I?)
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Cannot really give you any tips or anything because I am no artist. Just stop by to say that I really like ALOT! Remind me of some anime movie I was watching the other day. That is really great though!
snazzy... and I love the look of the paper beside the cool drawing!
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Ya know what's funny about that UniqueBubble? >.>; It's plain white printer paper with regular 4H and 2B lead.
*but* I darkened it as far as it'd go during the scan process - then jacked the contrast back up (not all the way, but I used "Auto contrast") ever since I started doing scans that way I've liked the effect and stuck with it >.< though when I go to do color I may have to ink it (hoping to avoid that though ><
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Very nice work on the proportion Squirrel!
I like this piece...and given it is a wip not much I would look at. her "boobs" are fine...with the clothing flying away you dont have to have a bunch of definition there...you can let the coloring do that for ya. basic lines are down...and as mentioned I think they look mighty fine as is.~
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Rawr >.>
Hope I can keep motivated on it hehe <~_~> I'm real happy with it; lately my art drive has been low <x.x> but I'm hoping to pull myself outta that >,<m thankies for all the compliments!
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Doh, I shoulda splained things better <~.~>;
Yeah, its sort of the classic "wow that's alot of power" ki explosion type thing... I don't know why but I've always loved exploding clothes off the person wearing them <x-X> doesn't matter which gender, cause its not about 'hawt' or anything - its just a neat effect <'x'> imho...
As for the pectorals... I'm confused <;.;>; she's err... very 'small' up top.. but not quite flat... err... but with the clothing flying away from the body I figured it wouldn't leave much impression >.< or am I getting the raw body shape wrong? <~.~>; <;.;> ack
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Sweet jebus, you just overloaded my smiley quota for the day. 
That? >.> That's NOTHING <,< MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA <o.o> I am TEH SMILEZOR >.> or something like that <. .> /fearme or something!
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Dear sir: if you actually experience all the emotions you convey via emoticon in the short span of time it takes to think/read those sentences, you may want to consider a) medication or b) a decrease in sugar/caffeine intake.
Sincerely yours,
Foo
PS - I am afraid of you now.
Hmm. Is Squirrel getting better...
Judging by that? That's a definate affirmative. Veeery nice piece. 
Can't wait to see what you do with it, though I'm gonna have to glance at it again when I'm NOT medicated to try and form something close to constructive. Cursory glance, though, says it's coming along very nicely.
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Dear sir: if you actually experience all the emotions you convey via emoticon in the short span of time it takes to think/read those sentences, you may want to consider a) medication or b) a decrease in sugar/caffeine intake.
Sincerely yours,
Foo
PS - I am afraid of you now.
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Well I am in therapy <'x'>;; (seriously >.>
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Dear sir: if you actually experience all the emotions you convey via emoticon in the short span of time it takes to think/read those sentences, you may want to consider a) medication or b) a decrease in sugar/caffeine intake.
Sincerely yours,
Foo
PS - I am afraid of you now.
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Well I am in therapy <'x'>;; (seriously >.>
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Whoa, that was quick.
(I kid!)
Also: What is this <'x'> ?
<'x'>; = kinda embarassing or "I probably shouldn't say this"
Its the "closed mouth" face <,<
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Ohhh....
<'o'> This one's an octorok.
Nahhhh <^_^> <'o'> Is the "ooooooo" mouth >.>
Like how some people do =o or =O or :O
I do <'o'> or <'O'>; but <^O^> and <^o^> are different - those are goofy "kitty presses nose to you" faces <@_@> because you see - I'm actually a cat! <O.O>
Shocking I know...
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...oh.
Congratulations on learning to type, cat.
<O_O> mwahahahaha <. .>
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I don't usually post WIPs out in the public forum (usually I post them in The Squirrel Tree) - but this one came out surprisingly well... at least, I think so...
So I'm looking for anyone's opinions.
This was very spur of the moment... I didn't even intend to draw today; but I just sat down and started drawing and errr... kerblam. Intending to color it; have a ton of work yet to do on alot of other stuff but this one's making me happy thus far.
Oh - minor warning, *should* be SFW... but I don't want to risk anyone's employment over a picture on a fanart forum so I mention that it contains a fair amount of skin; you won't see any naughty bits of any sort whatsoever; but there's not a whole lot of clothing either. So errr, yeah.
Please be sure to Zoom In if possible; as the lines appear crummy if you don't. At least on my monitor.
Yumii (WIP)
Whatcha think? Good? Bad? Am I getting better? I borrowed some ideas from observing Crimson_Jimson's style, though I'm hoping I've just taken a couple elements and made them my own. I wanted a grittier more 'realistic' feal, without losing the anime 'extreme' quality. (Extreme... gawd that sounds cliche /selfloathing).
Anyways uhm... ok now you can respond, I'll shuttup... sorry!
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