Please Critique
I need screenies though !!!
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Sorry about the wait everyone. I'm pretty slow when it comes to inking, and I kept reworking some things.
Here she is.
I am uncertain at this point if I will color her or not at this point.
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Like I told you on the other boards before they blew up.. I love it.
But since the other boards did blow up, I'll ask you here. What happened to the stripped thigh socks?
�Alas, regardless of their doom, the little victims play!� - Thomas Gray
I love the idea of the striped socks. The only reason I didn't put them in is I had high hopes of coloring this eventurally and hoped to just color them in. I think I'll go ahead and ink them and repost.
I have to be honest and say I haven't read the rest of this thread.
That pic though looks nice and clean. Great job.
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Let's see if I can get it right this time.
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That cleaned up very nicely Nym!!
Very clear and clean lines!
Lookin great!
*looks for a list somewhere to sign up*
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*looks for a list somewhere to sign up*
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Um...
>.>
I don't own any pencils
<.<
What's that?!?
*points*
*runs and hides*
I may be up for commissions eventually, but am going to be working on SG stuff for now.
Wow, nice job! Great line work and a nice fix on the hat too Is it too late to suggest just one little thing? Because I did notice that the lines for the stripes on her stockings on her right leg (our left) are a little off on her thigh. On the thigh, you might want to curve them a bit more on the underside of her leg. As they are right now, it kind of flattens out her thing instead of showing it's volume. It's really just two lines there on her thigh... if you can get them to end at about a 90 degree angle from where they began, you'll have one heck of a killer piece. As it is, it's great! I totally love it!
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Let's see if I can get it right this time.
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Really nice Nymie! <^_^> I are duly impresseded! <^,^> Glad I saw this >,<
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Let's see if I can get it right this time.
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*screeches with joy*
YAY
�Alas, regardless of their doom, the little victims play!� - Thomas Gray
Okay. That's a winner.
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Wow, nice job! Great line work and a nice fix on the hat too Is it too late to suggest just one little thing? Because I did notice that the lines for the stripes on her stockings on her right leg (our left) are a little off on her thigh. On the thigh, you might want to curve them a bit more on the underside of her leg. As they are right now, it kind of flattens out her thing instead of showing it's volume. It's really just two lines there on her thigh... if you can get them to end at about a 90 degree angle from where they began, you'll have one heck of a killer piece. As it is, it's great! I totally love it!
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You're absolutely right. I went ahead and tweaked the stripes on both thighs. With the lack of color they really helt to define the form.
Here is the updated image.
Weeee!!!
I have more copies of this drawing then my own drawings Nym!
�Alas, regardless of their doom, the little victims play!� - Thomas Gray
It does seem like it went through quite a few revisions.
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It does seem like it went through quite a few revisions.
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That's ok. You should see the crap I toss out while I'm coming up with poses and stuff.
�Alas, regardless of their doom, the little victims play!� - Thomas Gray
That looks great! The face is especially good.
And now, after seeing the top done, I wish that were in the game too.