Square Woot!! Multi-Pass


Deebs

 

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Well, I checked under the couch in my living room, and I found some spare time under the cushion, so I decided to try to get back in the groove, and finally got something resembling Square Woot to complete our trade.

Please let me know if anything seems majorly off. I'm kinda worried about her right leg. The perspective kinda threw me for a loop. Her leg is supposed to be angled back and to her right with a slight bend in it.

Hope ya'll enjoy it anyway

-Pep Rally Multi-Pass!


 

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The 5th Element :P


 

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Overall I *really* like it Pep <^-^> its funny >,<; which suits Square Woot perfectly <'x'>b

I do have 2 suggestions though >.>

1) You are right about her right leg... to me it looks... I dunno... chunky? I guess? I dunno >< its not *quite* right imho; but thats just me; I'm hardly a genius at this stuff.

2) Her eyes seem a tad low... I know she's got her head down a bit, but they seem even a bit low for that.

Other than that though, I like it alot ,@_@>m keep it up!

PS: The assault rifle is amazingly nice. Great work there!


 

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Cuuuuute!

As for the leg, I don't think it's too fat, it's foreshortened enough. I think the problem is that the foot is too small. Make the toe longer and I think it'll look perfect!

And yeah....her eyes are just a taaaaad bit too low and a liiiiiittle bit too far apart. But the gun and the mouth are STELLAR!!!


 

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great pic but the eyes are bothering me a bit to low , leg looks fine to me


 

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Hahaahah!!!!

Oh man, I knew there was going to be a 5th Element reference just by reading the title, but this is awesome! Got a hearty chuckle out of me for sure.

Everyone else here has beat me to the punch and mentioned the two things that are off with it, so I won't bother rehashing it.


I'm still cracking up over this.


 

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lol very nice Pep!!

I love the 5th element reference!



 

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MULTIIIIII-PASS!

I love it!!!


 

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I can just hear Mr Zorg, after a moment, say "ah think ah'm in luv".


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Pep, um...you asked, so I will tell you, because I love your stuff. For this piece, and a few of your others, the faces just don't seem to work with the rest of the image. I don't think everyone will agree with me, but your proportions and figures are all pretty realistic, but the facial features seem a bit to cartoonish and unbalanced. It doesn't quit mesh for me.

And now I feel bad. Because I really like your work.


 

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Thanks for the replies. Good and Bad. They are very helpful.

I think Starchasm is right that the foot needs to be bigger. I just wasn't sure how big to make it since it needed to be smaller because I foreshortened the leg to make it look like it was angling away from the viewer.

As for the eyes, I think part of the problem is I made her hair too big, which makes the eyes look lower. Add to that, that she is looking downwards so you see some of the top of her head, and I tried to make her eyes wide open like she's really REALLY excited to see the ZF-1.
I also tried to make dark ring marks around her eyes where her goggles were pressing against her face.
I guess I failed to accomplish what I tried to do.

I might try to correct some of the mistakes this wekend if i find the time.

-Pep out