Ohhhh, that looks dynamic!
Can't wait to see it finished!!
And HA! Beat you TA!!
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Jack Hawksmoor, The Authority.
Great looking pose.
ZOMG! You just nerfed my regen scrapper.
I'm gonna get you TA, and your mass of art too!!
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Great post Greymist! Hmm, since you asked for feedback, the only thing I see is that for someone with legs as big as TA...his butt is to small. Obviously, he has those big armoured pads on his thighs...but I still think they give the appearance of massive musculature in the legs. I think that should probably be balanced...especially in that pose...by a bit more in the tushie.
=^_^=
OOOOOOo really good!!!
I'm going to have to agree with Kat about the booty though. But I think it could be taken care of easily by just rounding out that left (our left) cheek and maybe adding a little more substance to the right side.
Great pose!! You have more courage than I my friend 
I love the pose...very dynamic. Can't wait to see how it turns out. 
Thanks ,
more booty - That will make my wife happy - yep I see what you mean . Thanks for the good observation.
Could you also tell me for the far hand (his right hand) wich is a better placement the one in the thumbnail (lower) or the one in the rough (higher)?
Anything else I should adjust?
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more booty - That will make my wife happy - yep I see what you mean . Thanks for the good observation.
Could you also tell me for the far hand (his right hand) wich is a better placement the one in the thumbnail (lower) or the one in the rough (higher)?
Anything else I should adjust?
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I think i prefer the look in the thumbnail. Lowering the far hand gives a more balanced look to the outsreatched arms.
Hmm, well...it depends on what sort of attitude you are trying to bring across.
The image with the lower hand actually looks more like a "caught in the action" pose...the one with the higher hand looks more grandious. It almost looks flamboyant.
The higher placement does have the advantage of it being clear that it is his hand on the staff. Um, how to explain what I mean by that. Let's see...life is messy...often in a real life snapshot, overlapping images and shadows, etc, can often make it hard to figure out just what you are looking at. While this effect might be very realistic, when I am looking at a comic book style piece...where I am expecting a simplified/magnified reality...I don't like it when I am unsure about just what something is in the picture. For example, if I have to pause for even a moment to realize that the tiny bump sticking out of someones back is actually there elbow...I find it distracting and thefore it reduces my enjoyment of the overall picture.
Now, my long explanation of what I mean is probably making it seem like I think this is more of a problem in your sketch here then it is. I just think, that if you go with the lower hand pose...which I actually think looks more realistic...you will need to be careful to avoid the problem I am talking about above.
Hmm, you know what?
After having typed all that I flipped back to your images again and I don't really think it is going to be a problem for this piece. I like the pose with the lower hand more.
Oh, and I reserve the right to change my mind about anything at any time! =^_^=
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It seems I just could not not draw him. He is like a standard here.
I am working on Thor's assassin .
Here is the thumbnail I did of what I have in mind and the rough pencils of the bottom figure.
I would appreciate your comments on this whil I can still fix glaring mistakes without too much frutrations
Thanks
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Wow!
that pose is awesome Grey!!
I really like that take on TA man!
lol Kat thanks for noticing my tiny hiny! 
wow that looks really cool cant wait to see the finished
Have I mentioned I really love this pose?
Look's great so far! I'd go with the hlower hand as well.. it has a touch more power to it.
just wanted to show that I was still working on this
Here is the inked version
TA Ink
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just wanted to show that I was still working on this
Here is the inked version
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says forbidden? 
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just wanted to show that I was still working on this
Here is the inked version
TA Ink
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says forbidden?
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same
???.... let me try this
Is This better?
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TA seems to be quite the popular subject. I might have to jump on the wagon here and give it a shot.
Great sketch. For me I'm forced to Picture the "camera" zooming in on TA, like somethings coming at him.
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TA seems to be quite the popular subject. I might have to jump on the wagon here and give it a shot.
Great sketch. For me I'm forced to Picture the "camera" zooming in on TA, like somethings coming at him.
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Yeah Grey I can see it perfectly now! Thanks!
I really like how this pose looks. As Overbite said it looks like he was busy fighting one thing and had to turn his attention to his left suddenly and toward the camera. I love it!!
Great job so far man and I can't wait to see how it all turns out!
Oh and on a side note... Could it be? Overbite is finally considering doing a piece for me? WOOT!!!
I have always wanted a piece from Veikira just because of his style and artistic talent. That would so rock man!
Working on the background now
Since this is, I think, usually my weakest part comments would be very welcome.
Thank you.
boomtown rough
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Grey that bg looks pretty damn good to me man!!
I like the fact that ya put it in Boomtown too! very fitting!
Can't wait to see it all come together man!
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Working on the background now
Since this is, I think, usually my weakest part comments would be very welcome.
Thank you.
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Wow, I'd say you're doing just fine with it so far... it's a great city scape and very very boomtown! I wouldn't know who well it works for the piece untill I can actualy see TA with the background... but so far, I'd say your doing great!
Thanks Graver an TA. I worked hard on that.
Very often I do no background, or when I do do them they look ...Blah to me. So I decided that for the next few project I would do I would spend a much if not more time on the background as the main character.
In this one because the buildings are so chaotic in boomtown I was having a lot of problems with the perspective. the vanishing points seem to be all over the place. That is what bothers me about the picture . I am still not sure I got it right . But if you are not seeing it it must be in my mind so I will go with that.
Thanks again
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It seems I just could not not draw him. He is like a standard here.
I am working on Thor's assassin .
Here is the thumbnail I did of what I have in mind and the rough pencils of the bottom figure.
I would appreciate your comments on this whil I can still fix glaring mistakes without too much frutrations
Thanks
Thumbnail
Rough Pencil
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