ridiculous_girl

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Hero Therapy

Interesting arc. I liked the forced level ranges actually, as it gave a sense of progression. But certainly doing it as a 50 lets you feel that shift most keenly.

Please give mine a go some time as well. (See sig.) Rugged is a good standard. Heroic for an easy solo run. Unyielding for an epic feel, but don't blame me if you die. Thanks!

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thank you lyceus for your feedback. i am out of town until tommorrow, then i will give your arc a run. i thought i had nailed all the typos down. but as captain amazing knows... my laptop keygboard is really gbrokehn. thnerefore i hnave to cohnstahntly edit thnihngbs more thnahn usual... hno jokeù!

i have been testing with a mid 20s blaster. but ran it with a small group of lowbies the other night, which was a bit scary in the higher levels. when we saw a group of about 10 little nightmares run by it an all group "WHOA!" luckily they are managable once you get a grip of the situation.

i think the therapist running around following is pretty amusing. especially since he is a non-combatant, you still feel the urge to let him follow. some psychology right there...

now that you mention it, thney are all female bosses, except the last... hnmmmmm...

thank you very much for your positive feedback, i will put you first on the list.

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I hereby bring myself into this mess :P However, don't play any of mine yet, I've got a final pass on 1033 for restructure and 2095 requires a buff.

However, I just wanted to jump in and say to my favorite mushmouth late nite critter, I'll help :3

-C.A.

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i told you hnot to make fuhn of my peechn ihnspedimehntù!ù!ù!

i have the advantage of editing here... thnahnkfully, since the space bar is connected to the F5 key and refreshes the screen. and the knee bone is connected to the thigh bone...

let me know when i can run yours again, CA

ok, i really, really, really want more feedback for my arcs. particularily my hero therapy! (TM) arc. so i am going to jump on the quid pro quo review bandwagon.

what i am hoping will happen is your give me an arc to play. i will play it. but i only ask that you run one of mine first. it is polite and i will try to give as honest feedback as i can. if i really like your arc i will give you a nice shiny "ridiculous girl seal of approval (tm)" to go along with it. you can post your arc here and i will post a review here. please post your feedback for my arcs on the appropriate links below. the non-linked arc that i have up is just a fluff piece and my first attempt at an arc on test.

the "hero therapy! (tm) arc i am seeking to refine further. though i am generally happy with it. on the "welcome to donut world" arc i have been having problems balancing my custom enemies and i need honest feedback concerning them. i made a major revision of them since they were mez heavy. but they need refinement to find a happy balance.

so it is a quid pro quo set-up... you play mine and i will play yours.. fair? fair... you help me, i help you.

since there seems to be no formal way of asking for a review, i will just post and hope that i will get one...

one warning... there is mission scaling in this. this is thematically driven. please make sure you can scale down as well as up.

Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV with ally help)

Please give this arc a try... you probably need to. Only 5(!) easy payments! You will not regret it!

*Small print* Failure to complete this arc may result in impotence, baldness, general ridicule from children, a lessening of EXP earning potential, and an overall decline of self respect. For further details contact ridiculous girl. Money will not be refunded under any condition.

Arc: Hero Therapy! (TM)
Arc ID: 119228
Author: Ridiculous Girl
Number of Missions: 4

Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV)

Please give this arc a try... you probably need to. Only 5(!) easy payments! You will not regret it!

*Small print* Failure to complete this arc may result in impotence, baldness, general ridicule from children, a lessening of EXP earning potential, and an overall decline of self respect. For further details contact ridiculous girl. Money will not be refunded under any condition.

Arc: Hero Therapy! (TM)
Arc ID: 119228
Author: Ridiculous Girl
Number of Missions: 4

hey, thanks. please give it a run and leave me feedback here. i would greatly appreciate it.

ok i made a few more tweaks and i am always looking for more plays and more feedback. if you really like the arc, please post your feedback here. it would be greatly appreciated. i will always try to reply to any feedback given.

celebrity endorsements encouraged!

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Arc Name: The Clockwork Crusade
Arc ID: 126073
Faction: Arachnos, Vahzilok, Council, Clockwork
Creator Global/Forum Name: @YanYan
Difficulty Level: Easy to Moderate, designed to be solo able by any AT
Mission Levels: 1-20
Synopsis: Hero Corps has asked you for some unique help. Seems the Clockwork are making some strange attacks against other villains. They've asked you to 'assist' them under cover.
Estimated Time to Play: 30 Minutes to an Hour.


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ok i gave your arc a run... here are some of my thoughts and typos that i saw as i ran through...

so why am i interested in working with the clockwork?

the first mission pop up reads funny, had to read a couple of times for it to make sense. it is not clear in the opening dialogue that this is for the hero corps.

the first mission clue is a bit awkward, something about setting up and becoming fierce comes off as a run on sentence.

not sure how a clockwork can wink at you... just an observation, not a complaint...

excellent is spelled excelent in the Mission 1 debrief.

in third mission popup it says "sgetting"

your clockwork creation info says "as much, it's much more..." as such? maybe?

last mission exit popup it says "eithe"

ok. this was an ok arc. there are multiple problems that i saw. one common problem in arcs is original justification. it is not exactly clear as to why the hero corps would send me to the clockwork first to do what ends up being their dirty work. why are you sent there? what is the motivation?

in your synopsis you mention that the hero corps asked you, but that his not really clear until the mission entry pop-up. your synopsis does not really fit what is happening in the story. are you investigating the clockwork for hero corps? or does hero corps want you to help the clockwork for whatever reason and they are double crossing you and hero corps?

these are questions that you do not need to answer to me, but they should become clear to the player initially or as they go along.

that is all i can think of right now.

ok here is my latest up for review. please keep giving me feedback. i will try to reply to any message that i can...

Arc: Hero Therapy! (TM)
Arc ID: 119228
Author: Ridiculous Girl
Number of Missions: 4
Description: Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV but you get ally help)

here is my feedback... brilliant!

going to give it a spin right now... do you want feedback here?

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In "The Amulet":
* The Red Caps are a complete red herring. Buck has no idea who the Midnighters may have run into out there.
* Midnighters only come in minion and LT classes, the only Bosses in MA are the Living Armors. Any how, I didn't think it'd make sense for Luis to just run off and abandon Jeremiah and Jeremiah would want to get some more answers before returning to the Club. Anyhow, this is why Buck tells you that they can teleport them out but some spell is masking their location so they need to be freed first for the teleport spell to work again.
* There is a clue in mission 2 but I made it optional as it could drag out the mission since it often spawned in odd places and people kept missing it. It's nothing essential to the story but does provide a bit of foreshadowing if you do find it.
* There is no mission between 3 and 4 as it would drag out the plot unnecessarily. There is a time factor here, it may be slowed down for you but Mindskewer is devouring her victims in the meantime (probably why Nomaris and McNeil run off, they're already extremely weak as they were first on the menu). I didn't want to make it a timed mission though as then people would get angry if somehow they did lose and got a "Congratulations, you're dead!" speech at the end of the arc.

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ok, thank you, that makes a lot of sense. they were mostly questions that popped in my head and i was curious. but it seems like you got it all worked out. i am not sure i can suggest ideas that might make things clearer. not simplify, but expand and deepen.

sorry, i could not offer a better review. i figured that you have had heard most of it all before by how anyways. i was not in the in-depth critiquing mood at the time...

good luck, lazarus!

i just ran the amulet one, #1709. here are my thoughts...

in the opening, the contact says i hope the red caps have not gotten them (as best i recall), but then the enemies are tuatha. is this on purpose?

the first ally is pretty squishy, i think he was one shotted by a minion. maybe upping the guards to hard? if they are not already... maybe midnighters are just squishy in general... he was not really essential, though...

i like the idea of trying to read the obelisk but having to take a picture instead. nice touch.

the 2nd mission is to find clues as part of the goals. for me these usually mean a blinky hunt. i was surpised when i finished with out having to do that.

no clue in the 3rd mission? ah i see once i get to the 4th mission...

well i liked this story arc. nice, simple and straight forward story-telling. nothing wrong with simple, makes it approachable and enjoyable. decent midnighter story arc... something about the transition between mission 3 and 4 fell a little flat with me. personally, i think, sticking a diversionary mission that clues you that something is not all that it seems might work. but for sake of simplicity and brevity, there is nothing inherantly wrong with your story device.

ok, quid pro quo...

well, i will say before you rewiew my hero therapy, (#119228)that great minds think alike. you will understand why once you try my arc. though our approaches differ... i even contemplated using that last map for one of my missions before i decided on another. if you do my dohnut world after the hero therapy you might find some more similarities. i guess i will have to do another one of your missions to get you to do that one...

Arc: Hero Therapy! (TM)
Arc ID: 119228
Author: Ridiculous Girl
Number of Missions: 4
Description: Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV)

please give this one a review for me. just a word of warning though, since this falls under one of your pet peeves, the missions do scale down. this is done for a reason, and not arbitrary. you will understand when you run them. (mission #1 lvls 5-20, #2 lvls 20-30, #3 lvls 30-40, #4 lvls 41-54) so make sure you can run these levels. i ran with a tank that had one attack at level 20. it did hot work out very well with his build. thank you.

ok, made some changes based on some of my players feedback.

the /super reflexes LTs have been changed to something else due to their ridiculous perception range and aggroing across crowded maps... the minions have been changed too though it looks like there is a bug with their secondary, because it is not showing their grfx for it. changed a patrol to something that makes more sense themewise.

i am always looking for more players and feedback. i will try to reply to any feedback given. unfortunately, sometimes, i cannot make some changes because it becomes nonsensical. here is a caveat given due to one players feedback... if you are a role player, who takes RP seriously, this is an arc for humans with normal human upbringings. aliens, robots, wolf-children, insects, etc, type of roleplayers need to find therapy elsewhere... though you may benefit in a tangential way... some therapy is better than none, i alway say...

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AE System
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Welcome to Architect Entertainment -- Neutral
Death for Dollars! -- Neutral
Bare Knuckles of Rage (9304)
Signal to Noise -- Neutral -- 67277
*

Allegory
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Who is Kidnapping the World's Great Philosophers? -- Neutral -- 86347
*

Character/Supergroup Origins
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Birth of a Fossil -- Heroic
Secret Origins(Tech) The Snake Women of Epsilon V (42221) - Heroic
Noah Reborn -- Heroic (2370)
Polar Emergence Neutral Government User Interface Network (PENGUIN) #29205 - Heroic
Jumping in Feet First - Heroic - 1345
Midnight Bells Toll ----Villanious
A Hero is made, Not Born. -- Heroic -- Arc# 20863
A Mother's Nightmare -- Heroic -- #6955
*
A Rose's Thorns -- Heroic -- 113224


Classic Super-Hero/Super-Villain
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THE BOMBER --- Heroic --- Arc 16607
In The Shadow of Statesman --Neutral--1160
A Show to Die For! --- Heroic --- 30645
Check... and Mate #15095 - Heroic - Mini Task Force
Teen Phalanx Forever! -- Heroic (67335)
This Life Immortal - (5756) Heroic
Paradox Paradox - (69221) Heroic Stop yourself and Stellar from being erased!
Sidekicks Can Be A Pain In The Cape - (28430)
'Tis Nobler in the Mind - Heroic
Deadly Sins! - 99366: fairly tough arc, can be solo'd.
*


Comedy
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The String Thief, Arc ID: 15726 Neutral 1-54
Mean People, Arc ID:16690 Neutral 1-54
The Extadine Lab -- Heroic (2595)
MacGuffin Delivery Service (1567) -- Villainous
ParaCon -- Heroic (1684)
The new and improved Lord Recluse Strike Force -- Villainous (though I wouldn't recommend against a hero )
The Fire Bunnies - Neutral, They are only bunnies after all...
You Say It's Your Birthday! (3630) - Neutral
Trademark Infringement -- Heroic (2220)
Hail to the King Neutral (34640)
Walk On the Wild Side - Neutral - 3580
Shirley You Jest (25474) -- Neutral
The Invasion of the Bikini Clad Samurai Vampiresses from Outer Space! - Heroic - 61013
Gnomish Madness (30204) - Heroic
Doctor Nadir and the Hellion Heist (49661) - Heroic
Laugh? I Thought I'd DIE! - Heroic
The P.U.G. Strike force (arc 35585) -Villian
A Translator is the Wind or the Thunder in Turns -- (2936) - Heroic
What's in a Name? - Villainous
None More Black, Dude! (#86312) Neutral
Rise of the Drakule - Neutral
Return of the Revenge of the Son of Drakule Part 2: First Blood - Neutral
Martian Chimpanzees and the Cyborg Cheerleaders of DOOM! (Arc #69947) - Heroic
Daytime Divas - #94504 Where else can you get a hair extension as a souvenir?
Death to Disco! - (Neutral, 84420) A short arc that has time travel, silk shirts, platform shoes, Jimmy Carter and a chance to save Rock and Roll.
Too Many Bunnygirls! - ID#101165(neutral). Time to stop them once and for all.
Invasion on Earth BX1132! - Neutral - 45+ - #98943
*
Comedy/Drama
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Fashion Apocalypse - Neutral - 14840
The Running of the Bulls -- Heroic 29973
A Super Team is Born -- Heroic
Cause of How Some Silly Stealed My Wings #1481 -- Neutral
How to Survive a Robot Uprising -- Heroic (12669)
Dr. Duplicate's Dastardly Dare -- Neutral
It's a Nice Day for a White Wedding (9059) -- Neutral
TURG FICTION: Ghost in the Machine, Act I - Heroic (althoughs romantic villains could try this too )
Rum Runners of Bloody Bay (3691) - Heroic
Have a Blap, Blap, Blappy Day Kids! (2019)
The Toypocalypse! (49280) - Heroic
Fishing for Fame with Red Herring - Heroic (66861)
Putting Out Fires: A Corporate Satire (20100) - Villainous
The Rise and Refall of Pets'n'Things.com - Heroic - 1061
The Cat's in the Cradle (8776) - Villainous
Females for Hire - Neutral (Heroic and/or Mercenary motivations) (110723)
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Crime/Gangs
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Bricked Electronics -- Heroic (LIVE! 2180)
The Bravuran Jobs -- Villainous (16809)
The Black Flag Is On The Rise (Pirates!) - Villainous
The Monstrous Regiment of Lesbian Hellions -- Heroic (27178)
Win the 2009 Freak-Lympics (2150) - Villainous
Ninja Crimewave! (2142) - Heroic
Whitehawks (Arc 49364) -- Heroic
The Internet is for Crime (53385) - Villains
Plastic Pistol Peril (1135) - Heroic
Friends in Need (Of Body Parts) - Villainous (31005)
A Little RnR - Heroic (17523) click for Promotional Poster
Mechanical Mayhem - Villainous (76721)
Females for Hire (about a mercenary gang) - Neutral (Heroic and/or Mercenary motivations) (110723)
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Drama
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The Conciliators: Simone -- Heroic (4010)
The Fan Club -- Heroic
Matchstick Women -- Heroic -- 3369
Of Mentors and Legacy - Heroic - 1589
Digital Love -- Neutral -- 3571
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Global Domination
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Axis and Allies -- Villainous (1379)
*

Global Destruction
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The Twilight of this Blue Orb -- Villainous (98529)
*

Heist
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Celebrity Kidnapping -- Villainous (1388)
Easy Money -- Villainous (31490)
The Great Diamond Heist -- Villainous (96169)
*

Historical (Realistic)
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Wrinkle in Time -- Heroic(68920)
*

Historical (CoH Lore)
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The War on Superadine - The Regulators in their 1980's drug war (Heroic) (Arc 7959)
Origins - Volume 1 (57077) -- Heroic
The Once and Future King (#71601) - Heroic
*

Holiday
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City of Ho Ho Ho #18775 - Heroic
Hectic Holidays -- Heroic (36999) also comedy
Santa's Missing List - 34961
*

Horror
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Astoria in D Minor (41565) -- Heroic
Dark Dreams (3615)
D!E COUNT DADDY MACULA D!E! (10619) -- Heroic (1970's Action/Horror)
Don't Play With The Dead (31813) -- Neutral
The Amulet of J'gara (1709) -- Heroic
Project: Perilous - Into the Chthonian Pit (#3586) - Neutral (Unless you happen to be a mad cultist, in which case, go nuts!)
Small Fears -- Heroic
Lights, Camera, Scream! (#68627) - 3 Mission arc that get's you into the B-Horror film circuit.
Duality --Heroic -- 84105
Hunting the Hunters --Villainous -- 93362 - Help a vampire find out who is hunting his people
Creepy Crawlers - Arc ID: 82553 (Lv 41 - 52, a short, solo-friendly ghost story. Best played alone.)
I Will Dance On Your Grave - Arc ID 92630 – Any level, no EBs or AVs, Voodoo, Necromancy
Movie Monster Madness.. - 102058
Something Comes to Yarmouth(58812) - Heroic, levels 25+ (masearch link)
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The Zombie Apocalypse Task Force: Something wicked this way comes.


Large-Scale Crisis
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Alpha and Omega (60015) -- Heroic
Is it Live or is it Memory-X - Arc ID #70210 - Heroic
This Is War, Part I - the Revenge of Hro'Dtohz -- Neutral
Win the Past, Own the Future - Heroic
A Warrior's Friend - Heroic
The Clockwork War -- Heroic (18672)
Flight of the Valkyries - Precursor (20272) -- Neutral
The Human Hive (#1632) - Neutral
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 1, Neutral (15006)
http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat....ue#Post13304513
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 2, The Terran Revolt, Neutral (46711)
url=http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat.php?Cat=0&Number=13304455&an=0&am p;page=0#Post13304455
Bleed the Freak - Arc ID #6919 - Heroic
*

Magic
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The Magical Miss Fitz (5079) -- Heroic
Chains of Blood (5492) -- Heroic
A Deal with Destiny -- Heroic
The Broken Chain (82378) -- heroic
Croatoa's Great War: The Parfait Family Reunion -- Neutral -- 71880
Rex is Missing! - Heroic - 51702
The Tannhäuser Gate (Arc 96322)
I Will Dance On Your Grave - Arc ID 92630 – Any level, no EBs or AVs, Voodoo, Necromancy
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Military
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Redoubt Operations #1: Fires over Kalago -- Heroic
Red Storm Rising (Arc 4912) -- Heroic
Whitehawks (Arc 49364) -- Heroic
Axis and Allies -- Villainous (1379)
Vanguard AQUA (58475) -- Neutral
Wings of Deception, 101926
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Misc. Adventure
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Impossible Kung Fu Mission -- Nuetral (111367)
The Portal Bandits (3326) -- Heroic
A Glitch in the Wyre- Arc 73197-- Neutral (Fun for both the good kids and the bad kids too!)
The Council Cargo - Arc ID: 36951 (Heroic, Lv 26 - 31, solo or team)
Hero Therapy! (TM) - 119228



Mystery
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Blowback (18575) -- Heroic
Dream Paper -- Heroic (13030)
Dream Paper 2: Restless Sleep -- Heroic (16797)
Dream Paper 3: Broken Dreams -- Heroic (13064)
Hunter of Beasts: It begins with a riot... Arc ID: 110465 - Heroic
Females for Hire - Neutral (Heroic and/or Mercenary motivations) (110723)
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Mythology
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Atlantis Attacks! -- Neutral (30898) -- Click for Promotional Poster
The Seelie War -- Heroic
The Unseelie War -- Villainous
[b] The Seeds of Yggdrasil[b/] -- heroic
Tales of Cimerora, volume 1 : Of feathers and fur -- Heroic
The Aegis Affair - Heroic - **** - 16376
Witches and Warriors (53006)- Heroic
Rites of the Maenads (61159) - Heroic
The Parable of the Fruit Salad -- Heroic -- 65369
The Eye of Balor (88176) - Heroic
Madness And The Minotaur - Neutral - 90124
*

Nemesis Plots
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Brass Reaver: Part 1 -- Neutral
The Handbag Plot -- Heroicish -- 36414
*

Player-Chosen Outcome
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Hunting the Dark Dragon -- Heroic
Playing Gods -- Heroic (51106)
*

Sci-Fi
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Above Mars - Part 1: The Wellington -- Neutral (13215)
Adventures of the Space Marines -- Neutral
Adventures of the Space Marines 2 -- Neutral
The Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (29549)
The Continuing Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (70237)
The Final Nemesis
The Knights of Rularuu -- Heroic (75386)
[color= #bbff88]Reach for the Stars -- Neutral (78904) [/color]
Spaced Invaders --Heroic(56856)
That Mysterious Buzzing Sound - 12774
The Balance of Power - 26931 - Neutral
welcome to donut world - 1233 heroic
*

Un-themed Survival/AV/Time Challenges
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The Meatgrinder -- Neutral
*

Puzzles/Riddles
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Grim Riddles (#1396) - Heroic

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please excuse the typos in my last response. my keyboard is broken on my laptop. so everthnihngb ehnds up lookihngb like thnis ahnd it is hnell editihngb everythnihngb...

thank you both for giving my arc a whirl, and thank GGG247 for being patient enough to try it again. i have beeh trying to ingtegrate what people have been giving me feedback on. but the editor is wonky and giving me headaches. i put in some text and fill in some dialogue, then i go in later and find it all govne. it is driving me crazy! so i will continue to flesh it out but it has geen an uphill battle. i may have to nerf the LT's though. war mace/super reflexes custom toon has a ridiculous perception range. he aggros from a long ways away, and sometimes brihngs friends.

i have been running this in test mode with a mid 20 blaster. so i have had ho problems with scaling up or down. but last night i played with a team of three and our lvls were 12, 10 ahnd 5. sihce there was auto sk for the last three missions, we scaled up. but the enemies were much harder, hot too mention the couple of custom toons thnrown in. it was very difficult for low lovel toon, i must admit. downright nightmarish. so i would reccomend a higher level toon witn more fleshed out powers. but a lvl 25 AR/dev blaster has been doing just fine solo on heroic. but you do get increasinly better allies to help you so whnen the boss fights come up you can manage them solo.

one thing i noticed with the lowbie team is that spawning with the therapist, the allies and whatever side blihnky is all over the place. the therapist and his friends are supposed to spawn ihn front every time. but one time the therapist, who is my trigger for each mission, was in the back, top floor. had to bet him and then go back all the way for the allies. this is a map spawningb issue. ho idea how to fix this.

i also saw the secret shame appearing and disappearing. i do not have any idea how this is possible. i never saw that happening before and it seemed like my perception just would drop and she and her mob fade. this made it hard to find her sometimes for me and for others. just a word of warning. i will look at changing her surrounding mobs.

but anyways... any and all feedback will be read, i will reply, and i will consider any thing to make this more playable.
thank you!
RG
oh and remember that everyday is RIDICULOUS DAY! (TM)

Please run my newest arc, HERO Therapy! (TM) #119228
it would be greatly appreciated.

description: Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV)

if you have time, running my other arc would be appreciated too. it is welcome to donut world... click on the names below in my signature.

thank you!

One caveat... This has just been published and still has typos as of this moment. I will be working to fix this ASAP!

One person has already played through, but they finished before I could post the final debrief. Please run it again if you read this.

Do YOU have nightmares about the Vahzilok? Can't sleep because you failed to defeat that Boss over and over again? Do you let your teammates down because you run away from Malta sappers? Do clowns make you have an anxiety attack? Try HERO Therapy (TM)! Start Today! 4 EASY sessions! (1EB,1AV)

Please give this arc a try... you probably need to. Only 5(!) easy payments! You will not regret it!

*Small print* Failure to complete this arc may result in impotence, baldness, general ridicule from children, a lessening of EXP earning potential, and an overall decline of self respect. For further details contact ridiculous girl. Money will not be refunded under any condition.

well then i have the arc for you... i have been trying to get people to play my arc for ages and not been very successful. please, i am looking for players and good feedback. help me out!
thank you
welcome to donut world - 1233 heroic

i will give this one a run too soon, since i liked the first, but shorter, version, or whatever that one was that i played...

looking forward to playing the newier, sexier and flashier upgraded version.

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If anyone wants to run a mission of mine, it won't take long. The only thing I've published on live so far is Doctor Nadir and the Hellion Heist. It's very short, suitable for soloists and lowbies. Arc #49661.

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this is a nice little story that is dying to be an arc. it is only one mission, but it has the potential to be easily blown up in to a full story arc. the first could be a simple investigation, no boss. then the next can be a confront boss. the final could be set in atlas and destroy all objects kind of thing. the story does not have to be difficult. no custom toons other than the boss is necessary either. your story is easily playable and could be a lot of fun too. keep it simple and you can have a nice little story arc...

please try my welcome to donut world, still looking for feedback and player completions.

AE System
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Welcome to Architect Entertainment -- Neutral
Death for Dollars! -- Neutral
Bare Knuckles of Rage (9304)
Signal to Noise -- Neutral -- 67277
*

Allegory
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Who is Kidnapping the World's Great Philosophers? -- Neutral -- 86347
*

Character/Supergroup Origins
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Birth of a Fossil -- Heroic
Secret Origins(Tech) The Snake Women of Epsilon V (42221) - Heroic
Noah Reborn -- Heroic (2370)
Polar Emergence Neutral Government User Interface Network (PENGUIN) #29205 - Heroic
Jumping in Feet First - Heroic - 1345
Midnight Bells Toll ----Villanious
A hero is made, not born. -- Heroic 20863
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Classic Super-Hero/Super-Villain
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THE BOMBER --- Heroic --- Arc 16607
In The Shadow of Statesman --Neutral--1160
A Show to Die For! --- Heroic --- 30645
Check... and Mate #15095 - Heroic - Mini Task Force
Teen Phalanx Forever! -- Heroic (67335)
This Life Immortal - (5756) Heroic
Paradox Paradox - (69221) Heroic Stop yourself and Stellar from being erased!
Sidekicks Can Be A Pain In The Cape - (28430)
'Tis Nobler in the Mind - Heroic
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Comedy
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The Extadine Lab -- Heroic (2595)
MacGuffin Delivery Service (1567) -- Villainous
ParaCon -- Heroic (1684)
The new and improved Lord Recluse Strike Force -- Villainous (though I wouldn't recommend against a hero )
The Fire Bunnies - Neutral, They are only bunnies after all...
You Say It's Your Birthday! (3630) - Neutral
Trademark Infringement -- Heroic (2220)
Hail to the King Neutral (34640)
Walk On the Wild Side - Neutral - 3580
Shirley You Jest (25474) -- Neutral
The Invasion of the Bikini Clad Samurai Vampiresses from Outer Space! - Heroic - 61013
Gnomish Madness (30204) - Heroic
Doctor Nadir and the Hellion Heist (49661) - Heroic
Laugh? I Thought I'd DIE! - Heroic
The P.U.G. Strike force (arc 35585) -Villian
A Translator is the Wind or the Thunder in Turns -- (2936) - Heroic
What's in a Name? - Villainous
None More Black, Dude! (#86312) Neutral
Rise of the Drakule - Neutral
Return of the Revenge of the Son of Drakule Part 2: First Blood - Neutral
Martian Chimpanzees and the Cyborg Cheerleaders of DOOM! (Arc #69947) - Heroic
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Comedy/Drama
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Fashion Apocalypse - Neutral - 14840
The Running of the Bulls -- Heroic 29973
A Super Team is Born -- Heroic
Cause of How Some Silly Stealed My Wings #1481 -- Neutral
How to Survive a Robot Uprising -- Heroic (12669)
Dr. Duplicate's Dastardly Dare -- Neutral
It's a Nice Day for a White Wedding (9059) -- Neutral
TURG FICTION: Ghost in the Machine, Act I - Heroic (althoughs romantic villains could try this too )
Rum Runners of Bloody Bay (3691) - Heroic
Have a Blap, Blap, Blappy Day Kids! (2019)
The Toypocalypse! (49280) - Heroic
Fishing for Fame with Red Herring - Heroic (66861)
Putting Out Fires: A Corporate Satire (20100) - Villainous
The Rise and Refall of Pets'n'Things.com - Heroic - 1061
The Cat's in the Cradle (8776) - Villainous
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Crime/Gangs
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Bricked Electronics -- Heroic (LIVE! 2180)
The Bravuran Jobs -- Villainous (16809)
The Black Flag Is On The Rise (Pirates!) - Villainous
The Monstrous Regiment of Lesbian Hellions -- Heroic (27178)
Win the 2009 Freak-Lympics (2150) - Villainous
Ninja Crimewave! (2142) - Heroic
Whitehawks (Arc 49364) -- Heroic
The Internet is for Crime (53385) - Villains
Plastic Pistol Peril (1135) - Heroic
Friends in Need (Of Body Parts) - Villainous (31005)
A Little RnR - Heroic (17523) click for Promotional Poster
Mechanical Mayhem - Villainous (76721)
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Drama
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The Conciliators: Simone -- Heroic (4010)
The Fan Club -- Heroic
Matchstick Women -- Heroic -- 3369
Of Mentors and Legacy - Heroic - 1589
Digital Love -- Neutral -- 3571
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Global Domination
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Axis and Allies -- Villainous (1379)
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Heist
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Celebrity Kidnapping -- Villainous (1388)
Easy Money -- Villainous (31490)
The Great Diamond Heist -- Villainous (96169)
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Historical (Realistic)
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Wrinkle in Time -- Heroic(68920)
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Historical (CoH Lore)
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The War on Superadine - The Regulators in their 1980's drug war (Heroic) (Arc 7959)
Origins - Volume 1 (57077) -- Heroic
The Once and Future King (#71601) - Heroic
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Holiday
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City of Ho Ho Ho #18775 - Heroic
Hectic Holidays -- Heroic (36999) also comedy
Santa's Missing List - 34961
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Horror
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Astoria in D Minor (41565) -- Heroic
Dark Dreams (3615)
D!E COUNT DADDY MACULA D!E! (10619) -- Heroic (1970's Action/Horror)
Don't Play With The Dead (31813) -- Neutral
The Amulet of J'gara (1709) -- Heroic
Project: Perilous - Into the Chthonian Pit (#3586) - Neutral (Unless you happen to be a mad cultist, in which case, go nuts!)
Small Fears -- Heroic
Lights, Camera, Scream! (#68627) - 3 Mission arc that get's you into the B-Horror film circuit.
Duality --Heroic -- 84105
Hunting the Hunters --Villainous -- 93362 - Help a vampire find out who is hunting his people
Creepy Crawlers - Arc ID: 82553 (Lv 41 - 52, a short, solo-friendly ghost story. Best played alone.)
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Large-Scale Crisis
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Alpha and Omega (100400) -- Heroic
Is it Live or is it Memory-X - Arc ID #70210 - Heroic
This Is War, Part I - the Revenge of Hro'Dtohz -- Neutral
Win the Past, Own the Future - Heroic
A Warrior's Friend - Heroic
The Clockwork War -- Heroic (18672)
Flight of the Valkyries - Precursor (20272) -- Neutral
The Human Hive (#1632) - Neutral
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 1, Neutral (15006)
http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat....ue#Post13304513
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 2, The Terran Revolt, Neutral (46711)
url=http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat.php?Cat=0&Number=13304455&an=0&am p;page=0#Post13304455
Bleed the Freak - Arc ID #6919 - Heroic
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Magic
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The Magical Miss Fitz (5079) -- Heroic
Chains of Blood (5492) -- Heroic
A Deal with Destiny -- Heroic
The Broken Chain (82378) -- heroic
Croatoa's Great War: The Parfait Family Reunion -- Neutral -- 71880
Rex is Missing! - Heroic - 51702
The Tannhäuser Gate (Arc 96322)
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Military
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Redoubt Operations #1: Fires over Kalago -- Heroic
Red Storm Rising (Arc 4912) -- Heroic
Whitehawks (Arc 49364) -- Heroic
Axis and Allies -- Villainous (1379)
Vanguard AQUA (58475) -- Neutral
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Misc. Adventure
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The Portal Bandits (3326) -- Heroic
A Glitch in the Wyre- Arc 73197-- Neutral (Fun for both the good kids and the bad kids too!)
The Council Cargo - Arc ID: 36951 (Heroic, Lv 26 - 31, solo or team)


Mystery
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Blowback (18575) -- Heroic
Dream Paper -- Heroic (13030)
Dream Paper 2: Restless Sleep -- Heroic (16797)
Dream Paper 3: Broken Dreams -- Heroic (13064)
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Mythology
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Atlantis Attacks! -- Neutral (30898) -- Click for Promotional Poster
The Seelie War -- Heroic
The Unseelie War -- Villainous
Tales of Cimerora, volume 1 : Of feathers and fur -- Heroic
The Aegis Affair - Heroic - ****
Witches and Warriors (53006)- Heroic
The War of Fate(12220,46722)- Heroic
Rites of the Maenads (61159) - Heroic
The Parable of the Fruit Salad -- Heroic -- 65369
The Eye of Balor (88176) - Heroic
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Nemesis Plots
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Brass Reaver: Part 1 -- Neutral
The Handbag Plot -- Heroicish -- 36414
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Player-Chosen Outcome
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Hunting the Dark Dragon -- Heroic
Playing Gods -- Heroic (51106)
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Sci-Fi
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Above Mars - Part 1: The Wellington -- Neutral (13215)
Adventures of the Space Marines -- Neutral
Adventures of the Space Marines 2 -- Neutral
The Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (29549)
The Continuing Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (70237)
The Final Nemesis
The Knights of Rularuu -- Heroic (75386)
[color= #bbff88]Reach for the Stars -- Neutral (78904) [/color]
Spaced Invaders --Heroic(56856)
That Mysterious Buzzing Sound - 12774
The Balance of Power - 26931 - Neutral
welcome to donut world - 1233 heroic
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Un-themed Survival/AV/Time Challenges
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The Meatgrinder -- Neutral
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Puzzles/Riddles
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Grim Riddles (#1396) - Heroic