mistformsquirrel

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Get on vent or TS, I'll 'Oopah' you!

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Is that a threat or a promise? <O.+>

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Y'know, Gill, I think that to celebrate you should draw everyone who's posted in this thread a free single-character uncolored sketch!

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*samoabap* >.>

I bap you enough you get your own special style of headsmack <o.@>

PJ Chronicles does that too >.>

Its not letting me join the channel ><

I like it! <O_o> I think Rowr will be pleased <. .>b

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its a weekend everyone is playing :P don't expect too much feedback till later on :P

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*nod*

Heck, my drawings sometimes only get 1 or 2 replies.... ever... >.< after a day or two of being on the forums

Totally depends on what's going on for everyone else <,<

Ahem. "Dayum."

<. .>b Looks good to me <O.O> <;_;> I am further pwnt! /emo!

/comfort CJ <;_;> Awesome work man ><;!

You can't that I'm aware of... unless you can make normal controller pets talk <@.@>

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That's B'DASS!!!! No interview tho? kinda bummed, but still ecstatic!

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Don't fret, you can always check out our IGNIQ interview.

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I would just like to say... you guys look shockingly similar to how I imagine you <O.O> I mean seriously - I'm almost never right when I imagine how people will look.

But then <o.@> I suppose you and Gill do look like your characters. I mean characters look like you.

<waves hand> >.> <did not insinuate that CoX > RL <,<; No seriously I didn't!> <;_;> This isn't the squirrel you're looking for?

(Seriously <,< awesome!)

Hehehe <,< Pretty good <@_@>

Only criticism - the camera was a liiiiiiitle shakey at a couple points <. .> But its kinda minor! Great synching.

Its not a bad start, not at all!

I warn you >< I critique things kinda tough - but I'm taking the time to do this because you have a great start and I think this'll be really good <@_@> So bear that in mind <. .> ie: none of this is saying "you suck" this is all about "making this better"! K? >_<;

First question: Gift of Life Act - is this official CoH lore? (I don't know); if it is - nm. If not - and its something you made up; change the name. "Gift of Life" sounds like either mandatory organ donation, or forced hero-servitude for heroes with medically useful powers.

Remember - you aren't *giving* anyone life by not killing them - they're already quite alive. What you're doing is protecting that life; so, a better choice might be "Defense of Life" or perhaps something more abstract like "Official Adoption of the Heroic Code" - the code being whatever you want it to be.

Again - this depends on if this is official lore - I've never read about it and I think I know alot about CoH's history so I'm *betting* its not >.> If it is of course, you can't really change it <'x'> but if its something you made up - definitely work on the name.


Second: This is about sentence structure:

"On April 19th, 1967, a law was passed. The 'Gift of Life'."

Take those sentences, and combine them with the other one to make:

"On April 19th, 1967, the 'Gift of Life' act passed; barring registered heroes from resorting to lethal force in the prosecution of their duties."

Also on that third sentence, don't use present tense.

1967 is, in the context of your story - ancient history. As is this law; but you're using present tense which makes it sound... awkward.

Third: To go further with this - you then go on and tell us that the law's been repealed. But then that its brought back because of the actions of this guy.

The thing is this though - If he's being excessively forceful; then existant murder and exessive force laws that apply to police would also apply to this individual. So rather than go on with all this exposition of this law, how bout we ignore that and instead explain why he feels the need to eliminate criminals in a permanent manner. Explain his motivations a tad perhaps? ^^

Oh >< last bit; I swear I'll shuddup!

"A hero named CLASSIFIED" - Is that really his name, or is his name CLASSIFIED - (that being the name?)

If his name is CLASSIFIED as in government secret; then I recommend adding ** ** to each side. If his name happens to be "Classified" (that being his name) - use quotes!

Ok also - "Has been killing massive amounts of people breaking the law and government protected informants"


Wouldn't it be easier to say "**CLASSIFIED**, a hero of Paragon City, is out of control...

Then go on to your visuals (which are good); I recommend flashing things like this:

"No one is safe."

"Street thugs..." - near a Hellion, Skull, Freakshow - ie: ganger type

"White collar crooks..." - Family member, Crey in a suit, that sort

"Even those who've cut a deal with the system..." - another body, your choosing.

And then continue on like you have it.







Man sorry that was so much <;_;> Uhh... you see what I'm getting at? >_< You have a great start here <@_@> it just needs a little language alteration really. <. .>;;

<;_;> Yes I'm a horrible person.

I really need to learn to photoshop that kinda stuff... I mean I can photoshop lineart so it has color <@.@> but I can't photoshop in the sense of "Photoshop a picture so it looks different" - at least with any level of interesting effect.

It'd just be darn handy so I too could make better suggestions on the Costume board >.< I have some serious honest-to-goodness anime costumes I'd like to see... but I can't explain them <-.->; and I feel it'd be more damaging to my cause than helpful to use pictures of characters.

(I'd feel like I'm saying "Give me the Batman cape and cowl!" <X_X> which isn't what I'd be asking, but you get the idea!)

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Just got on test myself.. New emotes are cool...

Biggest thing though is Faultline.. looks like a whole new zone! AND.. you can get there through Pocket D.

But to reemphasize what was said earlier...

mmmmm... Donuts!

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I need some coffee. Now. >.<

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Wahhh!!! No new stuff for men! :*(

--BAS

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Its cause we men are losers <;_;> We just have to accept it. (And use it as an excuse to hide in the bushes <O.o&gt

<-- is kidding <,<

Its very similar to straps Star >.> But seriously, imho it looks better because its simpler. The top in particular, I just like the basic "Cross" look.

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I don't get how that 'Angelic' costume is angelic.

/boggle

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Probably just that "Anal Strip" wouldn't make it through QA, so they changed it to "Angelic". Can't they come up with some cool/classy new garb for the ladies without resorting to the half-naked stuff?

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You realize it works on Tights, right? It looks good too.

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EEEEEEEEEEEE!!! CAT EARS FOR BOYS!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Now I don't have to fudge it on Wind with the stupid elf ears!!!!!!!! *is giddy with excitement*

And ways to sit without showing the whole world your goods!! It's almost too good to be true!!

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Except it is! <@_@>; True I mean!

Its nice >.< I might just be able to wear a skirt again <O.o>




my characters I mean >.>

That's a neat character Foo <^_^> I like!

And yes, cats with glasses will rule the day <O.O>

Yumii + Trenchcoat + Sunglasses = <3!

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Better look?

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Needs belt!

>.> Other than that I like it <^_^>

I couldn't find a date listed <;_;> I wanna go but without a date/time - what'm I missing?

Ahem - *obligatory* WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII




<@_@> Congrats Aaron!

<;_;> someone nerfed my words!

<O,O> <fearsGillbates> <o.o>

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Okay :P Finally came back to this and tried to color her. Though it probably would be better to color it in a program, I just don't have the experience to do that without it taking hours. So for a few days in school I tried to color it with pencils.

link

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Looking great on the colors Hex!!


Right on!

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*sniffle* <;_;> TA! TA! I've been censored <;-;> you are no longer an art<censored> -- merely an ART... what the heck that means I don't know <;.;>

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Head reels from not understanding the last page of posts.
Stop that boys! Don't like when my head reels!

Feel better CJ! And when you do, get your butt back to work! j/k

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Sowwy <;_;> I've got Warhammer on the brains lol >< Dark Crusade was released a couple days ago >.< I buy it tomorrow if I get the money <O.O>! <. .> /excited!