Better TA drawing!!


Deebs

 

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Link! This is in compensation for my last TA being so terrible...




EDIT: Fixed the lighting a bit, check the link again...


 

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21 views and no responses...


 

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You're not cool enough to get responses.

Kidding! Really! >.>


But really - I think it looks pretty good, I love the body on this one


 

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its a weekend everyone is playing :P don't expect too much feedback till later on :P


 

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its a weekend everyone is playing :P don't expect too much feedback till later on :P

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*nod*

Heck, my drawings sometimes only get 1 or 2 replies.... ever... >.< after a day or two of being on the forums

Totally depends on what's going on for everyone else <,<


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agreed , I hope around and sometimes comment alot and sometimes don't comment for a few days it entirely depends on my free time . also im never sure on the amount of feedback someone wants so I tend to stick to friends because I already know how much feedback critique they want


 

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I'm always open for feedback and critiques, as many as possible... I'm trying to improve.


 

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well damn Derek that looks really good!!


I do have a small critique though, you can still see a lil white around the outline areas. Is that on purpose? Or leftover from where it wasn't coloured in?



Still overall a vast improvement from the previous version!!


Thanks Bud!!


 

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I know, that was a mistake, and I tried to fix it, but it's weird, I usually fill my flat colors in twice, so it takes out that white part... But when I filled it again it filled the whole drawing... O.o Sorry about those little parts.



Glad you like it though!


 

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Oh... Crap... I just noticed; I forgot the spiked shoulders... Sorry.


 

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Oh... Crap... I just noticed; I forgot the spiked shoulders... Sorry.

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well I was going to say something but critiqueing gift art seems wrong somehow to me!


 

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No, critiques are good!!


So sorry about the shoulder pads and the white liney thingies.


 

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No, critiques are good!!


So sorry about the shoulder pads and the white liney thingies.

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no worries my friend I like it in the end!!


Like I said, great improvement from the last one!