Zamuel

Victory is a little different than elsewhere since we seem to run it and enjoy it. I often see complaints about Reichsman's hp (valid complaint) and comments that the AT temps force team makeup and thus restrict them when the intention was to try to mix things up and only the MM power is truly required.

That's actually my annoyance with Ouro and a lot of the easy mode travel options (though I admittedly use them): they trivialize actual travel powers and people ignore Ouro's real purpose.

Is it truly lag or is it due to DOTs/multihits that naturally hit later? My only CoP was a failed villain run where the MMs were doing a noticeably poor job of reigning in their pets during the obelisk stage.

Well, it looks like rain. Guess it's time for Redemption or Revenge?

Overview

Right out the box, your description for your arc is dull. It seems like "Look at my arc. See it has morality". You need something far more organic so that you extol the virtue of the arc's merits outside of that.

Dr. Eva Lone's betrayal fits her but there's a critical gameplay error. While I and several others probably won't cheat and use Ouro to avoid the Find Mission Exit, the arc's intention of fighting her and the other spawns can be broken simply by dying. Standard lab maps lack jail code so if you die you have to hosp or wait for an ally rez. Since you are fighting Crey in this mission, it is unlikely that one of the few maps with working jail code (Arachnos, Council, 5th Column) will suit you. On that note, the last time I checked the Longbow maps that SHOULD have working jails are still bugged. Also, you might want to rearrange the order of the clues so that they fit spawn order.

I will give you props for using an assortment of the Rogue Island Villains and using Hero Corps. It's nice to go through content with something other than just Longbow, Arachnos, Vanguard, and Rikti (though the first two do make appearances).

Both Mission 2 and 4 require you to defeat all of Comrade's spawn when it would make more sense to only require Comrade himself. Also have to give you a thumbs up on the repurposed enemies you used to represent Comrade's personal army.

For Bad Penny in Mission 3 and Comrade himself in Mission 4, you have them speak their emotes out loud. It doesn't give the effect I think you're going for. Bad Penny's would make more sense as a defeat clue while Comrade's could be done with gloating exposition. "You see this? I press this button and -insert threat here-"

I'm on the fence on whether or not directly mentioning the optional choice in Mission 4 is a good thing or not. However, I'd say it is better to do it like that and make a more exciting arc description. It actually gives me an idea for a suggestion (eww, Suggestion Forum).

You mention the Hero Corps offices but then you have Comrade elsewhere in a nearby warehouse. Comrade is the type to be there in the midst of the threat though he does have an escape plan. I wonder if using the Freedom Corp warehouse could be a decent enough thematic fit. There's two of them and they're pretty linear in structure.

One thing that mildly bugs me is Comrade's actual escape plan though sadly it might not be solvable with how the MA is currently setup. You can stop Comrade for good but people die or get the cure but let Comrade free. While it probably "works" it just feels...cliche. Also, in being genre savvy you don't know if he'd truly keep his word. A better option would be a timer to rescue the people who are poisoned or taking the option to fight Comrade. Still mildly cliche but it is a better example of heroically saving people versus getting revenge on Comrade himself. It may take a small bit of rewriting but it might be a viable option. Plus, the timer could be used for the victory/failure condition.

Spelling/Grammar

-Mission 3 Accept text

Guess it's time to prove Im worth the money you're offering

should be

Guess it's time to prove I'm worth the money you're offering

-NPC
Bad Penny: There's a price on your head, and Im bringing your tail in!

should be

Bad Penny: There's a price on your head, and I'm bringing your tail in!

-Mission 4 intro

Will you intervene and put an end to this?

Nothing wrong grammatically but it feels a little stiff considering the situation. Perhaps a slight rewording would be best.

Requesting permission to point and laugh at people who complain about group content in a Massively Multiplayer Online game. (Not you, just pointing out what you're missing).

Yeah, I specifically stated what I did since I think it somewhat stands a chance at implementation. Though I'm assuming the likelyhood would be Gravity -> Stalkers -> AE

So you want a TF no one runs and everyone on the forum complains about?
I think the high level Praetorian mobs will make things different in their own right due to their difficulty and greater need for situational awareness.

Emperor Cole does not approve of your logic.

And yeah, it IS rather odd that Kinetic Melee and Electric Control weren't mentioned. I'm hoping they're in and simply weren't mentioned due to being considered on the level of bug fixes (and thus not mentioned in a general overview).

I was sure that is exactly what you meant. I don't work in support though. Merely trying to summon mystical devil's advocate powers.

Hmm.

While it would be disrespectful to punch a gift horse in the mouth, this seems rather underwhelming. Granted, we don't know if other smaller things are being added. Plus, pending on the level it may be possible that the mobs can be repurposed for other uses. In fact, the main "easy" fix I hope to see would be expanded levels for the Rogue Island Villains/Paragon Heroes or adding the new mobs to standard groups like Girlfriend From Hell and Super Stunner.

Just as there are people who randomly 1 star, there are also people who feel they are entitled to 5 stars only and there were people who vocalized this. While I feel an author SHOULD have such info, it's most likely done to prevent such outbursts and headaches. Also, though the system logs such information it's possible that support doesn't know the proper way to access it.

The fun thing is that this can apply to a number of powers that don't require line of sight, such as Wormhole.

I think it was pretty idiotic for the devs to give the Stalker power to Scrappers but there's nothing I can do about it.

Yeah, plural text is quite the annoyance. You can stick the <BR> at the end but unfortunately it puts the comma on the next line.