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  1. I'll be present and accounted for...though, to bring Stormmy or one of my myriad of Alts?
  2. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Lady_Cyrsei View Post
    So, you want more rp to happen to you, because you are better at responding to people, but the RP your finding is not up to snuff for you to interact with. Well, as Elizabeth Bennet once said about her skill as a performer ""My fingers, do not move over this instrument in the masterly manner which I see so many women's do. They have not the same force or rapidity, and do not produce the same expression. But then I have always supposed it to be my own fault- because I would not take the trouble of practicing..."

    In short if you want something bad enough you will find a way to get it, so perhaps if this thread has done anything I hope it has drawn your attention to your weaknesses and it has given you a new resolve to try and improve your skills as a role player. I know I have been working harder at dialogue since posting this, and I will continue to do so. Perhaps its time you started storytelling the sort of plot lines and intrigues that you would enjoy with others and I will guarantee someone will surprise you.

    Now not to be too harsh upon you I have a similar problem at times,for me its the grass is always greener on the other side, I had some really very excellent rp comrades about 5 years ago in a PW in NWN's 1, we started with a single area and our RP grew a whole world. The rp was vivid, detailed, quick, flowing, witty, and smart as a razors edge, even on the worst days, but to be perfectly honest some of the RP that I pine for was really so rare that I was lucky to have gotten it in the first place. I know enough now and have learned in MMO's that that sort of level of rp was not the norm, and the Virtue RP community is definitely heads and tails better than the norm.

    Not everyone can be as experienced as you are, not everyone can share the same interests, have a big vocabulary, or an ease for a good turn of phrase or be the Kevin Smith of Dialogue, but if you set an example for others who's to say there isn't someone out there who has the makings of a great role player and all it takes is role playing with you to make it happen. Also, to be fair the setting for this game is Super Heroes, not steam punk, dark horror or Gothic fantasy. It will be a bit light hearted, ultra-violent and super-sexed because that is what comics are! I mean if I wanted to make a Neil Gaiman inspired toon like my take on Sandman then I would not expect the wonder woman and spiderman clone to get his deal, I would find other like minded individuals and weave a story with them.

    In short, be thankful enough that in an RP community as healthy, alive and as willing to include anyone as is the Virtue community, while it may not always be the best the diamonds in the rough make all your efforts worthwhile, so dont judge the whole for really what is the efforts of a few.
    Seriously: This.
  3. Strengths

    + Visually active mind. I hate to come across as a self-absorbed twit, but I have a knack for imagery. Little inflections, actions and gestures are some examples. I can see the actions in my mind and then take them and put them into text with fairly vivid clarity.

    + Depth. I really like to flesh out a character. When I imagine a character, I create their family, friends, pets and other little miniscule details. I like to think that every hero that I create had a past, and that past was instrumental in shaping who they are now.

    + Thorough. I make a habit of researching anything I'm RPing about instead of winging it. If I have a character who hurls plasma? I read into how Plasma acts, functions and is created and manipulated. I like to have a basic knowledge of 'how stuff works'

    + Adaptable. Insofar as working with other people's styles, I'm usually pretty open to stories, complexities and character quirks.

    Weaknesses

    +Altitis. Yes, folks, that overactive imagination has its downside. I can create new character concepts on a whim. However, this leads to my attention being split and a total lack of focus on the ONE character.

    +Fringe Dweller. In large RP conversations, I tend to fall silent and listen more than participate. Cliques make me twitchy, as I feel as I'm shoe-horning my way into the conversation a lot of the time.

    + Scientific mind. This is both a blessing AND a curse. I can RP a tech or natural-based character with the best of them, but I struggle with arcane-inclined characters. This also applies to mutant characters, but I AM getting somewhat better with that.

    +Chatty. I tend to RP in any and all circumstances. However at times I pause to type something witty during a mission and often end up miles behind the group or (if playing an important role) get muddled between fighting and RPing.


    I'm sure there's more to add here, but I'll leave it at that for now.
  4. Steel Canyon, that evening.

    lieutenant Wetherby did not need this today. He'd been flat out dealing with the REGULAR threats in Steel Canyon and now he'd been standing behind a barricade ringing the entrance of a popular, three storey clothing boutique, sixteen people held hostage on the top floor. The stand-off had lasted nearly six hours, apparently some manner of clothing launch for some up-and-coming starlet who'd probably be yesterday's news within a year.

    Still, the Sky Raiders had seen an opportunity to make a quick buck, ransom for someone with so many adoring fans would be astronomical...however, in turn so was the police response. Snipers posted on the rooftops, Police and SWAT at the doors. Not only that but the woman they'd been meaning to grab through all of this had proved to be all the more slick than anyone would've expected, her security detail having ushered her out with a quickness the moment the Pirates had made their presence known.

    She now sat in the back of a Paramedics van, a brown blanket draped over her shoulders, coffee in hand and eyes streaked with both tears and running mascara gazing upward at the top floor of the boutique. Her publicist was still in there. Joanna had always been good to her...and now, if Rhode Island wasn't able to make with the fifty-million dollar ransom, she'd be dead by midnight. Not to mention the other fifteen poor souls still trapped inside.

    The media had been swift to jump on the band-wagon, this situation an absolute media gold mine. Vans, cameras and lighting all over the place as they relayed the situation back to the hungry masses of Paragon's evening audience.

    "And as we can see, six hours in and the situation is still tense. Paragon Police have established perimeter and negotiations are on-going..."

    "A total of sixteen hostages, who had been attending a fashion launch..."

    "...Unknown yet whether a strategy has been formulated..."

    "...with no sign that the situation will be over any time soon..."

    Above the noise and confusion, two icy-blue eyes, burbling like a font of cold calulation surveyed the scenario. While he'd hoped for a more...gentle return to his career of vigilantism, this situation was at best, disasterous and someone needed to act. Where the police were dumbfounded and confused, their intel scattered and contradictory, Shadowstormm knew better. A thermal vision scope had indicated there were eight hostage-takers in all. Sky Raiders. Automatic weapons, body armor and at least a decent level of military training. However the greatest weapon in combat is not the one that you carry in your hands, it is the one that manipulates your enemy into doing what you want.

    Tactics, Strategy, Emotion.

    Fear, more specifically. These men had been trained, but were not immune to one of the strongest of human emotions.

    Paragon's Grim Huntsman vaulted from his ledge, shimmering into invisiblity as his cloaking generator hummed into life the dark figure gliding high over the melee of police, media and onlookers below. It was time to return to the eyes of the public, time to make his mark once more.

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    Six hours, six freakin' hours cooped up in a damn fashion store with a pack of mewling sissies all pleading for their lives. This raid had gone south faster than any of them could've expected. Overhead, the thick thudding of a helicopter's rotors could be heard, the searchlight beaming in the windows between racks of clothing. That freakin' media princess had given them the slip, but that was okay. Sixteen hostages were more than an ample bargaining chip. However, his men were getting restless, trigger fingers getting itchy.

    Some fat guy began another round of pleading for his life, as if it'd make a difference. Though the group-leader was starting to grow tired of his crap, hopping off the checkout counter and tromping over to the stammering fat-body, levelling a pistol to his head, which made him descend into blubbering whimpers instead,

    "Seriously, fat-man, all the begging in the world won't save you. Come midnight we start topping hostages and if you keep up with this 'making noise' ****, we're starting with you. Clear?"

    The porcine, sweating, suited man nodded his head vigorously, causing his pudgy chin to wobble comically as a smile or a chuckle filled the air from the Sky Raiders, who went back to keeping an eye on the news.

    "Hey, Officer Hill, Sir! We're on TV!"

    "Dwight, we've been on TV since we invited ourselves in. What's new?"

    "Well...nothin'. Just thought you'd be proud or somethin'..."

    The Officer shook his head, gazing out the window with a frown before checking his watch: 11:45pm. Fifteen minutes until they'd begin opening up on civilians. He smirked a little, plodding over to his radio to give the Pigs a hurry-up...before his hand stopped, it crackling into life on its own...as the lights in the store suddenly cut out and the escalators shut off.

    He blinked, head wheeling around, brow furrowing as the red emergency lights came on with a hefty CHUNK! He gestured to his squad, already all of them on their feet and weapons shouldered. The civilians, too, seemed rather confused, daring to lift their heads a bit before the Raider Officer pointed sharply at one of his cronies and gestured to the hostages, the man turning back to the previously moving staircase.

    Suddenly there was the sound of something punching through glass, several members of the group, five in total slumping to the floor, neat holes in their skulls. Again the Officer, Hill by his name tag, wheeled around, blinking in horror as more than half his team hit the floor..

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    Outside the PPD respose to the shots fired sent the radio into a frenzy:

    "Roof teams, confirm shots fired!"

    "Roof team one here. Negative, no shots fired. Confirm full mag."

    "Roof team two. Also confirming no shots fired. Whoever the shooter is, he isn't one of us."

    Lieutenant Wetherby lowered his radio, gazing up at the skyline. Another shooter? Damn it. This was hardly the time for some crackpot of an ameteur vigilante to be trying to make his mark. LIVES were at stake here. He clicked onto his radio, barking into it,

    "Roof teams, do a sweep. Find whoever took those shots and...."

    He blinked, staring at his radio and giving it a shake as unnoticed above glided a ghost's shadow, vanishing into the gloom above the shop's roof...just as the radio crackled into life with the most curious signal he'd ever heard...

    -------

    Raider Officer Hill scowled sharply and plodded back to the radio. Damned Pigs had suddenly grown a pair and had decided to start shooting. With a fierce growl, he picked up the radio and began speaking into it,

    "Oh, that was CUTE. Though five of us means five of THEM! Eye for an eye!"

    He clicked off, gazing at the radio but there was no response. He blinked, checked the button again, only to find there was no static when he depressed the button. It was then the radio bursted into life, an infamous quote with equally infamous connotations:

    "Well there's a passage I got memorized, sort of fits this occasion. Ezekiel 25:17.
    "The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the selfish and the
    tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he who, in the name of charity and goodwill, shepherds the
    weak through the valley of darkness. For he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder
    of lost children.

    And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know I am the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee."


    Officer Hill let the radio fall to the ground, drawing his pistol as the escalators ground into life, both running UPWARD toward the floor they were standing on. The Sky Raider clenched his teeth as he leveled his pistol, barking sharply at the air.

    "Oh, that's REAL funny, J*ck*ss! Y'know what? Come and get it. I'm right..."

    His voice slowed to a stammer as something came up the escalator: First a black hood, followed by a glowering skull mask with glowing blue eyes, gazing at him with disdain. Spiked shoulder guards were next, gleaming in the ruddy lights. What followed was all bullets, bandoliers and angry, a gleaming Colt Python held in his hand as the moving stairs ground to a halt, the shadowy figure's cape lazily drifted forward a moment with leftover motion.

    Raider Officer hill shook his head in horror. The one face he had hoped was gone for good was staring him in the face. He'd always thought the Shadowstormm to be a damned tale used to scare the hell out of greenhorns who got too uppity.

    "No...not you..." was all he could stammer, the Grim Huntsman's eyes narrowing sharply as he growled in response,

    "Yes, me...Me, me, me."

    The arm holding the revolver snapped up fiercely to level at the three Sky Raiders, the hooded skull tipping to one side slightly as more words followed.

    "Running time, fellas. Tell ya what, I'll even give you three a head-start."

    He drew the hammer back on his revolver, the men in blue overalls not hesitating to sprint toward the glass.

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    Outside, shrieks of surprise rang out shortly after three bright flashes accompanied by hefty booming sounds echoed from the top floor of the Boutique. The radio went into overdrive, comm chatter going balistic as the police tried to figure out what was going on:

    "Holy...SHOTS FIRED! SHOTS FIRED!"

    "Roof teams! Status report!"

    "Still searching, sir! We haven't fired a shot! Trigger-man must be inside!"

    "Jesus CHRIST! Get me an eye on the hostages. I want status on the Hostages, dammit!"

    There was a long, agonising silence. The collective crowd holding their breath for what seemed an eternity before the radio crackled into life again,

    "I...I got movement. Lots of movement. It looks like the hostages are coming downstairs!"

    There was a cheer of triumph as sixteen of sixteen hostages came barreling out the main doors of the boutique, clapping ensuing as they all departed to worried loved ones. Though, where was the Hero of the hour? Who was responsible? Cheers of delight and relief slowly ebbed away as people saw the last figure to exit the doors. In the face of spotlights came a somber figure, cape billowing as he stepped onto the stairs. Faces agog with awe and shock, hands pointing the direction of the door.

    Shadowstormm. The media had labeled him a murderer, a vigilante, even a terrorist, and yet here he was, standing tall in the face of spotlights and cameras.

    The towering figure strode into the middle of the curved barricades, his hooded face and glowing eyes looking upon the crowd with uneasing sharpness before a barrel-chested voices issues forth,

    "Your media has labeled myself and my Brothers and Sisters in arms, the Guardian Angels terrorists, thieves, CRIMINALS. Senate-hopeful Donald White has labelled us enemies of the state and has set his Longbow hounds on us to drag us in for his 'justice'."

    The hooded, caped, spike adorned figure nearly spits the last word as if it were a distasteful flavor in his mouth.

    "Though I ask YOU, people of Paragon-" He gestures to the building, where not sixty seconds prior he had ended a hostage situation single-handed. "Are THESE the actions of an enemy of the State? A terrorist? A criminal? Are these the actions of a man who extorts, steals and trafficks in the illegal? Selflessly putting his own life in danger to save YOUR own?"

    The unforgiving gaze shifts, watching the cameras. Lights were still on. They were still recording. Good.

    "You have been LIED to, People of Paragon City! A veil of untruths dragged across your eyes to shield you from the real truths lying just beneath the surface. Donald White and his pack of boot-licks have deliberately decieved you for the sake of his own political position...and the people that stood up and protected you from the worst things to crawl out of this city's alleys have suffered for it.

    Well I say this: For every 'crime' that Donald White dredges up, there is an equal truth behind the matter. Donald White may be able to sick the dogs on us, drag us in or gun us down, but he CAN NOT silence the combined voices of the citizens of Paragon City. So open your eyes, seek, look, dig beneath the surface and you WILL see the truth. Then question, retort and contradict. Because, people, you are entitled to the truth. You deserve to hear it spoken."

    A final, icy glare locked upon the camera in front of him before the towering figure of the Shadowstormm suddenly blinked from view, vanishing into the night once more.
  5. And dawns on me that I didn't check the damned date. Just survived Father's day (5th of September). Depending on how early I drag myself out of bed, I may be able to breeze by!
  6. To quote some characters I have in my list, as this is a fascinating concept:

    Shadowstormm: Appears as somberly as he always does, except for a few noted differences. His right arm appears burned and charred, damaged beyond use but still functional. Gunsmoke wafts from the eyes of his mask instead of their usual glow and he leaves a constant trail of blood-stained bullet casings in his wake.

    Novastriker: Appears as a towering figure in gleaming armor, decorated with winged and feathered designs. From his back jut two wings, appearing to be constructed entirely from holographic polygons which glow vibrant blue.

    Shatterfox: Appears as a maskless ninja, eyes blindfolded, weeping a sickly, black liquid as a large eye peers from the middle of his chest.

    Black Lancet: Appears as a hooded and caped Bowman in forest green, a collection of open shackles slung over one shoulder, a hefty sack of coin on his hip next to his quiver.

    Steel Glaive: Appears as warrior in brushed steel armor, it cracked and bent in places but still looking as though it were a day old. On his back is a glaive which he can't draw, a tall shield on his arm that he can't remove.

    I have a bucketload of alts, but these are my more predominant characters.
  7. I'll be there in spirit. Unfortunately I have to brave the madness that is Father's Day. Worse still? I work at a five-star hotel providing a full breakfast buffet and seafood lunch. Gonna be bedlam.

    Have fun, y'all! And if it's anything like last time? See to it that folks drink a couple of tequilas for me.
  8. Support classes. Defenders, Controllers ecetera. That, and Masterminds.

    I can tank like a monster, and I'm one of the few blaster-players around without a lemming complex. However, support classes (or generally classes with a hefty amount of micro-management) really tend to vex me.

    My wife? She can play a Defender or a Controller and leave me agog with how she manages a full team of people being dog-piled by angry Council grunts.

    I'm simple, I like to hit things.
  9. Power customisation and a more 'grey area' approach to the whole 'Going Rogue' system.

    I have a lot of characters that occupy a moral grey-area. Having a system in place in the game is a huuuuge affirmation for those characters who aren't good guys, but aren't complete bastards either.

    It could be argued that this can be RPed if you've got the skill, which is fine. However, having a system put into the game as a tip of the hat to those who aren't always the bright and shiny good was a real selling point.
  10. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Eat_Me View Post
    Some of the greatest minds came together tonight. What was the calling? Was it to stand up for truth and justice? No. Was it to combine their powers to combat a huge threat to the city of Paragon? No.

    Was it to play drunken truth or dare? Yes!
    I'd call that an adequate allocation of superhero resources.
  11. I have but one thing to say:

    SHENANIGANS!!!
  12. Hollowpoint_Hero

    Feeling Game?

    I'm looking to have a little art commissioned, talented Ladies and Gents of Paragon City.

    It would be a portrait featuring the Characters Shadowstormm (same forum name obviously) and The Rose Maiden (on the forums by the name of Lady_Cyrsei) in order to commemorate the two characters as well as the stories currently behind them and the hard work put into them.

    If your interested, please contact either myself or Lady_Cyrsei for details and screenshots of the two characters!

    Cheers,

    Stormmy
  13. Could we perhaps get some form of thruster package (as in a series of high power thrusters attached to the back) travel power?

    Sort of a loony mix of Super speed and fly is what runs through my head.