Farwielder

Alright here's the list so far

Farwielder
The_PMD
Derek_Fayte
Quake
Serengeti_Lord
NewEden
_BAS_
Pep_Rally
Aaron123
Scarf_Girl
Rowr
OrdinaryGirl
Crimson_Jimson
Wogglebug
Hexadecimal
SpookieKid


If you want in on this then please have your name in by tomorrow.

Any impartial forum goer volunteer to draw names once entries are closed?

I should have mentioned as well that I only had what was left of a class to write it (I think it was about 40 minutes).

I never know how to end my stories so they always seem like I just threw something on there to make the teacher happy.(that's definitly not what happened with this at all. )

I really need to work on my dialogue though. It seems wooden when I write it so I usually just avoid it.

I can post another story I wrote for a test, obviously it was really rushed cause it was a test but I'd like some feed back on it.

Yes please. Sorry I hadn't said so before.

Damn that's neat.

I'll use whatever tablet anyone will give to me.

I was thinking something on the thighs was abit off but yeah other then that it's very awesome Pep.

Some more work BAS.

It's hard to make things out I know.

I really like roleplaying a character but I don't think I'm on regularly enough to follow a RP thread.

Maybe I'll check them out though.

So recently I had to write a short story for my grade 11 english class( that's what I get for not doing homework and paying attention 2 years behind)

Anyways the story couldn't be more then a page and here's what I came out with.



Night Hunting


The gravel shifted under the feet of three gargantuan thugs, arms thicker then tree trunks and piercing eyes looking through the opening of black ski masks. It was pitch black on the rooftop of The First National bank except for their flashlight beams which lit their scheme.

Unbeknownst to the hooligans, Steel Hawk sat perched high above them, watching patiently in his high tech armor, wings drawn, preparing for the perfect moment to strike.

Suddenly a loud blast rang through the air, shaking the windows of the surrounding skyscrapers and sending a cloud of dust high into the air. Through the newly created hole the crooks readied themselves for entry into the bank.

Now, through the dust and confusion, Steel Hawk launched his assault.

As he floated down silently, Steel drew in his large metal wings, quickening his descent. He clenched his fist tightly and struck one of the brutes in his great square jaw with such a force, he sailed through the air into a second, incapacitating them both. They slumped over top each other in unnatural positions. Grasping one of the unconscious villains by the scuff of his shirt, he easily tossed him at the remaining thug, who was now franticly racing towards the fire escape. The throw was so powerful it knocked him off his feet where he hit his head on an air conditioner, rendering him unconscious as well.

Just then, as Steel was binding the crooks hands and feet, an elderly Yiddish man emerged from the window of an adjacent building.

“Eh! What’s with all the racket, ya crazy metal bird?” he shouted down.

Steel let out a sigh as he looked down at the crooks slumped together then up to the old man and thought

“People just don’t appreciate anything.”

He walked to the roofs edge, turned to the old man, who marveled at Steels great wings, and said

“Phone the police.”

And with that Steel Hawk leapt from the roofs edge, silently disappearing into the night.

I'm really digging Farwielder without the reaper mask on. That picture makes me feel like he's just been though a really tough fight, where he had to use his strongest attacks and he's completely ashamed of it. (if ya knew his bio you'd understand.)

I feel like he's taken off the mask and is really thinking whether or not using is powers is appropriate.

Damn that's looking nice CJ. I'll get you those torso shoots soon.

We'll BAS you don't HAVE to post more then one toon , but it would be nice not to box anyone in.

Actually that's a grand idea.

(Damn straight I just said grand)

Once this closes on tuesday all the artists should post about 3 toons, so as to not box anyone into a specific type that they have trouble with.

Gah your stuff is awesome!!!!

If you get around to it wanna do one of Farwielder, his pic's in my siggy.

Also check out the Mass Art Swap.

Actually I have toons on every server though some are just there cause I like messing about with the costume creator.

Triumph is home to my first 8 heroes and Victory my first 12 villains.

Damn it. I'd love to win a tablet but my stuff just can't compete with others here.

I'll atleast try though.

We'll the end could be months away as there isn't a dead line to get your picture finished by.

lol damn. I suck. Fixed.

Done!.......in a second

About two days left now to get some more names in.

Wait a minute. Now it reminds me of the great Saya Man or whatever Gohan's superhero alias was.

I think it may look like I've cut off his arm because of the way I draw. I can't go from stick figure to full detail it's just never worked right for me. So I basically start on one part of the body then branch my way out.

Chet looks really nice. For some reason it kinda reminds me of Star Wars no idea why.

Hah I just realized that the fist is facing the wrong way.

Fixed.

Heh it's my first foray into the HUGE body type so the skin is a bit slow going but it's coming along nicely I think.