Acenra

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Pious raced at Tyler, fist clenched, he drove his arm through the air, directly at Tyler's face, knowing that he didn't see it coming.

((Action, reaction. Up to you what Tyler does though i doubt it wont connect))

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Acenra, just arriving for his first day, in school and in the city felt on edge. even though his training in his last city was good, he needed to do some more here. he kept his old costume from the last city he was being a hero in and bought some new books for it too. he looked around a corner in the halls and saw a student being locked itno battle with... something. it must of been invisible, knowing the city and the people, it wouldn't of been unusual. His British chivalry kicked in and he dropped his bags. charging a beam of pure light, he fired before one of the students hit whatever it was. The beam exploded in the hallway, causing the students attention to be diverted to the freshman

"oh dear..." his british accent echoed through the silent halls

((thats a first go, just say if it's not good for the atmosphere right now, I got nervous writting it to be honest, because of the 17 page post i thought you got too far into it for any new chars to be added))

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I'm in too, just for easter, i'm typing my one right now

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I need to know, whos is in a naturals class? my char is being shifted from his private class to a naturals class to learn martial arts

I'm in too, just for easter, i'm typing my one right now

if you're gonna six slot it, i suggest filling it with recharge thingys. the knockback thing doesnt matter, as long as you're alive, and if it recharges quickly, you may not need your defenses anymore, you'll just keep bouncing back

"David, stop bashing the damn door!" Kenith ordered to his cellmate while lying on the small, hard bed. David Zugresky (zoo-gresk-key)furiously pounded the steal door, his knuckles cried a deadly crimson, his grey hair drenched in sweat, his eyes were portals of pure hate and his lips were wet from drool that escaped his mouth while beating the metal slab

"Shut it, Kenith! I'm tired of sitting in this place! It's cold, there's only one bed and the guys on the floor above keep throwing stones down their toilet so it makes that irritating noise that keeps me up every damn night!" David yelled, his deep voice hoarse from yelling the past week

"Geez, for a guy from California, you sure ain't jolly" Kenith mentioned, probably for the tenth time that week

"Thats the tenth time this week you've said that!" told ya "and how can I be 'jolly' when i've been put in the Zig?" David argued

yep, it was officialy, the infamous MasterMind from California had finally been caught and put in Paragon City Jail, and that happened as soon as the robot maker set one foot over the city line. Over the past month, he'd been plotting, yelling, pounding a steal door and going to therapy. He'd been on the edge of madness ever since he started wearing orange overalls instead of a suit of bionic armor. He blamed these troubles on the other members of his old trio who decided to use their own methods of tracking their target. And, even though he was a genius in his own maniacal way, David picked the wrong method, which was to follow his target everywhere they go, like a hungry and crazed beast.

This resulted in one month of pure hell for a bad guy, and David was one of the many who was close to becoming a text book case for Sigmandfroid

"I need to get out of here!" the Mastermind stated through his gritted teeth

"Stop gritting your teeth, man. It's annoying and you dont need to see the jail dentist again, he's already fed up with ya!" kenith said, laying his head down on the dirty pillow "We'll get out. Word is someone is planning a breakout, got outside help and everything"

"That better be true or I'll tear that guy's head off next time we have to smash boulders" David replied before sitting down, back against the bloods stained steel, a little more calm now.

An hour of absolute nothingness went by like a second. over that time, all that was done with the cellmates was staring at the ceiling or the floor. The only thing that was heared was the tap of polished shoes onto concrete, the drip of the tap on the broken sink and the heavy breathing of David, who was stressed out beyond belief. suddenly, everything changed. A huge explosion brought the two jail birds to attention. the painful screams of some of the gaurds fed David's sadistic nature. Then, the tumblers on the door rolled and clicked out of place, allowing the door to swing back with a huge screech. David fell back, his head landing on the steel capped boots of a darkly dressed man

"Get up David, this is a break out" the man ordered, not even looking down to the prisoner. The smile on David's face was the evil one that was lost for the past month. the gaurd gave David a digital watch when the prisoner got to his feet. teh rage in David's eyes shifted to an evil glare to acompany his smile. he pressed the glass of the clock and the powerful armour he craved for all that time phased around his body. He now looked at the man through his visor and sighed in relief

"Dr. RapidFire is back" was all David could say now, his voice muffled by his helmet

"The bots you made can't be shipped over here, the place has AA guns everywhere" the man explained "we were lucky to get the flyers in"

"No worries, my rifle will take care of anyone who'll get in my way" Dr. RapidFire explained. Kenith stood and grinned too. With a wail his form changed to that of a Were-wolf. His mouth overflowed with drool and the long claws he concealed shot out of his knuckles

"Much better" Kenith mumbled, his voice now demonic

"There's a flyer outside. I'd make it quick. The Phalanx are on their way and we can't ship over a thousand people to the Rogue Ilse" The man was getting irritated with the delay

"Fine, fine. Who are you guys anyway?" RapidFire asked

"Arachnos, now lets go already!" the soldier yelled

"Fine then..." Kenith moaned. the three of them ran outside by going through the sewer area

"I know being scum isn't glamerous but this is where I draw the line" RapidFire complained. They aproached circular doors, both gaurded by Arachnos troopers

"Go through, kill everything that yells 'freeze', got it?" the soldier ordered

"Whatever" Kenith dismissed. Both Villains walked outside and into the cold air. The noise consisted of battle cries, explosions and gunfire

"Reminds me of home" Kenith mentioned. The duo spotted the flyer nearby and ran towards it. They were almost there before being stopped by four prison gaurds. a couple opened fire on the doctor but the bullets had no effect

"This reminds me of home" RapidFire mentioned. Kenith snarled and massacred the first two while the doctor used energy stored in his gloves to fire blasts of force energy, knocking the two into a wall, the force making them loose conciousness

"Freeze!" yelled a bulky, costumed man

"Oh boy, capes and cowls time" Kenith groaned. There was only one, but nonetheless it was an annoyance

"I'll deal with it" RapidFire assured "get to the flyer, I wont be long" the beast put down his prey and jogged to the flyer. The hero made no effort to chase him. Instead, he unleashed an energy blast onto the doctor, who was thrown back

"Now THAT is more like it!" RapidFire rejoiced. He fired a force blast which knocked the hero back into a pile of rubble "and yet, it still isn't worth it" he complained before arming his rifle. The hero sat up. The last thing he ever saw was the red dot on his forehead from the targeting laser. In three seconds, he lay back down lifeless, a smouldering hole ran through his head. the barrel of the doctors gun steamed for a bit before it cooled

"Ah, the good old days" Sighed Rapidfire, placing the rifle on his back again. He felt reborn, back to his evil ways. To him, nothing welcomes you back to the bad side better than a murder

The trip to the Rogue Ilse was long but durable. Rapidfire just did what all 'cool' evil doers do, which was to sit down, close your eyes and look like you're snoozing, but really you're thinking about what evil to do next

"We're almost there now guys, just five more minutes" The pilot yelled back

"Great, maybe I can steal a decent apartment" Kenith stated, now back in his own form

"Ditto, I'll need a good base for me to work" RapidFire added, still not looking up. the rest of the trip, Kenith whiped his claws clean from the fight earlier. The once white hankerchief was now blood red, and drenched in it. There was a sudden thud as the Flyer landed at it's destination. The two villains jumped out the flyer and stared upon the smouldering ruins of Mercy Ilse

"This is gonna be good" Dr. RapidFire stated, grinning like crazy under his helmet.



There we go, i had to do a Villain back story, I was looking at this section and all the backstories I've seen are for heroes. I had to give the villain one a try

hope you like it, it's unlikley but if you want me to do another chapter just say.

it works well, even if the extra defence is only marginal, it works well, and it has that cool human tourch look to it

the KB isnt what you want to worry about in hover, when you get KBed, you go up rather than back and the distance is halved

I'm glad to hear this, depending on which server you're on, give Dr. RapidFire a holler if you need a lvl 12 MM's assistance

I'll see you around

ok, I scrapped thamy last SG when everyone quit and I couldn't pay the base rent, it was going downhill from day one, so the Paladins of Paragon will be its replacement

just like anyother SG its basically "join and earn prestige" but I'm adding some relief and I'm not going to pressure you to do it, you can do it in your own time but I would ask you to do it once in a while

our promotion system is a little different to other SGs though, you have a choice, you can:

A) choose to get to the next 10,000 prestige marker (eg, if you have over 10,000 prestige already, you'll have to get to 20,000)

B) go to the arena and beat any member who is a rank or more higher than you. This proves yourself by being able to sucsessfully take on another SG member

Raids and other events will be organised if the majority of the SG is availible and up to it, not when one person feels like it and causes us to die

the base is going to be a magic based one but all chars are invitable. just find Acenra in game and asked for membership if you want to

if you're looking for a fun tanker, i'd go for fire, if you're looking for a quick game, go stone, if you're looking for a team player in the early stages of the game, I'd say ice, but if you're looking for a team player all the way though, then go for invulnerability

that was awesome, I'll try my best next time and i'll send you an mp3 file

ditto

a player after my own heart

I must warn you. Fire may be fun but it isn't very deffensive. consume is a very valuble move so keep it, in fact, all the moves in your primary are valuable.

sorry dude, My timing is rubbish as well as my voice when it's recorded, I'll have to drop out, sorry mate

oh yeah, i got this u-lead thing which should play in windows media. anyway, I'll have a go if you want. I sing at school, so it's worth a go.

I also gotta wait until my parents go out and I'm in the house solo cos knowing my parents, they'll ask me what I'm doing halfway during the song or keep the tele up too loud.

Interesting, I agree with Raven on this one, the lyrics are better than the original ones

My tactic is to make sure I get the aggro of powerful bad guys so that if the weaker enemies leave for your other teammates, you wont have much hassle. Also, I plough through it, because I can use consume to get more end if I need it.

Fire/Fire straight off. With the proper enhancements it's a really effective set

curses! I couldn't make it

I may not be able to make it. however, if I get my dad to log on and just stand around for me, I can still be in the photo! now for the long and arduous task of teaching my dad computer games

I'm in, just make it after six or so, I'm not availible from 8:10 to 6:00

hey, I got an idea, why dont we get a group photo with everybody like they did on union, just so we can all have something we can remmember you by. I'm sure that a selection of people have a pic of you, but why not one last blast on the defiant server, say on the city hall steps or something?

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50 inf says she will be back within a month :P

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shh! dont say that! having a sister who does psycology helps, if you bet against them, they'll be more determined and theres more chance they wont be back!

Gonna miss ya. I wish all the best. I'm gonna miss being killed in PVP, the next time I get stabbed in PVP by any other stalkers, it wont be the same.

Being one of my best friends throughout the entire time I played this game, I'm gonna do something for ya. Seeing as your personality inspired me to create the third main character, I'll give ya a special mention in my book .

good bye, my friend

This is the tale of the brother of Acenra, who had decided to take up permanent residency in Paragon City. This story takes place ten years after the defeat of Shadow and the destruction of all dark magic along with the Netherworld.

Amidst the urban chaos which is Paragon City, there are heroes and villains; the good and the bad, The Light and the Dark, the Pure and the Evil. Everyone thinks that when there’s nothing to do, the heroes generally have a good time. And they would be right, if they don’t count one little bowman in Steel Canyon.

Archer was his name, and if you wanted to know what he was like, then think cold, hateful and misunderstood. He had a brother, only a year younger than Archer and was having the time of his life with his new wife in California. The 28 year old hero was used to this ever since the age of 10, after the massacre of his family. He had no friends in the city or back in England. He was generally a lonely guy.

Archer sat on the corner of a skyscraper, perched like a sleeping gargoyle. His dark green robes making him almost invisible in the abyss of the night sky. His quiver shuddered in the wind, making his arrows rattle. His cold, unforgiving red eyes scanned the streets for villainous prey under his hood that hid his face in a shadow

“Looks like another calm night” He whispered to himself, his voice deep and intimidating, missing any emotion.

Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a skull running for his life and behind him was a hero in hot pursuit. He disliked the helping of others, but this hero looked like she was really struggling. Quickly pulling the string back on his bow, he fired an ice arrow that whistled through the air. He watched it tear the air for a few seconds before it encased its target in a block of ice. Archer thought that he should get his arrow back, so he sprung off his perch and did several graceful flips before landing on the ground below him completely unscathed

“That was amazing!” the other hero complimented

“Thank you, it was a run of the mill thug and an easy shot to take” Archer dismissed, pulling out the arrow from the ice block then re-attaching another ice capsule to the head

“Are you British?” the woman asked in amazement

“Is there anything wrong with that, kid?” Archer demanded in an icy tone

“No! No! No!” the woman answered, hurriedly “it’s just, not many British heroes have gone through here”

“I gathered” the bowman replied

“My name’s Bow” the hero stated “ever since I picked up a bow on my twentieth birthday, I wanted to be a hero, and for five years I’ve been looking for a mentor, I just haven’t been looking in the right place”

“Before you ask it, yes, I’ll be your mentor until you get your accuracy in check, and with my teaching that won’t be long. Just follow my rules and stay on my good side.” Archer ordered “meet me in atlas tomorrow and we’ll get registered” his orders, even though charitable, were said in a way so cold; you could use it as a fridge.

“Ok, thanks! Uh… sir!” Bow responded, saluting

“Good girl” Archer complimented “now get some rest, remember my orders” he clapped his bandaged hands and in a flash of powerful green light, disappeared from the spot on the street

“Do you think he’s cool?” Bow asked to the skull

“I think I’m gonna be sick” the skull groaned from the ice block, getting nauseous from the show of friendship and justice

“Ah, who cares what you think” the hero dismissed, leaving the thug to freeze.

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The next day, Archer leaned against the left boot of the atlas statue, looking at the other high ranking heroes in disgust. He disliked anyone like that, he didn’t want to commune with heroes who are more childish than hero.

“Shouldn’t you be getting back to work?” Archer asked

“Come on Archer, can’t you be a kid just for once?” one quizzed

“I haven’t been a kid since I was ten” the bowman stated

“Ah, who cares, loosen up some time in your life kay?” another suggested

“Whatever” was all Archer said before he went towards the town hall.

“Yo, Archer!” yelled the local speedster

“Hello, Synapse, what do you want now?” Archer asked, rather annoyed

“I got a letter for you, for some reason, they decided to give it to Manticore, so the red guy told me to give it to you personally” Synapse explained, handing Archer the red envelope

“Thank you, here’s an influence coin for your trouble” Archer said, handing the speedster a small blue coin

“Thanks! I’ll tell Manticore you got the letter.” Synapse assured, before speeding off to Brickstown. Archer tore open the envelope and read the letter inside. He grinned for the first time in weeks as he read that Acenra and his wife are back saving the big city in California. He liked to see that his little brother was having a better life for once since he fulfilled his destiny and was still alive to see the results.

“I should visit him sometime” Archer whispered

“Visit who?” Bow asked

“Huh? Oh, my little brother” Archer explained quickly. He was talking to thin air, but that air was visibly filled when Bow appeared from her invisible cloak

“That’s cool, shall we get registered then?” Bow asked

“Yes, lets go” Archer answered. They walked inside and filled out all the forms.

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A/N: just a chapter of something, I had writters block on my book so I did this to relieve me from it, it kind of works too, I just got a new idea

I got there on tuesday and thought it was a bit small, so I checked the forums and saw that it was shifted. when I said the words "party on saturday" in a sentence I had loads of non forumers saying:
"party?"
"party? what party?"
"lol a party"

but still, saturday is good, my mum had to do some studying and everything so i may not of stayed for long anyway.

cya all at the party on saturday peeps!