Black and red is cliche, yeah, we know, but sometimes it just works. I have a rule when it comes to colors. "At least 3." Right now you have black, red and I think grey is what I see in there. It's hard to tell with the aura.
I'm not a fan of the breather. I'd go with the death guard, use the same grey and make the other color black.
The belt looks out of place. The alpha belt is a very tech-looking while the rest of the costume isn't. So, for the belt, I'd suggest the heavy leather belt, spiked leather, chain ring, spiked grooves, small spiked or any of the skull belts. With that said, I'd lose the sport gloves and opt for something leather.
Also, I'm not a fan of the claw choices you picked. Why the asymmetrical look with the claws on a brute? I could understand if you had one long, sharp dagger looking claw on one hand to emulate a blade similar to Altair or Ezio (Assassin's Creed) but as a brute, you're a whirlwind of face ripping destruction. I'd say go with the big cobra-fang lookin' claws for both hands.
But, this is my opinion. 6/10
"People who take offense to IC actions OOCly need to learn to differentiate between the two... Or change their damn meds."
I honestly do not like the hair. The general costume is fine, but I think you should go about two shades darker on the gray.
I personally like the assymetry with the claws. But... This guy needs a helmet. Something techy...
That, or you can just change the breather. That's my complaint as well.
Helmet, hood, scarf, or mask.
I like it 
Well, that grey is the second darkest, next to black, so I can't really go two shades darker.
As for my claw choice, I liked how the Viper lined up with some of the attacks, and so did the blade. It made ... more logical sense, imo. Plus, the majority of the time, I always see Claw power sets with the two of the same claw choice, so I decided to go out-of-the-norm.
As for the breather, the breath looked more real coming out of the breather 6, then any other.
And the belt, I guess it could be changed. I just how it looked ... more, for lack of a better word, there.
Also, what about the hair don't you like?
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And hey Nalrok. :3
"Dein Gl�ck, ist nicht mein Gl�ck... ist mein Ungl�ck." - Feuer Frei!, Rammstein.
Characters:
Christopher Edge - 50+3 DB/SR Stalker
Qlimax - 50+3 DB/FA Brute
Christopher Edge - 50+3 DB/SR Stalker
Qlimax - 50+3 DB/FA Brute
I think the costume looks good. Like the asymmetry on the claws, good look. Belt is out of place I agree, but as for the rest, I like it.
Well....in my...opinion
the gloves and shoes need to have some of the gray on them, to bring it throughout the costume.
two chunks in the center and one on top don't have much continuity as a whole.
other than that...It looks fine, I suppose.
Magisterum- 50+3 Fortunata--Virtue
Lukerion- 33 Emp/Rad Defender--Virtue
Noah Heartily- 34 SS/SD brute- Virtue
Mika Heartily- 50+1 Fire/MM blaster-Virtue
Great costume! I like it!
However, if you find you want it to be re-designed... you may want to head HERE.
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Great costume! I like it!
However, if you find you want it to be re-designed... you may want to head HERE. |
"Dein Gl�ck, ist nicht mein Gl�ck... ist mein Ungl�ck." - Feuer Frei!, Rammstein.
Characters:
Christopher Edge - 50+3 DB/SR Stalker
Qlimax - 50+3 DB/FA Brute
Christopher Edge - 50+3 DB/SR Stalker
Qlimax - 50+3 DB/FA Brute
I just randomly made this costume. He's a Claw/Fire Brute. I've only been playing for a few months now, and was wondering if I could get some feed back and see how you guys like it.
Thanks.
*Note: He does have the Bestial Aura, with breath (the color is red), so it makes it look like he's breathing out blood. Though it is hard to see with the fire shield.*
Christopher Edge - 50+3 DB/SR Stalker
Qlimax - 50+3 DB/FA Brute