The Best CoH Inspired Comic EVER!
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Posted on: 2010-12-23 08:36 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
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Great production quality on these comics! Some great funny moments too. Very nice work.
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This is great! Good characters, great story, liking it a lot. I'm interested to know how you're staging the characters, are you using more than one account?
Look forward to reading some more of 'One of' the best CoH Inspired Comics EVER! 
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Minor nitpick, but if you can, I'd edit that cover, it's 'Divided' not 'Devided'.
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Originally Posted by Johnny_Raven
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I think it has very good bones and overall it's quite good. I really like how you've structured the panels and altered the outfits with the blood spatters. Excellent.
There are some typos and misspellings that could be policed up. "Firefight" is one word, for instance. Splitting it in two means a fight using fire. There were a couple instances of "your" where it should be "you're." Page 6 you say "arial" when it's spelled "aerial."
Strongwall's dialogue is impossible to read without zooming in, so after the first time I just assumed he was speaking ebonics and skipped it.
My main quibble would be with the recap Giga-Ton gives in the middle. It almost reads as if that's the first page of Issue 2. Having just read the previous 13 pages, it's pretty much unnecessary. It'd be better to eliminate all of that and just focus on his recounting of Raven's backstory. Spread the info on the top of page 15 over that two-page spread and it will maintain the story's forward momentum.
Overall score: A-. Looking forward to the next one.
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I had the members email me their costume files. Some shots are actually all the members together, sometimes it is a shot of me wearing someone elses costume file with another member, sometimes it is just me on both toons seperatley, then photoshopping them together.|
Originally Posted by Henri
This is great! Good characters, great story, liking it a lot. I'm interested to know how you're staging the characters, are you using more than one account?
Look forward to reading some more of 'One of' the best CoH Inspired Comics EVER! |
As far as grammar goes, I'm a graphic designer, spelling is not my strong point, but I do have one of our members sending me corrections.
Initially the issues were done in chapters, then were put together in issues, thus the recapping of what is happening just shows where the next chapter began.
I appreciate all the valuable input, I'm really having fun with this.
Thanks!
Great material and you have some really good stories so far.
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"With Me - Against Me" Mission Arc 230667
WARNING: This comic contains graphic violence and strong language. Parental discretion is advised.
Just when things couldn't get worse for the Justice Corps, they face the threat of a new team, and things quickly get ugly. It's trial-by-fire for the new recruits!
Things are getting wierder by the moment. The base is shutting down, the new recruits are coming apart on the field, and what is happening to the body of Johnny Raven? You don't want to miss the stunning conclusion to this storyline!
Following the twists and turns of "The Face of Death", we take a look at the origins of Sarah Fymm and how she became a member of the Justice Corps.
The origins of Sarah's history continues as she meets with the Justice Corps for the first time, although it is far from a friendly one. Tempers are frayed, friendships are challenged, and this is all before the battle really begins!
As the body count rises, members of the Corps stand accused of murder as the rest of the team enters the Shadow Realm on a mission to put an end to the hunt for Sarah.
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