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No worries man the chest structure is improved and does look more realistic... I just like big boobs is all... on angels that is... that carry warhammers, ahem. |
Originally Posted by Clutch
Well those were collateral damage
 Changing the breast structure required it... as for the choker, I removed it because a fellow over on conceptart.org did a paint-over to show me his thoughts on improving the chest, and his paint-over got rid of the choker for clarity. I saw that and immediately liked having that collar bone popping up a bit, so I went with it.What confuses me is that you said it reads better except the breasts... but the chest structure was the part that I was deliberately trying to improve. Ok maybe I'm not confused by that so much as I am saddened  Anyways I'm going to edit my previous post of the image with a few touch-ups instead of posting the image all over again. But from this point forward I will force myself to not touch the image again. I just realized that I have never done a landscape in my entire life, so I need to move on to that and stop dwelling on this one. |
Don't listen to him Clutch, they look just fine the way they are.
Just a bump as a reminder of my availability for commissions.. I've run into a bit of a financial snag, and as a result I'm feeling pretty flexible about commission prices right now.
So if you were thinking about getting something, now would be a good time
Thanks,
-B
hmm... pell grant coming in a couple weeks may be able to siphon some off that.
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Just let me know |
Originally Posted by Scootertwo
hmm... pell grant coming in a couple weeks may be able to siphon some off that.
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wish I had the funds! I love your style!
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Originally Posted by Clutch
Just let me know
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Which one? He's shown himself proficient in several |
Originally Posted by PowerStream
wish I had the funds! I love your style!
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Originally Posted by Caemgen
Which one? He's shown himself proficient in several
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I particularly like the black and white (and splash of red) of Death of Liberty. Feels very Noir-ish and i like it... I like it a lot...
But he has a certain style or something that to me hits in every piece. I'm not sure what it is but I really like it.
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I left this comment over on your DA page, but wanted to reiterate it here:|
Originally Posted by Clutch
After some consulting over at conceptart.org:
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"Actually, I do not think they are over-stated. Too often I've seen women being abnormally endowed when drawn, so much so that the chest draws all attention away from the rest of the piece. I don't get that when I look at Valkyrja.
Are they on the large side? Yes. But they're not 'in your face' out of proportion with the rest of her form that they are a distraction.
Now were the same breasts placed on one of those 'pencil-waisted, un-naturally posed females, then yes they would be too large.
I see this as a perfect balance."
I agree, this lady has the frame to support the assets.
Be Well!
Fireheart
D'oh,
What about the the changes to her hood and the neck choker being missing and other stuff I noted? Did those happen in a previous revision that I missed perhaps (I'm just looking at differences between the last two times the image is posted in this thread)?
What confuses me is that you said it reads better except the breasts... but the chest structure was the part that I was deliberately trying to improve. Ok maybe I'm not confused by that so much as I am saddened
Anyways I'm going to edit my previous post of the image with a few touch-ups instead of posting the image all over again. But from this point forward I will force myself to not touch the image again. I just realized that I have never done a landscape in my entire life, so I need to move on to that and stop dwelling on this one.