Goddess Artemis Drawing.


Coston

 

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Hello,
Just finished doing a drawing for my friend Miss Cold and her new toon 'Goddess Artemis' i mostly draw male heroes, and this is my first try at a female hero. It's a challenge for me, because the male and female body are pretty different as in the shapes etc. But this is what i came out with, i am happy with how it turned out. Would really like it if i could get some feed back on it cheers!

Goddess Artemis.


 

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Funny how my attention span is small. I meant to comment on that a little while back now.

Wanted to say I really like the colouring. Also the power FX have a nice shiny glow. So kudos on that! ^^

The lineart aspect is very good too. Solid yet thin black lines. Also great foreshortening!

My only, and major, qualm is the toon and how you depicted her.
I would date a Goddess any day. I mean Goddesses are renowned and portrayed to be beautiful.
Personally, I wouldn't date this Artemis.

So what would I suggest? Working from reference. Take a picture of your gf/mom/sis and use as reference for the face. Then you can go wild and add/change features to fit the toon.

Sorry if my comment seems a little harsh... but I see potential in your work Coston.

Keep up the good work mate.


 

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I don't think there will be a harsh comments from you, Swissy. This is art and you are better than most of us. So you use your knowledge to point out facts, make people use their talents for the best. I know most of the guys and girls like comments to their works, good or bad. At least for me and my friends.

Coston very good. Only thing i can add to Swissy is her eyes. Maybe it looks like a little detail but both in comics and manga/anime eyes are one of the most important parts of the character, especially for females. You could leave light spots in eyes. Maybe this is why her face looks simple.


 

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The pic is not bad but what shocked me the most was... Well... the hair between the legs. For at least 10 seconds I coulnd't remove my eyes from it, it's... A bit... Strange for definitively more constructive comments >> See Swissy

Oh and nice colouring and good use of the valentine elements too^^


 

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The pic is not bad but what shocked me the most was... Well... the hair between the legs. For at least 10 seconds I coulnd't remove my eyes from it, it's... A bit... Strange

[/ QUOTE ] well that would be the first place you look after you see the name goddess woudlnt it soul!

But anyway. moving away form the hairy areas, i admit the face is a little boring, but its not to much what i was concentrating on, i was more into drawing the body to be honest. thats why theres alot more detail around that area etc.And not on the face. but i could see where to improve her face easily. but thanks for the comments.


 

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well that would be the first place you look after you see the name goddess woudlnt it soul!


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ROFL, you're calling me a pervert ?!

Ok... I am... lol

Nah, it doesn't have anything related in, it's just that... You know... As a girl, when I saw this, I was thinking first : OMG !!! She doesn't use waxing ?!


 

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Lol shes a goddess she can do what she wants with her hairs!