Mr and Miss Marvellous (Gaming Comic)


Ghost

 

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Thought I'd post my entry. I'd be VERY interested to know what people think about it, and I can't wait to see others (having just looked at the ones posted so far. Very good stuff ).

Ooh, I squished it down a bit so it should be easier to view on a browser

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Hope you enjoy it.

Amenta


 

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All through the games screen shots using 3 computers, 3 accounts the arena and my Nemesis Staff mission

Amenta


 

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Nicely done!

I particularly like how the contact speaks through the narator boxes. It gives a high speed feel to the comic.


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Thanks I'm quite pleased with it myself. I'm thinking of doing more for our website when it is online.

Amenta


 

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Very good use of the panels and the layout to express lively action and a dynamic feel. Some of the fight scene panels are perhaps a little unclear, but not the main plot-driving frames, which are obviously far more important anyway: fights tend to be chaotic and difficult to follow anyway. And a nice ending too


 

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Some of the fight scene panels are perhaps a little unclear

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Actually that was the one thing we had a problem with. We only had 2 cameras there (the player cameras) and we were fighting +2s at the time that could easilly wipe us out. I did infact die twice trying to get the right shot

Glad you liked it though

Amenta