plz. help me for animazement .need anime screenies
By
Blitzwing_NA,
Posted on: 2009-02-27 19:15 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
..ok.. heres some pics .... didnt do anyone yet due to the fact I forgot to print bio sheets out :*(
No Nosys ..the saga of veteran pets
Pretty Little Zoe in anime dress.. WIP (heehee..I get ta kill two stones with one bird on this and post it in my WIP thread too ) 
Awesome work, as usual 
So, wait. You're trying to tell me that Brutes and Scrappers arn't the only AT in the game?
Here's a brief bio/description
Ghoulish is a culmination of tortured spirits taken by harsh storms of every shape and size. They have been drawn into the wind and rain itself and taken her own ghoulish form. Able to control the ghoulish weather and summon the ghoulish undead creatures to do her ghoulish bidding, she works her ghoulish ways upon the ghoulish masses ghoulish. Although ghoulish she is a mass of ghoulish ghouls and therefore ghoulish doesn't always have a ghoulish thought for her ghoulish self. Ghoulish ghoulish ghoulish ghoulish ghoulish ghoulish ghoulish.
Her face is framed by the white eye of the storm surrounded by the black night around her face. Tendrils of black lightning caress her snow white body and wrap all the way around to her black, undead claws.
In other words, I feel like it's black lightning on her body. She is a necro/storm mastermind.
Melanie Moody.. will look better when colored.. err... I think I made her too cute and innocent for her to be Melanie though..
Melanie-Moody-WIP
and..ick...
Ghoulish Ghouly Gal.. err.. wind storm ghouls... ect...
Ghouly Gal
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and..ick...
Ghoulish Ghouly Gal.. err.. wind storm ghouls... ect...
http://tartarsause.deviantart.com/ar...ouly-115071776
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I wouldn't say ick, mayby w-ick-id because it looks really awesome. Those are really great creepy looking ghoulies. And her eyes are normal, as normal as a ghoul can be anyway. 
Looking forward to seeing the finished results.
LOL, whereas I think she looks just fine cutesy. :3
The thing that strikes me most about this experiment is that you have superior proportional mastery, if you can easily transition into a brand new style while still maintaining a proper look and feel to it. What you'd lack instead is just simple experience and confidence. More than anything, that will make your lines smooth and your pieces uniform.
One thing though. You put her rear hand on backwards. :3 Don't be discouraged though, we've all done this from time to time. It's just a simple fix to remember for next time. I always try to adopt the pose myself, to double check my thumb orientation. It takes a few seconds and it's good practice for making sure my elbows are in the right spots as well.
http://www.virtueverse.net/wiki/Massacre_Melanie -the original Fire/Dark Corruptor -
http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showthread.php?t=115217
The Guide to BURN
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One thing though. You put her rear hand on backwards. :3 Don't be discouraged though, we've all done this from time to time. It's just a simple fix to remember for next time. I always try to adopt the pose myself, to double check my thumb orientation. It takes a few seconds and it's good practice for making sure my elbows are in the right spots as well.
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ack.. well I can correct it before anyone else notices.. ..I try to do the pose myself too.. but I was so wrapped up in trying to get the high heels and lace to fit on me.. I forgot to notice the thumbs... err.. I will sneak a corrected one in later and no one will know.. *nods to self*
corrected her thumb and cleaned it up a bit..
CORRECTED-Melanie-Moody
kinna wondering now that you cant see her thumb from that pose.. err.. WHERE is that naughty thumb going?
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corrected her thumb and cleaned it up a bit..
CORRECTED-Melanie-Moody
kinna wondering now that you cant see her thumb from that pose.. err.. WHERE is that naughty thumb going?
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That was my first thought. 
Regardless, it's a great piece of work, Tartyr.
angel.. I wanna do one of your main... plz .. need bio and screenie if its ok..
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corrected her thumb and cleaned it up a bit..
CORRECTED-Melanie-Moody
kinna wondering now that you cant see her thumb from that pose.. err.. WHERE is that naughty thumb going?
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It's going where no man has gone before!
As for more critique, I can only offer a minor suggestion since you already seem to have a handle on the basics of developing the style.
Try to do the final lines with as little cross hatching as possible. One of the things that separates animation style from standard styles is the look of the animation cel. So, continuous lines and cel shading rather than sketchwork and hatch shading.
If you can remove the hatches and make your lines contiguous then I'm sure you'll be one step closer to the style.
http://www.virtueverse.net/wiki/Massacre_Melanie -the original Fire/Dark Corruptor -
http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showthread.php?t=115217
The Guide to BURN
Here you go Tartyr.
My namesake Angel Red.
When Angel Red first arrived, she was green, and ill-equipped for the tasks set before her.
After a great deal of trial and error, she finally found a way to get her point across.
Many incursion by the Rikti and their mentalists left Angel Red with the beginnings of, up until then, her unrealized past. I have a story explaining this transformation as well, but it's at home, and I...
...am not. 
Her half-dragon form has also gained experience and will often shift to Battle Angel form during combat.
I have more screenshots at home, will add them when I get in.
I'd have to say that you saying lack of proper anatomy as a drawback seems strange and silly to me. I mean, your Mr. Awesome is looking pretty cool. But does his head have much by the way of proper anatomy? Far from it.
Also... I dunno what anime you're referencing, but there a heck of a lot of manga out there with really dynamic posing and action. Check out some CLAMP manga for some pretty epic splashes.