My Version Of Fateweaver In MS Paint

This is the version of fateweaver that i did in MS paint. It is by far my best work in paint. Constructive critisism is welcome!

PS: I Put her on a yellow background so everything else stands out more.

Thats better than anything Ive ever done, looks cool!

thx.....what do the rest of you think?

The shoes could use some work and I'd bet if you had tried some more you could have added some sheen to her...But this is good.

i wanna know what eiichiro thinks.....cus hes hella good in paint

You're getting much better! I can see a bit of the technique I usually use (though slighty more solid than mine - which is extremely sketchy most of the time).

Again, studying proprotions is a good thing (it can get a bit difficult if you're drawing a very LARGE picture since MSPaint can't zoom out any more than 1x) the head looks very good and the body is shaping out nicely, but as you get lower down the body proportions look to go a little out of whack.

Definately improving, don't ever tell yourself you can't get better. Practice, Practice, Practice!

I like it but a red backround would be more Arachnos looking and I think the Weaver will still pop.