Capt. Starfall from Virtue (Art)


Antihiro

 

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In celebration of finals week and all of the other things I SHOULD be working on...

Here's Capt. Starfall.

This was much more fun than working on my ten-page essay.

Comment away!


 

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That is incredible.

I can't even begin to fathom how you got that pose, but seriously, it's amazing.


 

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O.o

Nice !!!

I love it, I love the pose and the pencils, I love the colours.

5 stars.


 

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Very nice! I love the pseudo-realism of it. Fantastic!


 

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Superb!


 

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Cool. And the morphed background is awesome. He is really flying off that page!


 

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WOW!!


 

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Nice!


 

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Really cool .. I love the pose and the shade you accomplished with pencils. Bravo.


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That looks spectacular. Great job!


 

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Those are some great pencils. Some of the best I've seen.

Great job!


 

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Fantabulous!


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Thanks so much everybody!

I think this is the first time that no one's mentioned any flaws. I don't think you guys are trying hard enough. Points to someone who can find an "oops"...or two...or...

I can't WAIT 'til Xmas so I can unwrap my Prismacolor marker set that Santa's been hiding in the hall closet! THEN the art's going to be REALLY good.


 

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Ah, did you want a critique?


 

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Would love to critique but, I looked it over again and ... well for the medium used and what I assume you were trying to do ... this is really great. I don't see anything wrong with the pencils or the coloring really.

Even the star that holds the cape on his left shoulder is a little back because the shoulder is rolled back due to his flight position. I love how you made the feet peek in the back, it would have looked kinda funny had we not seen them. No, as I said, really nice.


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I was going to say that pose is awesome, or that you've done a great job with the pencils, but everyone else beat me to it :/
Nice work.


 

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Awsome


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YAY! No one sees it! Theres an error...yes there is. It's got nothing to do with the coloring technique. Don't make me give hints!


 

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[ QUOTE ]
Thanks so much everybody!

I think this is the first time that no one's mentioned any flaws. I don't think you guys are trying hard enough. Points to someone who can find an "oops"...or two...or...

I can't WAIT 'til Xmas so I can unwrap my Prismacolor marker set that Santa's been hiding in the hall closet! THEN the art's going to be REALLY good.

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Well if your really looking for mistakes.....lets see....Aha! The symbol on the back of his left boot isn't outlined in black like the other one! *gasps of shock* Seriously though, like I said, looks great!


 

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Heh! Even III didn't catch that one! *Goes to fix it.* But that's not it. Points anyway though.


 

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damnit man what is? is it the cape? it it the gauntlet going past the elbow? is it the lack of an elbow? what??

Not I'm nit picking a great piece!
GAH!
*runs and hides*


 

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[ QUOTE ]
YAY! No one sees it! Theres an error...yes there is. It's got nothing to do with the coloring technique. Don't make me give hints!

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The hair should be blowing back since he is moving forward and it is blowing sideways? But even that is possible.

Or maybe as someone mentionned .. the right arm looks a little funky. There is no real elbow, the forearm kinda bends in the middle and the part near where the elbow should be is bigger than his bicep.

His left eye lacks precision ... it looks more like a blur ...

The star on his left shoulder should probably be a little flater ... it is kinda sticking up too much ...

And the left hand only has 2 fingers !!!

just kidding ... it's fine !!

Don't tell and no one will notice.


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Hehe! I KNEW I could get criticisms outta ya guys somehow!

But really, the comment about the two fingers thing is the closest...It's about that tricky.