Ok, gotcha. A little Harry Potter for my tastes but not bad. Though I got the chills after imagining Reqium going boom
But...but... The End? *whimpers*
Seriously, cheers to you Wolffe, and I can't wait until your next project. I'll write with you anytime!
My little Michael grew up.
Together we entered a city of strangers, we made it a city of friends, and we leave it a City of Heroes. - Sweet_Sarah
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This is one of the greatest stories ever told. I miss myself already! You crafted a story with a characters from different people and made them into one group of people under your control. I commend you forever.
*tears start to well in eyes*
Story all gone.....
Must find something else to do other than wait for updates...
Maybe I sould go play CoH?
Maybe I should finally get a toon to 50 after 8 months....
Top story dude. Shout out when you start you next project.
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Wow... Amazing Wolffe as glad as I am that there is some closure... I'm sad that there isn't anymore to read ;_;. Again, Great job. Hope you do it again sometime :P
Field
Job well done I'd say...
It was a good story, and you managed to juggle the characters of all those who volunteered nicely. Though perhaps, on a next project and you want volunteers, it might be better to keep the group smaller, and to pick those who lucked out with this one ;D
Though Tech did develop a little different now in the Whitmoore already.
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Great story, sorry to see it end. I would love for you to use Lord Raymond in another one of your stories anytime.
Thanks for writing it.
*sniffles* it was an awesome story. Very nice Blood Wolffe!
I shall miss the feeling of joy when i'd seen a new post under here, hoping over with the glee of a child at christmas to read the next chapter.
Thanks everybody. Your support and advice helped so much in this. It took over 6 months (6 months 4 days to be exact) to finish but I enjoyed every bit. I looked through all the comments on it (not just to stroke my ego I swear) to appreciate how much support I got and realized it was huge.
I decided on no epilogue. I like it with its open ending. Not to say you cant decide what your character did afterwards. If you even want to post your character's epilogue, be my guest. Kind of like an open RP but please limit it to one or two posts. I thought I have held the reins enough. That and I am focusing on the next story.
Thanks again,
BW
Edit: Oh yeah, most viewed Fanfic! Woo hoo!
Well how am I suposed to write a story for an epilogue if I still want you to use my character in your next story?
More like a summary, like this...
Statues were raised for Tick-Tok and Blood Wolffe. Nothing big, they wouldnt have wanted that. They were made the way the people closest to them remembered them. Not as they died but how they lived. The artists were told to capture their best qualities. Tick-Tok as a young man, genius, kind, and always looking to the future. Blood Wolffe as he was when Captain Neem remembered him, wild, free, and fiercely loyal.
The next story will be in the present day anyways. Not related to this one. If you want you can PM me what you want said, I can brush it up.
Will do wolffe.
The Epilogue of Lord Raymond
After the defeat of The Center and the end of the war, Raymond thought he had finally reearned his honor after so many years of banishment. He wondered if anyone would recognize him anyways, after all his conditions had worsened over time and his body was now completely made of stone.
When Raymond arrived in London he went straight to where the palace had been. But to his suprise the Palace looked as though it had long since been destroyed by The Council.
A man walked by on the street and noticed Raymond staring at the mountain of rubble that had once represented everything in the world to him.
"I say, you're that chap from the news, aren't you? Lord Raymond isn't it? The news said that you claim to be Royalty, and that you have not been in England for well over 20 years. Is that right?"
"Yes, yes it is..."
Raymond had begun to cry.
"Cheer up ya old bugga, if you're telling the truth then you're King!"
"Wha...good gracious are you serious!?!?"
"There is only one person left who actually knew the real Lord Raymond, he is the son of Lord Raymond's old butler. Franklin's his name."
"Franklin! Do you know where I can find this man?"
"Sure I do, Franklin is my dad. He's a bit of hero here, some people are saying he ought to be King. He led the underground resistance here after the Royal Family was killed," the man said as he led Raymond to large house a few miles away from where the palace had been. It was Raymond's house before he was banished. It only remained standing because The Council thought it had been completely vacated, making it the perfect place for the resistance to form.
The young man stepped in first, and was welcomed by his father. When Lord Raymond came in, Franklin fell to his knees.
"Your Majesty!" Franklin shouted.
Everyone else in the room looked around in astonishment.
"You fools, can't you see who this is! He is your King! King Raymond, sole remaining member of the British Royal Family!"
Immediately people began to drop to one knee.
"King Raymond," Franklin said, "You have regained your honor and are gladly welcomed to your throne."
Raymond broke down, it was too much for him, he had worked so hard to get what he now had, and now he didn't want it.
"Franklin, I cannot accept the crown..."
"Why not?"
"I was not here when my people needed me most, I am no King."
"But sir, please reconsider..."
"Franklin!" Lord Raymond bellowed, "I will not be your King! In fact you will not speak of me coming here!"
"But sir..."
"If anyone asks of the hero who claimed to be Lord Raymond, tell them that it was just some superhero nut-job running around in armor. Hence forth you are to be King Franklin!"
And with that Raymond turned and flew out the door. As he was flying tears rained from his eyes.
"I guess I ought head back to America and help them all with the rebuilding."
When Raymond arrived in America he went to Captain Neem without his old costume, in just a pair of blue jeans, and no shirt, showing his solid rock torso, and most importantly no mask. He had never been seen without the mask since he was first banished.
"Greetings, I just arrived from England, I am looking to help rebuild."
"Well what powers do you have besides your rock body?"
"Thats it, although I have been pretty good with an axe in the past, oh and I can fly. Thats all though."
Raymond could tell Neem knew who he was, and that Neem could tell the Raymond was trying to make a new Identity for himself.
"Well then Ra...sir, what are you calling yourself?" asked Neem.
"Uhh...Granite, yes thats it, Granite is my name."
"Well Granite, welcome to the rebuilding process, I hope your powers can be put to as good a use as the last man I knew with those powers."
"Yes sir, let's hope."
WOOOT!!! Good Story, I remember when you were asking people if they wanted in...aahhh.
EPILAWG
xyfen sat down on a rock. Micheal walked up to him. He remembered when he helped him with outcasts outide a bar.
"sup, man..Take a seat."
"But its a rock."
"well pretend its a seat." Micheal sat down, finally able to rest.
"...We have any water?" Yelled Xyfen. Someone had thrown him a cantine.
"People are so nice sometimes" Micheal laughed. xyfen then opened up the cantiine and proceeded to poor the contest over himself. everyone that watched was shocked to see xyfen's green pigment melt away revealing rugular colored skin.
"Wait a minute.....but...Why didn't you just do that to get into the club."
"well.....I wouldn't be here right now, would i?" Xyfen took off his goggles he had stolen a while back and wiped off the rest of green.
"So..anymore secrets?" tabby cat had walked up to them.
"Well, sorry to diddapoint you but, my name is actually Kenny Lebowits. really im just on the run from some people....Man, thats corny...." He got up. He bade everyone a goodbye. He then found micheal's council pistol.
"You keepin this?" Kenny asked micheal.
"Why would you want it?"
"Well you see....I need some cash and-"
"fine..Take it"
"Hehe, thanks...Well everyone..So long, and thanks for all the...Stuff, or something like that." He flew up into the sky. He had some babies to punch.......................I just ruined it right then didnt i? great....You laughed......(READ THE NOOBS GUIDE OR I WILL PUT A LIT CIGARETTE IN YOUR EAR)
Little epilogue for Tech...
It was over, finally. The years of hell had come to an end right there in that chamber. Of course, they would have to make sure the machine was destroyed properly, but that job was for another. He looked around a bit and hmmed "It's going to take a lot of time for this place to rebuild itself... but people managed in the past." he stated, softly. A hand came down on his shoulder and Mister H stepped to his side.
"Sure going to... But there'll be people, and heroes, and maybe you?"
Tech chuckled and mmhed "No, it's time for another generation to take over from here."
"Pity," said H, "We could really use someone like you to guide the newcomers."
"Oh..." the man added after a moment "We found this jammed into the access panel of the doorway by that weird machine. Thought you might want it back or something?"
Joseph looked confused as he took the item and blinked "But I didn't..." Too late though, H had already walked off to Steele and Michael. He turned the thing over, polishing off the grime with a thumb. On one end there was the insignia of the council, on the back a scratched symbol of a small spider... A little token from an old friend.
With a kick, Tech flew up into the air, looking around a bit before he departed.
....
"Hello, this is techsupport, what seems to be your problem." The man said to the person calling him.
"Yes," A female voice said "I'm afraid I have an error on my computer here that doesn't seem to make sense at all."
Engineer Wills swivveled his chair back a bit. It was an interesting, and somewhat familiar voice "Allright miss, could you please tell me the exact wording of this message?"
"Well," she started "Says here, Firey Feline on the keyboard, please seek assistance with hard to find doofus."
Joseph startled, and almost spewed his coffee across his computer "Cat... Katherine?... How... When..."
"Don't sweat it Joe..." Katherine answered on the other end "Just meet me at the little restaurant in front of Wolffe Square, and we can finally finish that date we started so long ago."
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So you writing any new stories for us any time soon?
Well, there is this one. I havent written for it in a while but Im working on it. A very different feel from this one I think.
Two years ago I started something that grew much bigger than I could have ever imagined. A few weeks ago I decided to look back at the first story I ever wrote for fun. Much to my surprise it was very close to the 5000 hot topic mark. So I checked it every now and then (I know, it affected the score, but not by much in the grand scheme) and now I have hit it.
Thanks to everybody who read it. I learned a lot and it was a lot of fun to write and has inspired me to pursue it as a career. This pushes me to write more, and I will get back to my latest story, pillar of war. Promise. This, while I am writing my first novel.
Until then, Woot! Most read fan fic!
I wants a new story by Blood_Wolffe, And you can use one of my characters again if you'd like. I remember readin this while you were writing it, the anticipation of waiting on each chapter to be put up...
On second thought, don't write anything ever again, I almost died from the suspense last time, and I'm alot older now, I couldn't handle it.
Willpower has more passive regen than Regen does. Who thought that was a good idea?
Can we get a fix for Energy Melee instead of more new sets?
I didnt really explain that one good. It was love for the fellow hero. That family bond. Love is the strongest power. Cant be hate with more hate kind of deal. I didnt want to delve to far into it at the risk of sounding too corny.
By the way, since this project was so big, I will be doing a small epilogue to properly thank all the people who volunteered their characters and helped me along the way.