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other than the fact that you have often "killed off" your character,

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All i see from this is that you hold a grudge for something that happened in the past,witch i believe is nothing short of childish

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Rather than attack us or our comments, why not ask how your plot and writing can be improved? It takes a lot more strength and guts to stand up and say "okay, how can I do better?" than it does to react in the manner you did.


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perhaps it didnt occur to you i would have done just that if you hadnt replied in that way,the fact that you made a puplic post insulting my writing and implying it needs to be better...or even,dare i say it "as good as yours". Was quite upsetting in a way,as i used to respect you as a person and roleplayer.

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Next time, I probably won't bother with your post, your plot, or your characters

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i sincerely hope not,good day to you.

Thanks for your comments guys,not asked for but appreciated.My apologies sincerely if its not up to standard.

And shes not unbelieveably stupid,if thats what you saw,rather crazy more like.

now maybe this wasn;t up to your standard of the perfect post,and maybe i'm overreacting,but was there any need to dig at
a) my writing skills and
b)my characters intelligence.

now this wasnt meant to win best post of the year,it was however meant to advertise something i had hoped to bring to Galaxy Girl,and it astounds me that intelligent people such as yourselves cannot even wait to see what was happening before being so judgemental.

Next time,either be a little less critical with your replies,or keep your comments to yourself,as i dont recall asking for them in the first place.

Once again i'm sorry if i wasted your time with my not good enough posts,and i sincerely apologise if i am exaggerating.

Police were astonished today to find the severed bodies of many local citizens and even more astounded to find the killer nowhere in sight or in the immediate vacinity.

The murders have been confined to the Galaxy city area,and locals have being quoted on mentioning a woman who calls herself "Dancing With Swords",we'll keep you updated as soon as news comes throught to us.

((please excuse spelling mistakes,for those GGers who are interested this is what happened to Leo when he was sent on a quest for his soul back..enjoy!))


"after everything,you bring me here?" Leo looked confused,which was unfortunately a cliched sensation,lately.

"yes,your feelings cloud your vision,on the path to righteousness,there must be no obstacles." replied one of the elder beings.

Leo had forgotten which one was which.they all looked the same,huge balls of glowy energy that resonated [censored] about peace and righteousness.but,he had agreed to fulfill they're needs before he could ask they're help,and help was what Leo Rayne needed most at the moment.
leo looked around,he was standing at the monumental statue of galaxy girl,the time he was unsure of,getting darker,so around 5. the people were familiar too, the most recognisable,his ex-loved one, athena. the deja vu didnt end there,the elder beings had taken him to a very familiar day,the day his demon half had lost control nd attacked a number of people,before being subdued.and he was being forced to re-live it,as a test to prove he was worthy of their help.

"we trust you recognise the scene"questioned one of the beings.

"well...yeah,don't know why your bringing me here though"he lied,he knew exactly what
was gonna happen on this night.

an elder being glowed,they're equivlanet of a smile and Leo knew they would give no more of an explanation,the female elder being,who had remained silent through the ordeals waved a tendril of energy gracefully and sent leo hurtling into the reality of that night,face to face with his demon self.

The demon growled and looked in awe,dazed only momentarily before throwing a fiery punch that knocked leo to the ground. Bruised but not beaten Leo kicked at the ankle of the beast,sending it to the ground with a thud.struggling to its feet the beast threw another punch that leo caught and used to twist his arm around and disable him.

Pulling the anointed athame he had earlier being given by the elder beings,he plunged it deep into his adversarys heart.For a moment there was silence,which seemed louder than the scream of pain that came from the demon,who vanished in a painful eruption of fire and brimstone...then the unexpected happened,Leo wasn't pulled back into his own reality.
He looked around for a sign but saw only the horrifed eyes of Athena,who opened her mouth to speak,the first time he had heard her voice for so long.

"he wasn't.....he could of being saved"

"trust me,its for the best,he'll only cause pain" leo tried to keep his voice steady,but feared he did not succeed.

Athena said nothing more,her hands glowed with energy and she lunged for leos chest.
oh god he thought they don't want me to fight me,they want me to fight her.

"NO!" he shouted ,before being knocked to the floor, Athena lunged again but leo held her in place with a mind manipulating barrier,lost in her own thoughts,it gave him time to think.
shes not real.he reminded himself.
taking the athame into his right hand he brought himself to his feet and held it to her chest.

Then,he stabbed.

the world around crumbled into nothingness before magically re-forming itself in the present day.
The elder beings hovered aroun him once more.

"did i...did that just happen" asked leo,close to tears.

"no," replied an elder being "it was merely an alternate dimension,it will have no effect on the real world.

"but,i...i..killed her"

"no,you didn't," assured another being.

Leo wanted to lash out but knew it would be no good,he merely fell to his knees and wept.

"it isnt over,Leo Rayne,more is to come"the being laughed to himself and faded away,followed by the others,leaving Leo alone.....again.

Pretty self explanatory,hoping to begin at about 8am negotiable to about 9am.

level range is 16-23.

If you wanna bring a higher char who needs the badge that'd be great,save us dawdling about.

Think the title is pretty self explanatory,if your interested list here,sorry bout the time,but i can only really negotiate this to 9 at the maxmum,i have something of great importance to do.

Happy Holidays y'all,know its a bit late but have a good un .

you can count me in on the 27th,if ya need a hand then gimme a bell,look forawrd to it

volc

Cap au Diable? what an interesting choice of scenery,but how this got into the hands of yourself you ponder, oh well you'll just have to go there to fin out says Shadow

((consider me there if i can make it,and i dont see a reason why not))

The plan is that instead of epic pools we get the patron system,which is choosing one of recluses followers to ..follow. i expect there are lots of benefits to this,probably epic powers as well.i think thats way better then just a couple of pools.

understood wordy and hopefully let bi-gones be bi-gones

public apology time so sorry all iu got way too carried away

but of ocurse,meeting tonight off then, btw ghost i only did this cos i won't be coming back,almost undoubtedly now,just not enough time on my hands

anyway it was nice while it lasted, g'bye folks

*found written on the wall at freedom corps,it insists that heros who meet at glaxy ggirl promptly follow these instructions*

Hello,heroes,

you may or may not have guessed but it is i mephisopheles,who is communicating with you.

if you ever want to see the children,or leo raynes soul ever again,then you shall meet me at galaxy girl at 8 of the clock, be there,or they'll be mine forver.

*the words glow an acidic green*

i'll be well impressed if you can guess where these are from:

Belthazor
lurconis
anyanka

halfrek
kulak

right i'll begin then:


Leo rayne aquires his powers and his red demeanor,plus horns and on the date of the 5th of november,becomes guy fawkes,master of mind and fire

the inner demon that gives leo his power begins to become seen and heard by the company of galaxy girls statue,his clsoe friends worry.

Leo professes hisl ove to the radiant athenas hand,causing her to shun him over the demonic possession becoming so frequent,leo is devastated.

the demon takes full control and a huge fight breaks out,many insults that hurt many people are thrown by guy fawkes in this state,with one last word he is killed by the woman hel oves and his best friend Molok.

spends 100 years in torment in hell,he manages to break free but the arch-demon mephistopheles or missionary,follows him to earth

leo rayne comes to galaxy girl after a hundred years of searching and is reunited with his friends,he and a select few know the danger him being there presents when missionary is still searching.

Right then folks,i'll be blunt,i'm very bored and decided to make this post in honour of all the roleplayers in the entire world. god bless em.

every character i have ever met has had a backstory and hundreds of adentures before them,so i'd like to request roleplayers come on here,and make a timeline of events that have happened to their character(s)

thanks for your time

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the king started to talk to them telekenetically,



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King holds them together telekinetically, he must talk to them telepathically mate,

Tele-mind
Kinetic-to move

so telekinesis is moving things with ones mind

Hey there guys

i'm posting this cos i think i made a big mistake in putting my main on defiant as i love to roleplay,howver at the time i bought the game i hadnt even heard of RPing.

so i made a new supergroup, Justice Seekers Inc. for all the roleplayers on Defiant that dont want to have to trawl over to union to go rping,when CoV arrives (probably tommorow) I'll begin base building and we can have a good time on our server..witch,contrary to poular bleief ISN'T that boring.

TTFN

REalising the previous post was quite frankly a complete mess i have decided to redo it and persuade all magic heroes who are searching for a supergroup to consider joining.

i founded the cosmic allegiance very soon after purachasing the game and (qutie obsessivley lol) tend to be on it alot so if ever online and needing help with a mish ,tf or just wanting to have a laugh then i would be happy to oblige.

We take any archetypes and levels but are only accepting magic heroes unless a miagic hero i meet will not join without his/her friend hu isnt am agic in which case i will be happy to allow them to join.

send a tell to Volcanos and i will gladly accept.



-Volcanos lvl 21 magic controller

Greetings to all my fellow magic heroes

i am volcanos.founder of the cosmic allegiance and wish for you to join us in the eternal struggle against evil.

our main foes are the circle of thorns and tsoo but we wish to fight against any evil.

if any magic hero is interested let i volcanos know and i will not hesitate to add you to the group.

Volcanos lvl19 magic controller