FireBrandi

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FireBrandi and Majesty - I'll have to check out those links later. Little eyes watching and somehow i don't trust you guys!


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You don't trust me? :sniff: you hurt my feelings

The only way to make it up to me is by puttin me in some nice art

Happy Birthday Harlen


Unfortunatly for TA this is a timed thread. If he does not complete the objective (make a thank-you post) before the time runs out he will fail this thread, and his contact will eat the cake that was for him.

Happy Birthday TA

HB

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It's a TA plot.

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Always.....er never......er sometimes.....



What i mean to say is ...

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If the staff fits

In color? But what if a character is only in black and white? Like Ghost Widow doing the Scream?

Very nice, adding to watch list

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That's a cool design, but will a woman made of hard light ever lose her costume!?

Seriously, cool bio.

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Someone starts making shadowpuppets.

Cool character. hmm... Infanette would indicate she is a little inifinity. What the heck is a mini-inifinite? Or does it just mean she is just like infinity, just cuter?

Yes, they are all from the Praetorian earth. All those AV's and their minions are Praetorians.


Which all happen to be unlockable for use in MA missions. Anyone wanna try to take on the evil Freedom Phalanx in one shot?

How about Praetorian versions of PCs? Explore the possibilities of the evil (or good) versions of people's characters.

Praetorian TA - minion of Nemesis who thinks all art is a pointless waste of time

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Wow, what is his DA gallery?

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http://playworkart.deviantart.com/

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Excellent! Thanks

Wow, what is his DA gallery?

damn.. so sorry I missed this.

Have to say though, Ms Liberty looked calm, but she was realy just lagged so bad.

I'm voting Lousy-Day

Well at least I think it looks pretty cool when totmoartsstudio does Spiriticus

ok, I've updated my arc a bit. Might not be enough to get the cherrished 5th star, but every bit helps. Thanks again for the review.

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Arc Name: Getting to know Oneself
Arc ID: 41625
Faction: Neutral
Creator Global/Forum Name: @FireBrandi
Difficulty Level: Medium
Length: 4 missions
Synopsis: Help the Midnight Club investigate the mysterious links that connect one Hero to others out there. You find there is greater significance to this link that suspected as well as a danger.

One EB and one AV, there is an ally to help with the AV so it can be soloed. No kill-all, so you can skip right to objectives to finish quickly.

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Running this with Lvl 50 Ill/Rad Controller.


Overall this was a really good story arc. The custom group was good, but didn't serve much of a purpose as a group. We didn't learn much about them, just a little about their EB that you fight at the end. The main problem with the arc is that it seems like a story about your contact rather than a story that you take part in (if that makes any sense). You are forced into playing the backstory of your contact. It is still a good arc, but that is going to keep it from a 5 star rating from me.

4 stars.

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Thanks for the critique. I'll work on improving it. Add some dialog from the custom group on their missions to flesh them out more, include a few of them in the third to help tie it together, and more explanation of what they are in the intro for final mission.

The mystery of the links is supposed to be applicable to just about any character, I should insert some references to links detected in the person going on the missions to clear that up, and bring them in more. After all, it could happen to YOU next time

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uh oh... you do realize what this means.

Now TA needs to get EVERY ONE OF HIS COMMISSIONS REDONE!! All that artwork shows the old TA, now he needs a gallery of the new TA.

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Glad I wasn't the only one thinking it

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firebugs think alike

uh oh... you do realize what this means.

Now TA needs to get EVERY ONE OF HIS COMMISSIONS REDONE!! All that artwork shows the old TA, now he needs a gallery of the new TA.

Its the author name, which makes it easy to search for to find the arc

commissioned this back in January, along with two others. Just got the first one today. It came out pretty good tho

FireBrandi by DarkVanessa

oohhh.. thats nice

Actually I got more villains than heroes.

Arc Name: Getting to know Oneself
Arc ID: 41625
Faction: Neutral
Creator Global/Forum Name: @FireBrandi
Difficulty Level: Medium
Length: 4 missions
Synopsis: Help the Midnight Club investigate the mysterious links that connect one Hero to others out there. You find there is greater significance to this link that suspected as well as a danger.

One EB and one AV, there is an ally to help with the AV so it can be soloed. No kill-all, so you can skip right to objectives to finish quickly.

police
pirates
soccer hooligans
vikings
elementals

Got the other three commissions from John's $7 sale. For this price, damn they are good!

Spiriticus
FireBrandi
Kim Paler