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And here's my newest arc:
Arc Name: Ashley Porter and the Gorilla War
Arc ID: 130809
Faction: Heroic (or, perhaps, anti-fascist villains in 1941.)
Creator Global/Forum Name: suedenim
Difficulty Level: Medium. Not intended to be super-difficult, but be warned, there is an Elite Boss at the end.
Tags: [SFMA][HRMA][MWMA]
Synopsis:
An adaptation of the classic 1938 film
Ashley Porter and the Gorilla War (see also:
Ashley Porter Diamond Anniversary Special.)
[/ QUOTE ]pretty good, i sent this as a comment but gonna say it again, dialog was a bit long and end boss was VERY tough, good otherwise
Arc Name: Put an End to the S.P.E.C.
Arc ID: 140220
Faction: Arachnos, 1970's Arachnos, custom enemies
Creator Global/Forum Name: @PownUnoobs
Difficulty Level: This works at any difficulty depending on the toon
Synopsis: Instead of doing an origin for my character Lord Porkluse, I decided to have you fight his creators instead. You will join Agent Steve in his quest to bring them down.
Estimated Time to Play: 30+ depending on the toon(s)
just finished working this arc out....enjoy
also, if any qualms you have with it are bugs, please wait to rate me till it can be fixed, but if it bites, rate me down
edit: i ran yours because you followed the rules when no recent posters had, and yours hadn't been tackled
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I think a review is supposed to be a little more in depth, but maybe that's just me.
Ok since you're all sticklers for the rules and the fact I got a 2 star because I made my final map a little too big and the person was too impatient to complete my mission I'll give a basic review of your missions. Thankfully I was a Night Widow with Super Speed and Stealth because I wanted to get this mission over with.
Mission 1: *** stars
I understand what you were trying to do with oroboros time-travel by making me de-level. It have to say this was one of the more enjoyable missions because other than the malefactor I wasn't as annoyed as I was with 2-4
Mission 2: ** stars
Ok, this was a bug, but the final computer was stuck behind a wall. The real problem I had with this is the whole "leave no witnesses" it's a small map so it wasn't a huge deal, but it seems like for a Heroic quest you wouldn't want to wipe out everyone in sight.
Mission 3: * stars
These aren't the canisters you're looking for. Again annoying and horrible, the PPD drones die way to quickly to be of any help. Thankfully I have superspeed and Stealth, I would not want to fight through all those enemies looking for a canister only to find it's the wrong one. The "SPECS" looked al lthe same which I thought needs some work, maybe like at least 2 versions that look kinda different. It left a lot to be desired when a bunch of little SPECS came after me.
Mission: 0 stars
Huge map, annoying amount of objectives. You made the same mistake as me by choosing this map and putting in a rescue target. I gave up when I realised when I foguht the boss and realised this was jsut gonig to get more-and-more annoying.
I understand you were trying for comedy with this but the dialogue needs some work as well "My machines are destoryed! I'm Mad!" Really?
Overall it seems like you were trying not to make a chuckle or a serious game but a mission that was what annoying it about. And if that was your mission than be glad sir, because you succeeded.
Overall: ** stars
Other Notes:
I can understand what you were trying to do with this and some tricks were exactly how I did them in my arc. However it still needs a bit of work not to be a pain to play.
I'll repost my mission again, I hope you're as brutally honest with mine as I was with this one.
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Might as well post mine, nobody will play it but if anyone does I would like to know so I know to do more stories
Legacy of a Dragon Chapter 1: A Demon's Maid
Arc ID: 138053
Morality: Neutral
Length: Long
This is ment to be played with a group however on challenge difficulty 1 it can be soloable with some cleverness
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